Don't Retreat When You Encounter a Yandere

Gua! Fast forward to the scene where the protagonist, arrogant and arrogant, orders the gloomy and yandere lady Ji as she should, and is beaten to the point where she kneels down to do it⭐️😡🍐!

Sometimes when typing fast, there may be some typos and wrong sentences. Although I will read it again every time and correct it, there will inevitably be omissions, so I hope you can mark them for me when you see them.

Have you ever met a yandere? You just write randomly and take it for granted😜

Capital Flow Disease Jiaowen, that's awesome

Advantages: A very bold development, starting with a maid cafe, and specifically recruiting yanderes, and using the system to show the ending of the yandere (such as exhaustion and death) Disadvantages: not yandere enough and messy, the character design is not extreme enough, and even a bit pitiful. And before the first character is written, I can't wait to start writing other characters Characters such as yandere should be reflected in the details. They are ruthless enough in one aspect, and the feeling of danger and love coexist At the same time, as the person who subdues the yandere, the male protagonist should have some way to control the yandere, and fight wits or courage with the yandere But the actual situation is completely the development of a normal love story, not yandere enough Summary: The writing of this article is good, and the story development is acceptable. But it's not yandere-y enough, so forget it because it's just for this.

Can you not use the setting of soul travel?

Come on, fewer comments means there's nothing wrong with it 🤭

It's very nice. Where is the author?

Have you ever been to Tokyo? Just write about Tokyo, of course!

Cut? 🤔What's going on?

The paragraphs are too scattered, and complete sentences are forcibly broken into several sentences, which makes it more tiring to read.