The Number One Player in the Dragon Clan

They have never described the reality. You can't stay in the game all day long. It says that as long as you pass the exam, you can become Xia Mi's senior. Doesn't that mean that Xia Mi has been repeating the grade? Those who start playing later can still become seniors below. Isn't the world fluid?

Grain, but there are many problems, probably because the author is a newbie. The first point is that the protagonist you wrote is too vulgar. You should at least write it in a normal way and not act like you have never seen a woman before. The second point is the issue of female protagonists. Dragon fanfics are essentially romance novels, and everyone is basically looking for a female supporting role. You'd better decide on a female protagonist quickly. The third point is that the rhythm of your writing is a bit messy. One moment you are in high school, the next you are running to Chu Tianjiao, and then you are running to fight the dungeon. Everyone seems to think that the fandom really wants to kill Herzog, but you write it to death as soon as you start, because the rhythm is too fast. Then he went to Sheqi Bajia so early. Have you really thought about how to write it? Dragon Clan itself has so little content. If you introduce all that so early, how should you write it later?

Just don't be a nanny. Many Dragon Clan movies that don't have Lu Mingfei as the protagonist are all acting as a nanny for him. Lu Mingfei can't help him up at all

At present, it seems to be an excellent source of food, and the inspiration may come from the Soul Palace book. The only shortcoming at present is that the game settings are not clear, and you may need to figure it out, such as the word spirit part, such as how to obtain the initial word spirit (such as the difference between the gay friend and the male protagonist, what is the range if it is self-selected?). In addition, the time of the word spirit is not clear (whether the time countdown of the word spirit is based on the use time or directly by owning the world, and whether it will disappear after the time is over, and what will happen if there is no word spirit when it disappears, these are not clarified).

I voted, I want to watch the emotional scene with Xia Mi 🙂

Have you ever been a dragon? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Not limited to: game props, spirit spirits, player names, novel settings, NPC names, sidekicks, etc. Plagiarizing inspiration from time to time (It is really brain-burning to think about the settings of this game by myself, there are too many dragon traps😭😭😭)

Isn't Hu the single heroine? Why should the popular girl from the original work be accepted? Chen Motong, Xia Mi, Nanny Tuan, Hui Liyi, and so on. Keep an eye on it and wait until the author hesitates before deciding whether to read it or not.

Caesar takes Odin's emblem as if he were returning home, Pompeii is Macallan/Odin/Prince/nido/Bondarev, there is no way Odin could kill his own son. The author had better write a patch later to explain. For example, Kungunir's goal is the protagonist from the beginning, and fighting Caesar is just a show. (If the author does not use the setting of "Dragon King", it is best to mention it in the introduction)

Who are the heroines of the author?

I haven't read it yet, so I'll post it first to see what's going on.

No, why does this book look so much like The Number One Player in Soul Palace

Recommend books

The cover of the book shows two people with red hair and one in white clothes, so it's Emi Nono and Eri? By the way, are you okay with long legs and potato chips?

Currently, I have caught up with the latest chapter of 89, and I feel pretty good about it. In order to make up for some parts of the original game that are gamified, some patches have been added, such as the word spirit bit, which is quite interesting. But when I first watched it, I felt that the setting was a little unclear. The overall plot is pretty good, it's not about tying up Ming Fei or just playing Cassel, which is a bonus. The protagonist is also quite fun, his thinking is relatively flexible, and he is not an old-fashioned person. He is one of the few people with normal thinking. I am also looking forward to the follow-up development, but for this kind of online game, there should be small groups or organizations in the later stage, and I hope there will be wonderful supporting roles (the kind with brains and no bloody routines)

The creativity is good, but the writing style needs to be improved.

Lu Mingfei? Fans of younger brothers and younger sisters? If you are sure someone is not here, just call him bad boy

The author has a question. If this novel has nothing to do with the game and reality, and the game is just a pure game (that is, it is not the kind of game that becomes a reality or is later transported into the game), then it feels a bit strange to write a relationship scene, because the characters in it are all fake. After all, most people may not be able to accept falling in love with data (I am like this anyway). Of course, I hope there will be a female protagonist and some emotional scenes. It would be better as long as there are not too many female protagonists.

