Sequence: God of Creation

The introduction to doomsday web articles has a common feature: the protagonist's system has been upgraded and is far ahead of others. There is competition and cooperation, there are highs and lows, there are joys and sorrows, and that is what makes a good article. A cool article will not be a good article.

The biggest problem is the issue of worldview. Sequences and abilities are just a matter of changing skins for each character. The big frame problem of the world map is basically flawed no matter how it is written. The following represents my own opinion. First, the question of how ordinary people can survive in the early stage follows the team. If you don't understand, you can watch the video. There are people who like to ride and people who like to hike. Look at all the people. Isn't it enough for people to eat, drink and rest throughout the day? Normally, people with strong bodies play this. How do old people, children, and women live? In my opinion, more than 50% of people should be awakened by this sequence. But more than 90% is garbage. For example, serial civilians. Just a Qi and blood enhancement. To put it bluntly, it gives people physical strength. Many of these can be justified. Second, it's weird for ordinary people to take out garbage. In my opinion, the lowest level can definitely be beaten. For example, zombies use fire🔥, electricity, etc. I did not mention the legends about black dog blood, garlic, child urine, rooster blood, etc. Thermal power is the most basic. Isn't it a joke to be afraid of light? Early stage. In the early stage, even if you can set the zombie's blood to 100, you can drop 1 blood point every time you hit it. This can be done but it is not right to change hands. In my opinion, there are two artifacts in the early stage, the Molotov cocktail and the electric baton. Then there's the team funding, right? The ones used in the car are all wrong. Has the author seen flood relief and so on? What kind of truck are they using? Can carry people and deliver goods. The most important thing is that it can exist as a functional car. Third, for example, the fleet has 2 to 3 trucks. Dongfeng electric hybrid is fine. No need for a big trailer. It can solve the problem of electricity and water. Electricity can be generator, solar power, human power generation, etc. It can solve some electrical problems. The same goes for water, you can use an air water dispenser. Smallest cup size. Finally planting, many vegetables only cost more than 30. This is a recyclable resource. Functional Trucks 2 to 3. For a team it's more important than anything else. Let's talk about matter. What is hard currency. Sugar, salt, medicine, vitamins. Better to use than grain. After half a year, the collected materials are basically useless. If nothing new comes out, don't write. Ridiculous. There are compressed biscuits in your house. Carrying it for many years. The illnesses written about are too similar. World map time point problem. What were you looking for in the 1980s and 1990s? You are now 26 years old. What's in the room, what's in the street. Electrical appliances, mobile phones, chargers and batteries. Isn't the electrical problem the first thing a mechanic should solve with this thing? Batteries are charged uniformly. Processing solution. Solve electrical problems. The better you write the basic worldview, the less likely you will have to worry about it. In my opinion, it is a cool article. I didn't say that Shuangwen is not good. A knife of 999 will make you feel better. Isn't there a serious problem with Shuangwen's logic? The key is to be able to play with flowers without having to hang up a dual sequence. In my opinion, the first one is weird online and sequential online. If I want to reach level 4, it will be the limit. World upgrading cannot be used to soar all at once. If you want to play to level 9, you can give the second book. Sequences too. Why do you say it's skin? Adding a skill is a feature. If you use it well, you don't need to hang it up at all. Let me give you an example. Come on, let's take the credit knife sequence. There are regional characteristics. The only sequence, online level 1. Don't force it. 2 Skills, the first is borrowing and returning. Secondary life items are strengthened. It's not difficult to understand whether it's borrowed or not. Credit knife man. Use contract. Help those who have not yet awakened to awaken quickly. They awaken and you can learn skills from their awakened abilities. 9 Online. Enough for you to have fun. Why do you need 2 skills when you have nothing to pick up? Life items are strengthened. To put it bluntly, it is 3-in-1, 5-in-1, and 9-in-1 of similar items. CDs are different. It's just an inferior artifact. Garbage in the garbage does weak damage. But there is. Useful to people. There are 9 templates. This sequence is not enough. All the way up to level 1 of the sequence, you can create a myriad of changes. This is what I mean by the more stable the design, the less likely it is to hang. Useless. There are too many questions to discuss. Come on!

Change the soup but not the medicine, it's all the same without any new ideas.

Since you also have the world as your background, you shouldn't have all Chinese names, or write your power system in Chinese style, something that's neither Chinese nor Western.

What's going on, 🍅Invasion Starting Point is classified as science fiction?

The second time I came in to see it, I still couldn't stand it. There was a reason for the constant petty abuse and low grades.

It looks good, I'm reading it now, support, support, support

The protagonist's abilities, rare objects, and space are too general. It's obvious that it can be written with great pleasure, but I just don't use it.

The story is very long, the world is huge, and the protagonist has a long way to go. I will try my best to write this story well. In short, I hope everyone likes it!

I originally wanted to read it after seeing the introduction, but when I looked at the past works, I found 3 books and 2 eunuchs, one of which is being updated. So far, the data is just like that. You don't even have a completed book! Who dares to believe that the book you are updating is not a eunuch. No matter what the results are, first get a completed work with more than a million words, so that readers will have confidence and will not stop reading.

After reading dozens of chapters, I understand why so few people read it. The descriptions of various extraordinary abilities are very vague. Even the supporting characters are not the main characters. They are always written from God's perspective. Readers have been confused for a year.

Energy points and experience points are mixed up, and the writing is messy, and the writing on the extraordinary team is not good either.

Wouldn't it be nice to write about some strange beasts, like mechanical beasts and mechanical hearts? The combination of these two elements looks too strange.

Why do I have a familiar feeling? The name is "Doomsday Escape Sequence" and the protagonist is named Chu Sheng.

Brother Hui is here for a visit

It is recommended not to use AI. If you use it, there will be situations where the substitution cannot be made, and it cannot be used as a reference.

Riding a tricycle to keep up with cars in the apocalypse? Good guy, totally beyond imagination