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Let me talk about my personal highlights: 1. The relationship progresses very quickly. 2. The ninja killer used in the extraordinary system is too niche. I feel that not many people even know the joke. 3. The protagonist self-destructs his vest, but the author said this is not a behind-the-scenes article, so it depends on personal feelings. 4. The daily part becomes more and more boring with more and more female protagonists. 5. The content performance of the extraordinary part also plummets, and there are too many flashes of swords. 6. When I arrived at Heian Kyo, I really couldn't stand it anymore. It was so boring and watery, and the beginning was also speechless. One of the heroines' souls was suddenly sucked in, and then the hero said he couldn't get it out. It's not like you were playing with that world for so long and you went to explore it. Then you couldn't even bring someone's soul back. Although you knew it was to let the protagonist enter the dungeon, the reason was too ridiculous, and the protagonist's character really fell down.

The emotional line is also too fast, and the small ambiguous scenes are okay, but it really doesn't need to be so fast.

Why did you choose ninja as your profession? There is nothing to say about the ninjas in Naruto. Not only does this traditional ninja have a low upper limit, it seems that it is not qualified. There is also the clasping of hands and bowing before every fight. It is a ninja gimmick. People who don't understand it will just think it has no meaning. It seems that the fight that is more enjoyable has been stopped.

After reading about a hundred chapters, do you know why you are not so popular with the Hokage skin? Because your setting is too petty. If you want to use the Shinhwa skin, you have to wear a famous ninja skin. To be honest, my expectations have plummeted to the bottom.

This type of book can't escape the same routine. It starts with targeting gangsters and fraud cults, and then slowly progresses to killing the police and the army. In fact, not many of those politicians died, only low-level citizens.

In Chapter 150, the protagonist directly blew up his vest and was alone. After reading this paragraph, I quit, wrote this comment, and then removed it from the bookshelf.

The content of Ninja is just okay. I don't want to read it on a daily basis. There are so many women, it's like a running list, and they are all "easy girls" carved out of the same template. It's very boring. This is the first book with a theme that suits my taste that doesn't have any obvious poisonous points but makes me unable to persevere.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that we have inherited the etiquette and skills of our ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen say. However, Poujie cannot get royalties and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it.

Some of the little poisonous points in the front can still be chewed, but suddenly all the vests are revealed to be one person, which is a bit too low-priced. It seems that the protagonist acted like a clown by directing and acting. It can be regarded as a cool point to explode one or two vests. I don't know what the meaning of writing like this is.

Since it is a faction of masterminds behind the scenes, they hide their tails tightly and spread suspicion while leaking secrets casually, just like a schizophrenic.

This emotional line is too rough. I have never seen Liu Huangshu so rough. Not only is it disgusting, but it also sacrifices the plot benefits brought by the emotional line. It could have been a natural one, but it makes the protagonist look like a stallion who can't control his lower body. The image of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are completely destroyed. How can this establish the character image? Each one is the same as what comes out of the mold. The author still needs to practice his writing skills. It is really not possible to read a few light novels to learn from the emotional drama.

After being released, the chapter revealed all its identities without any warning. What happened? Didn't this kill the excitement flowing behind the scenes? It changed from mysterious to crazy, from dark and real to madman's raving, you are kidding me, you bastard! I decided on 50 chapters and now I regret it very much

It is incomparable to Tokyo Fantasy Daily. The style is a typical Japanese light novel style, and the protagonist's character is also very classic. Asasi, a second grader, was weak in the early stage, and his IQ was within the range of ordinary people. In the early stage, he also made a lot of loopholes due to personality problems. I'm sorry for the setting of two parents with high IQs.

Is there a Shen Nong? Why does this beginning look so similar to that Uncle is Don Quixote?

That novel should be among the top three in its genre, and it was really enjoyable to read. The male protagonist is decisive in dealing with disgusting people, and he is also very gentle and responsible towards his students and friends. Unfortunately, I have read the latest chapter, and I am currently looking for novels of the same type to read.

