
Mobile Restaurant in the Underground City
地下城的移动餐厅
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 207k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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0Monthly votes
994Recommends
29Fans
95Chapters
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The further you go, the better it looks, just like turning on Lingzhi
Some suggestions
I feel that the pace of the previous chapters is too fast, and the motivations are a bit homogeneous. I saved once and then a second time. Next time, the author can think more about the motivations of the characters' actions, and then there can be some emotional scenes for the characters, but not too many. It seems that there is no growth at all when I am moved.
It looks pretty good, but the results are a bit poor. The author needs to hold on. It doesn't matter if the first book doesn't get good grades. If you have the idea of doing it part-time, think of it as building fans and write it well.
Recommend new books to each other during the same period
Fantasy theme, novel setting, similar to soul search and defeat
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Look, it looks good, come on!
A few problems. As a business novel, there are too many adventurous parts, and the protagonist is too embarrassed. Generally, the protagonist is half-screened when he is a shop owner, so he should be more relaxed. Moreover, the toad does not have the appearance of a restaurant. It is not as good as the Mimic Tavern I read before, which can directly mimic the tavern. It cannot be seen from the appearance.