Starting in 1950

When I wrote Chapter 143, the protagonist took the initiative to donate the 70 kilograms of gold he found. I knew that the golden body of the protagonist was coming, and the author was going to become a saint. He was so enlightened 👍👍👍. Actually, the author, you are still too conservative. You should clearly report the secret of the protagonist's golden finger to the motherland, so that everyone can work together to maximize the ability of the golden finger. , Contribute to the construction of the motherland, such as backpack space, etc., You can go abroad to buy important supplies, and you can also use the whole country to recharge the protagonist's golden finger with US dollars to help the protagonist upgrade, and then let the motherland develop at a very fast speed, and it can sweep the world without waiting until 2025. So, the author, you are aware but not enough, half-covering it, which seems extremely uncomfortable

In the 1950s, I was still working in a flour mill in Shenyang, Northeast China. As the rear area after entering the DPRK, I didn't have that sense of the current situation in the rear area. The writing was like a parallel world.

There are a lot of flaws in the plot. Some minor mistakes in the early stage are tolerable, but it becomes more and more difficult to break down after entering the court. I don't know what the author wants to achieve by going through so much trouble. Are you really planning to let Lao Jin unify the peninsula? If we go back to history, making so many unreasonable "innovations" will not only reduce the logic of the article and greatly reduce the reader's sense of involvement, but may also make the reader feel that it is all meaningless. So what is the purpose of all this? Both the protagonist's purpose and the author's purpose puzzled me.

I think the author is really insulting the reader's intelligence. An eagle crashed straight into the plane and was not killed. And it is an aircraft flying at high speed in the sky.

The most important thing about military rations is survival. Instant noodles are large in size and have low transportation efficiency, and their energy is not high enough. It is better to make compressed biscuits than to make instant noodles.

I originally wanted to order all of them, but I decided not to do so when I saw the instant noodles! At that time, we had our own canned meat, canned vegetables, and various canned goods. 79% Of the canned food in the country was supplied to the Korean War to Resist U. S. Aggression and Aid Korea. Instant noodles are better than fried noodles, but what's the difference between them and Soviet soda crackers?

I saw the latest chapter, chapter 34, and the plot is pretty good. I hope the author can keep it up like this. It's really hard to find books now.

Two hours after the mushroom bomb exploded successfully, Qian Sanqiang was taken away to the PD, and three days later he was sent to the countryside for rehabilitation. As for the reason for the transformation and the main messenger behind it, if you are interested, you can check the information. The detailed introduction cannot be posted here.

War plots are boring. To put it bluntly, there are too many war stories. What you write, author, is not competitive at all. Find out where the competitiveness of your novel lies.

First of all, the protagonist's death requires killing to gain experience, but now only R can have experience, and then a good knife is needed to survive; the early writing was full of excitement, but now it has been forced to stop, and it has to change the daily life; I only need to think of the ancestors on the front line who suffered heavy casualties and were precarious, and our "good protagonist" is just a salted fish after eating and drinking every day in the rear, I have no motivation to watch anymore.