Time Travel Simultaneously Starting from Bone King

Who taught you to write all the memories in the six chapters of Dragon Clan?

In the world of Bone King, there is no one who can destroy a city by himself. The protagonist is already the ceiling.

The setting is a bit abstract. Firstly, the author ignores the setting that the natives have a level upper limit. Secondly, the author calculates levels separately for the legal profession and the combat profession. The result is that the protagonist's legal profession is 40 + combat profession is 40 = the total level is 40. According to the author's setting, the protagonist can theoretically have 100 magic skills + 100 combat skills, but the total level is still 100.

Author, this is not a Sims article. You are between 0 and 18 years old. Why did you write it?

Is this carrying forward the fine tradition of the Bone King, gathering so much power, and fighting the air with wits and courage?

The more I read, the more boring it becomes. I have been writing about a medieval magic world here. The content of the novel is completely inconsistent with the title and introduction of the novel. Author, your novel on this subject must also write the story of the protagonist in another world. Your writing method is completely wrong.

Chapter 90! There are more than a dozen chapters about the Dragon Clan, and 6 chapters are still memories! The rest are all bone kings, so you might as well write fanfics instead of doujinshi.

After reading it, not to mention the other self-made characters, the popular female character in the original work was eliminated. The future witch of the country, the princess of the Kingdom of Imperia, Keno, evaporated directly. The author did not say that the protagonist was replaced, and just disappeared Could it be done like this in the future? You can't say that Keno is not an expert in Overlord, right? There are only three popular side stories in the whole side story, Dragon King of the Rotten Coffin, Suzuki Satoru, and Keno. It seems that the protagonist is on the right path, and there are no good guys at once I want to see Overlord. I thought I had entered northern Myanmar. Where did my vampire loli go? Even those who are counting on the same story are not happy. There are more than 40 chapters written about one person. Those who don't know the Overlord side story just don't read it. Those who know the Overlord side story think it's not interesting enough. There is a lack of key characters. I didn't expect to delete the important characters directly. I don't understand the intention of doing this 😰

The author should stop writing about war in the future. Meow wrote some embarrassing ones and skipped them directly. The extreme rescue again. Alas, it will collapse soon. It is the light in the desperate situation. I'm afraid you are not Ultraman.

Overall, the writing is very streamlined, especially the emotional scenes, which are like a primary school student's diary.

Taking the King of the Undead as the main world, there is no main plot, the audience is too small, sharing power all the time, and playing solo is too boring. The entire sea of ​​dead fire is stronger than this

There are two ways to write about simultaneous time travel, one is to finish one world and then go to the next world, and the other is to write multiple worlds interspersed. To be honest, I prefer the former, because it's very organized, and it's easier to jump into a world you don't like. The author can also use this to control the number of people who travel together, so as not to make the protagonist who travels to a world with a low power level instantly invincible and have nothing to write about. Of course, choosing the latter can also anchor a world with high levels of popularity and power. Put more perspective on it, so it won't be too messy. The author's problem is not that one world is too long or that the world is not changed, but that the world is very boring. The protagonist is too early in the timeline and was not even born in the country of destruction, let alone other popular characters. Once the interaction with popular characters is lost, the world becomes semi-original, and the meaning of writing fan fiction is lost. A world with a medium to high level of power (a popular work) like Bone King is best placed in the middle of the book. At this time, the first few protagonists have also developed. Once shared, the protagonist will have the power to fight against the Great Tomb, and can directly participate in the main story. However, the author neither follows the main story of Bone King nor the Gaiden of Suzuki Satoru, but the main story of Gaiden. It is difficult to criticize.

It's too slow and not exciting enough. Every time I feel like I'm going to explode, I end up feeling discouraged. It's too watery. I like to fill in the water when it comes to Qidian light novels.

Golden Dragon Path Myth 10 directly provides various immune data and various damage bonuses, and Angel Path directly provides various group resurrection buffs.