It can only be said that it is becoming less and less interesting. If you write about the United States and not about China, you might as well not write about it in the first place. This is also a common problem in this type of novels. Even now, I still can't see anything in the main line. I want to skip the daily titles at a glance. Except that the beginning is interesting, the more you write later, the more boring it becomes. Why can only the beginning of this type of novels be read. In the middle or later stages, they all die suddenly, and the emotional line is not interesting either.

A common pain point of this type of solipsistic novel that is not a pseudo-spiritual revival flow is that it has a weak main line, and the reader cannot grasp the context of the plot development at all, and cannot generate a sense of expectation. The same is true for the Levi's book next door. When I looked at it, I thought it had been transferred to the sports channel.

It seems that the specific era is not written. Once the changed cognition comes out, it is a bit boring. Invincibility is too fast, and doing things is childish. Sometimes you kill people, sometimes you don't kill. Why do you have to use fire escape every time you do it? Do you deliberately let others know that you are extraordinary? What kind of plot can you write behind this thing, where you go out to do heroic things every day? Use ninjas to make a career? Build a ninja organization or something. If you build a samurai or something, build a dojo, you can also attract a group of disciples. Ninjas who are shady are boring. In another era, the status of ancient ninjas was even lower, so the theme was not chosen well.

So far, the proportion of the main plot is too low. Exhausted from watching. Even if four chapters are updated in one day, it will only cover 1-2 chapters of the main plot. Daily emotional dramas are of the highest level and are actually boring. I can't stand it anymore after booking now, Sayonara.

Not interesting. If you are a self-centered person and still engage in vests, you might as well spread the word about the extraordinary mastermind behind it.

Japan revealed the secrets of ninja training. It was very funny after knowing the truth. After all, it is reality and there is no way! As for the protagonist in your novel, he really has extraordinary abilities, but he does funny things like a real-life ninja! Chapter 8: Complaints. The system can directly create things, and I got a piece of gold. I also gave the protagonist's fire escape the reason of insufficient ether, which was not decent. Are you tired of measuring the progress of the protagonist's strength? If you can't control the progress, you can simply try your best to stabilize the impact of the protagonist's invincibility plot.

After seeing the latest version, it seems that the protagonist just picks up girls and improves his skills at the same time. Daily love is not sweet enough, and the unparalleled monster grinding is quite boring. The plot has no sense of expectation.

There are too many daily routines, and there is also the ancient writing method of one person playing two roles, which is very embarrassing.

Every month I vote for you. When will the big event happen?

Okay, it's okay now. It's invincible all at once. It's not very attractive. I like this kind of gradual upgrade. I only have 4 monthly votes. I voted for them all. Please update more, otherwise it will die after a while.

I really like the extraordinary part. But the emotional line is said to be an emotional line but there is no emotion at all. For free. Very poorly written. When I was really happy watching the previous one because of the extraordinary part, the next one gave me a lot of fun. It made me not want to watch anymore.

There are too many women, which seriously affects the viewing experience of the plot.

It's a rare article that contains the element of killing and killing. I give it to you with 19 monthly tickets. I hope it can be longer

Wow wow wow wow! Must become a flat party! Does having plumpness make this person noble? No! No! No! He can only remain in the position of a barbarian forever, and there is no essential difference from the Feng Shui Master of the Snow Village Dojo, Luo Gong Rin! And the only ones who shoulder the mission of peace are us, who are from Setagaya District and the retainers of Rakunomiya! We Luo Palace retainers are loyal and loyal! The descendants of the people have been ruling Tokyo in the flat class for hundreds of years! Our flatness will definitely continue, and we will forever dominate the fullness of those who do not understand tradition and are like barbarians! I will maintain eternal flatness, and under the guidance of Lord·of·Blast, the descendant of the great Flat OverLord, I will go to the thousand-year kingdom filled with flatness! Go to New·Flat·Order!

Four updates a day. You deserve to be popular. I just need to add a little more information on the protagonist's method of obtaining information. After all, the protagonist's method of finding targets cannot just rely on sight and hearing. How many people who should be killed will be let go.