Martial Saint in Troubled Times: Starting by Grinding Proficiency

I took advantage of the limited exemption and saw the latest chapter. The review is that I can read it. The story and writing are good, and there are no obvious poisonous points. The disadvantage is that it is a bit abusive to the leader. The combat power is too high since the blood exchange, and the city wall is destroyed at every turn. How can you write next? There are too many masters on the scene, and it seems that the protagonist is still a minion even if he cheats. He has to be saved by others at critical moments, and he narrowly escapes death several times. This was written many years ago. It is a bit inconsistent with the taste of current readers and will greatly weaken the sense of enjoyment. The reality is already very depressing, so the novel must be enjoyable enough. Don't be a literary genius and want to write something in-depth. That is something that only great minds would consider, because they have a readership base. Nowadays, the popular way of writing is that the protagonist is confident, steady and Taoist, cheating and practicing, hiding trump cards, the enemy misjudges, kills the enemy and seizes the treasure, and the passers-by are shocked. This cycle can be written endlessly. Don't be afraid of old routines, as long as they are easy to use, you can introduce new ones in terms of character relationships and world view. Xiaobai Shuang's articles have the largest audience, because the largest base is always Xiaobai readers. The author must first make money to survive. Keep up the good work!

The protagonist killed Gao and got more than a dozen pills. I didn't see any mention of the protagonist taking the medicine to speed up the progress. He got more than a dozen taels by being affiliated with a power. I didn't see the protagonist buying medicine to speed up the progress. The protagonist is currently aware that there is an enemy with bone forging, and seems to be practicing martial arts in a leisurely manner. Has the golden finger of God rewarded the hard work and changed the protagonist's personality?

Let's talk about the advantages first. During the bone forging period, the part where you go outside the city to crush the flying knife was quite enjoyable. The rest of the points where revenge doesn't take overnight are also good. Areas that need improvement, such as 1. The protagonist can sometimes ambush and attack, but the protagonist cannot. When beating the Wei family masters, the protagonist stood in the alley and did not make a sneak attack. He stood there and waited for them to react before fighting. This was a bit arrogant. Most people would not think that the protagonist was handsome or stable, but would just think that the protagonist was not very smart. (I hope the protagonist can have the spirit of the "Lime" Martial Saint) 2. There are also corpses. Sometimes the protagonist doesn't touch the corpse after killing. Even if there is nothing special, you should briefly write about the protagonist searching it or doing a quick search to find some miscellaneous items or silver coins. 3. As for the prescriptions, the protagonist's martial arts prescriptions and his sister's home remedies shouldn't become popular, right? Then why did the protagonist directly show the prescription to the pharmacy clerk instead of buying the medicinal ingredients and going back to prepare them according to the measurements. 4. What is the use of silver? Whether it can buy some martial arts elixirs or weapon secrets, skills and martial arts, and the price are almost never mentioned in the novel. The protagonist did not buy these things even when he was rich, nor did he want to learn more about them. I hope the author will think about it carefully. I have already read it all.

Although bad guys have lived forever since ancient times. Good people rarely live in peace. . Since you have a plug-in. Then we need to have three correct views. Kill if you have to. In troubled times, be ruthless. Just like the ancestor Zhu Yuanzhang, he killed corrupt officials in the world and was afraid of them.

In the previous state, one had to fight hand-to-hand, but in the latter state, one has to directly transform into cultivating immortals. The range of a skill ranges from hundreds to thousands of miles. Isn't this span a bit big? ? Excuse me, is the logic reasonable?

I have also read a lot of martial arts novels. The writing and plot of this novel are good. I have also seen many similar plots that I have read, but there are innovations that are not exactly the same. It is considered a good product, but it is not a high-quality one. Because the soul of the protagonist is still missing, the male protagonist is a bit fragmented. At first, I thought he was a warrior, a chivalrous, and an upright protagonist with a chivalrous spirit. However, the subsequent plot description seemed a bit out of place. For example, in the scene where the third senior brother is found to be a pig, it seems that he is afraid of being associated with the word "Mother" and deliberately writes it to be alienated and indifferent? But in fact, it is no longer indifferent, it is cold-blooded, inhumane, and boring to watch. This description is not handled well. Even Wang Tengfei, who had a grudge against the protagonist, was freed. However, the unrelated victims did not receive any treatment from the protagonist. They were ignored, struggled to survive, and finally starved to death. Did the poor man bring it upon himself? Not from the protagonist's point of view, he was just very talented and was killed miserably, but since the protagonist found out, he just ignored it. I had read a similar martial arts novel before, and it also contained this plot. The protagonist was even colder than this, and I sympathized with him and gave him some relief. Not to mention this part of the plot can actually be developed, but this part makes the character image inconsistent with the previous one, making it appear too cold-blooded, and the character cannot stand up, which is a pity.

Martial arts training. The body tempering realm, the blood exchange realm, the inner training realm, and the dragon transformation realm, four major realms appear in one scene. It's taboo

There are quite a lot of realms, but the protagonist is weak and slow. In the early stage, countless realms are revealed at once. The protagonist is still in the body-refining stage and is slowly grinding away.

Why are they all Qi and blood martial arts, and they still consume resources?

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