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Who did you learn this from? From the beginning, a lot of people ridiculed and scolded the protagonist, making the protagonist look like a piece of stinky meat in June. Wherever he left it, a swarm of flies rushed to bite him! Either it was done on purpose for the sake of word count.

Many novels follow this routine, like children playing house

This introduction is exactly the same as the one in 1984.

I can't stand it after more than a dozen pictures. The main character is as cowardly as a dog. You are writing a novel, not asking the author to write down his own character.

Brother, in 1983, the Shanghai brand 12-horsepower diesel engine cost at least 900---1,000 yuan, and the marine one was even more expensive. So you wrote 480, can't you check the information?

I can't stand it anymore. Anyone can step on the hero's feet. I give up.

Do some research on fish prices to make them more reliable

This thing was written without thinking, so please don't read it with any thinking🤐

Why are there eight out of ten books now where the protagonists are all about the rebirth of a gangster, regretting the story of the previous family's demise? Nowadays, people who read novels are ordinary people. How could there be so many gangsters?

Change the name to Yaya's eating routine. Seriously, cut it bro.

The template is applied, and the content of each picture is similar, like AI text

Why are there fewer and fewer? Do you want the eunuch to come?

It's really too wordy

He's even more hateful than my dog. It's awesome.

It is normal for Xiaohai to get up at two or three o'clock and go to sea. It takes time to go to the beach, sail the boat into the sea, and remove the cage. You have to come back to the shore at 5:30 at the latest, because you have to clear and mend the cage to sell. When you go out at 4 o'clock, there will be nothing left. It is not clear to the old fisherman.

Just poison it, and no one will say a word when it's poisoned

Let's copy this one from 1984 Little Fishing Island

I find someone to rent a boat to go to sea, pay the rent, and then give me a share. Why do I write it like this? Is it really that I have too much money and no place to spend it?