
Just Eighteen, the Middle-Aged Magician Counterattacks the System.
刚十八,中年魔法师逆袭系统来了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 96k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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6Fans
44Chapters
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Every time the protagonist is shocked, he has to stay there for a while, and then he reacts after being reminded. Can't he go home and watch it by himself? It must be in a place with people.
It's a bit confusing, take Chapter 40 for example. This chapter has almost no content. In the first half of the chapter, everyone reacted, why shouldn't it end here? You actually want the noble to apologize? The second half of the chapter introduces mental coercion + the protagonist's reaction "Is that all?", With two noisy dialogues in the middle, such as "You are too proud" and "You actually asked the nobles to apologize". One chapter is gone, and I can't even start the fight.
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A bit bland
After reading the first thirty chapters, I felt that the plot was too bland. Let's talk about Golden Finger first. Golden Finger is a dislocation system, but the rewards given are currently very boring, such as first-level spells, second-level spells, and small props. It feels like something that can be obtained with a little effort and luck. It provides some help to the protagonist, but it is not significant. The article clearly states that the protagonist's talents are average, but most of the things given by Goldfinger are specific spells. The protagonist's Muggle sense is a bit strong, like an old computer with new games installed. The concentration potion mentioned in the article has not seen much improvement in talent so far. As for the characters, the three most important female characters are currently appearing? Two witches and a saint (in the future) have not been described yet, and there are no memorable points. They give people the impression that they are ordinary people who will become powerful in the future. The key is that the description of the future also makes people have no sense of expectation. Dislocation would have spoiled the future story and made people have a sense of expectation, but the "spoilers" about the future of these female characters did not give me much sense of expectation. The protagonist also said that he wanted to hug his thigh, but he didn't see any obvious action so far. Finally, there is the plot. The content of the first thirty chapters is relatively simple. The protagonist's talent makes it difficult to pass the promotion test, but he can pass the test by completing a series of tasks released by Golden Finger and receiving rewards. There are some simple slap-in-the-face stories, and you can get to know the talented people in the future. It feels like a story about plain water and no seasoning. There are no enemies in the main line. The protagonist lacks a sense of urgency, but at the same time, there is nothing outstanding in daily life. I wanted to see the growth but could not see any obvious development.
The duel scene made me want to vomit
Time travel investigator
Investigation report: "No." -531 Investigation target: "Just eighteen, the middle-aged magician counterattacks the system." - Male protagonist - [Arthur] Investigation result: [Reincarnation] Judgment basis: Abnormal characteristics: Pass through A Yue investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the travel situations of travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know the travel situations of travelers in this world in advance, and volunteers to provide observers with fast travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay on January 27, 2026