A plot flow, dedicated to following various plots, the intelligence history in this game, various mission side plots, and being a player who specializes in following the plot. B technical flow, who is well aware of the various skill genres in the game, their game skills are strong enough, and have a good understanding of the skill responses in the game, and can create their own skills. C intelligence flow player, the protagonist is very familiar with various intelligence in the game before rebirth, and often hangs out in forums to look at these future game information. D treasure hunting flow, player, the protagonist knows enough about the adventure treasures of various great players before rebirth, and specializes in intercepting other people's treasures for his own use. To be honest, my biggest feeling when reading this book is that the protagonist does not look like a rebirth player. Of course, it is possible that the protagonist was a gangster player before he was reborn, and he just ran with him in the game. He didn't care about the plot, main and side tasks, strength improvement, skill learning, and mission plots in the game. He just came to see various NPC game characters! First of all, the first point is experience and technology. The protagonist is a reborn person. So where is the experience he gained during the extra years he lived? You have lived in the game for so long in advance, where is the game technology? After watching NPC game characters for so long, don't you have any resistance to those women? So how low was the strength in the previous life? How can a low-level skill make you so excited with past life experience? And to be honest, the second thing is that the protagonist really doesn't understand those NPCs at all. It feels like he has never communicated with NPCs in his previous life. He actually has no understanding of the NPC's degree of aliveness or AI activation! After returning from rebirth, the first thing I wanted to do was to get Chu Tianjiao's box. I was able to complete the errand and almost failed to complete it. No, since you are not completely sure about this part of the memory before rebirth, why do you have to play with it? To be honest, I feel that after the protagonist is reborn, he has no qualms about using the memories before his rebirth! There is no problem for you to use the memory of rebirth to play games, but the problem is that you knew the password before rebirth, how can you know it after rebirth? Not to mention anything else, when you first enter the other world and interact with the captain of the execution department, when someone wants to tell you the password, you just go up and open it yourself. To be honest, is it a big deal to wait for the other party to finish saying these few sentences of password? Is it that urgent? When he finished speaking, there was still no problem, and there was logic and reason. You don't do any pre-work, you forcefully get the final result, and then open it directly. To be honest, if someone adjusts the game monitoring, if it is discovered, you will know the password directly, and you will probably go to jail directly. Rationalizing the memories before your rebirth so that they can appear in your mind for a reason is a necessary cognition for reborn people. Obviously there is no preamble, you already know the hunter website, you know the location of Caesar, and directly force the use of two unknown numbers in the game. Forcibly replacing one is not the only start for you, especially for you, the information on this matter is not high enough. You must know that for the reborn, the early start is the only period where there is no butterfly effect and is not contaminated by one's own information. Therefore, at this time, the more comprehensive the information is, the more credible it is. First, use the information that you are fully aware of, and then use the ambiguous information and information that is not completely known! At the beginning, I went to find someone who had no idea about the mission process. He didn't even know where the mission was. Moreover, he directly introduced off-site factors into the game. It can be said that if he was really a reborn person, this would be a complete collapse of the game, forcibly cutting off more than half of his advantage as a reborn person! He obviously has the information advantage of being reborn, but in the end he has to find a place without intelligence to face unknown dangers!

Polite self-recommendation, Dragon Clan fan "Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's Restarting Life". If you are interested in reading it, welcome critical comments🙏🙏🙏 Friends who like Dragon Clan can come to criticize and give advice, and communicate more

The road of virtual online games is not easy, come on

It's okay, but the audience will be smaller due to the restricted subject matter.

It's a little bit low, just keep it for now and come back after a while

Not bad, but I have a few questions for the author The first point is that the protagonist revealed his ability to resurrect after death in front of Chu Zihang. The setting says that within half a year, the mixed-race forces will discover the special features of the player and recruit the player. How is the player's identity set? In the eyes of the mixed-race forces, are those players themselves mixed-races, but suddenly one day awakened to the ability to resurrect after death, or did they discover that a group of mixed-races suddenly appeared in the world, and they all have the ability to resurrect after death? If it's the latter, then did Chu Zihang find out that the protagonist lied to him? Second point, what are Su Xiaoqiang's follow-up arrangements? You made it clear before that she is an ordinary person and would not associate her with mixed races. But now that she has entered Kassel College, how should she deal with this problem? Can she become a school janitor? Third point, what if there is a player who, instead of fighting monsters and upgrading, intends to be a fun-loving person, directly makes thousands of copies of "Dragon" and sends them to the protagonist's secret party, the Kassel Academy, and the eight Sheqi families?

In other words, the shelves are updated twice a day?