The author can refer to it to prevent the collapse of combat power

Leylin? I blindly guessed that there was Coiling Dragon Leilin behind him, and the real name of Qinghuo, the lower main god of the Dzogchen Fire Element, seemed to be Leilin.

It feels weird. It's supposed to be a cool article, but the writing style isn't very good or something. It doesn't have that flavor.

Shape Moon Magic, Magic, and Artificial Heroic Spirits can basically create a bunch of servants that are equivalent to dungeon boosts.

After traveling to OVERLORD, he began to join the Great Underground Tomb of Nazarick. He grew and grew crazily and imitated Warhammer to create his own domain guardians and soldiers. After traveling through time, he thought that he was the top strongman in the world, an alien species with an almost unlimited lifespan, and could play whatever he wanted. He first made a human vest to brutally unify the humans in the northwest corner with absolute force, so the kingdom was farmed and managed. Then, there was a wave of demonic invasion in the Central Continent. As a result, far away from the grassland where the Salik Underground Tomb is located, a gate actually appeared. As a result, modern armed humans emerged from it, speaking Japanese, Self-Defense Forces?

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Leylin Faslis Inberon Justice value: 100 [Neutral ~ Good] Race level: Dragon Blood Warrior (Level 1)————10Lv Dragon Blood Warrior (Level 2)————10Lv Dragon Blood Warrior (Level 3)————10Lv Dragon Blood Warrior (Level 4)———— 10Lv Dragon Blood Warrior (Level 5)————10Lv Dragon Blood Warrior (Level 6)————10Lv Dragon Blood Warrior (Level 7)————10Lv Dragon Blood Warrior (Level 8)————10Lv Dragon Blood Warrior (Level 9)————10Lv Dragon Blood Warrior (Sanctuary)————10Lv Professional level: Law comprehender (light weight)——10Lv Law perceiver (power of heaven and earth)——10Lv Law perceiver (1% mysterious)——10Lv Total level: Race level + professional level = 130Lv —— HP (physical strength): 150% MP (magic power): 150% Physical attack: 150% Physical defense: 150% Agility: 150% Magic attack: 150% Magic defense: 150% Comprehensive resistance: 150% Speciality:? ? ?

Objectively speaking, the moral standard of the Bone King is definitely above the average in his original world. Even the Eight Desire Kings can be said to be good people because they want to rule the world rather than destroy it. On the contrary, the six gods are either true saints or the worst capitalists. Their original world is the ultimate bald eagle.

Leylin Faslis Inberon Justice value: 100 [Neutral ~ Good] Race level: Dragonborn (Mixed race)————15Lv Mixed race (Border breakthrough)————10Lv King of Bronze and Fire (Quan)————5Lv God Second son (Númenórean)——10Lv Frozen Dragon (Infancy)————10Lv Frozen Dragon (Juvenile)————10Lv Frozen Dragon (Adult)————10Lv Professional Level: Mysterious Inheriter of the Five Realms————10 Lv Five Worlds Combat Inheriter——————10Lv Element Controller (Fire)————5Lv Space Controller————————5Lv Total Level: Race Level + Occupation Level=100Lv —— HP (Physical Strength ): 130% MP (magic): 130% Physical attack: 130% Physical defense: 130% Agility: 130% Magic attack: 130% Magic defense: 130% Comprehensive resistance: 130% Speciality:? ? ?

It is said that the author has updated more than 10,000 people every day since it was released, so why not here?

What is the value of a protagonist without strong enemies?

Can you answer the previous question?

It feels very suitable for the world of Bone King

. Xingyue Magic Technology, the Four Dragon Kings of the Dragon Clan, Jobless Reincarnation, etc. Digimon, Pokemon Dragon Characteristics

I have written a new book, "Traveling Simultaneously from the Shape Moon", with more than 100,000 words. If you are interested, you can read it.

I ran out of ideas, and after thinking about it for a few days, I couldn't figure out the next plot direction. It's not impossible to write it down, but it would be pure watering down, so I will end it here. The Xingyue chapter is not completed, but the Overlord chapter is completed. Let's just treat this book as only the Overlord chapter.