Infinite Stitching, I Cannot Describe It

That's right, because I've been dropping collections recently, and there seems to be something wrong with the writing. I have an outline and a writing plan. This book will still be written at my own pace, but there are problems that cannot be ignored, especially those that appear in the first tens of thousands of words. I know you are not obligated to say more, but I still beg you to leave some suggestions before canceling the collection. Newbies write books and are not conceited. I just don't want to write behind closed doors. Under the premise of a deep understanding of "commercial literature is to meet the needs of readers", I want to listen to readers' suggestions to improve myself. You can say anything, even being sharp is no problem. I will improve it.

Look, it looks good, it looks good! Support support support!

The main character's name is a scandal, but changing it now would be betraying the existing readers. This is my fault. I can only make sure that the next book is more popular. I will try my best to improve the content of this book. I'm sorry everyone.

I think the biggest problem is nothing else but the threshold of understanding - the name of the protagonist and the world view you designed are only understandable by you. The cost of understanding for readers is very high. I couldn't even imagine what your world is like after reading the beginning, whether it is a wasteland, a weird world, or something like that. You have to make it based on a typical world view. Just like the name, you have to choose from words we know, otherwise how can we understand it?

The name of the main character was chosen by someone. If you're not used to it, just don't read it.

Reading the introduction reminded me of MC's brittle bone syndrome, where organs can also be replaced.