Dragon Clan: Ci Lu Ming Fei

This book is good, the writing is excellent, and the writing is powerful but not clumsy. I hope the author will continue to write.

Let me first ask how to write the plot of Ryu Er. Current fandoms that do not accept Xia Mi will basically not write it once they meet Ryu Er. The perspective will directly shift to Chu Xia's emotional line, making the original protagonist become a camera curb. When I read a fanfic, I just want to see the protagonist. I don't have any objection to Chu Zihang's protagonist's perspective being put on Chu Xia. But the protagonist is obviously not Chu Zihang, but as soon as Long Er comes to Long Er, he only writes about Chu Xia, and the writing is so ugly, so you Long Er won't also change Chu Xia's perspective and write about it. My suggestion is that if you don't plan to include Chu Xia's line, just use less words and ink as a hidden line. Don't write a lot of Chu Xia's stories, and then let the protagonist be the camera.

The writing is not like the Dragon Clan, but like the novel "The Dragon Clan" with the Dragon Clan as the background.

The author has limited imagination, so if you have any interesting and interesting entries, you can post them here!

Is it a prisoner novel with a single female protagonist or a sequel?

By the way, could the earthquake mentioned in the original novel be caused by Xia Mi secretly?

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It's well written, but too short.

By the way, Lu Mingfei's alchemy talent is so high, why doesn't he become an apprentice to the vice principal? After all, although Old Tang is stronger in alchemy, he may not be able to perform much before his memory is restored, and it will be difficult to be friends after his memory is restored.

Personally, I think it can be set that Su Xiaoyan has bronze and fire bloodlines but is in a recessive state. This can explain why Chu Zihang's speech spirit comes from the bronze and fire lineage Jun Yan instead of the sky and wind lineage.

It didn't express the feeling of Lu Mingfei hiding in the lion's eyes 😃

After finally bypassing the hurdle of Tianyan Academy, something as outrageous as Fuxi Bone came out right away. The world view of the original work was completely destroyed. If Tianyan Academy is considered a normal second creation, the fact that Fuxi is higher than the Black King is like using the original setting as toilet paper. The setting of the dragon clan is that all myths originate from dragons, and dragons originate from the Black King. It's really outrageous to create a mythical thing that is higher than the Black King. What's even more outrageous is that this book has already established that Lu Mingfei is the Black King and is the origin of the dragon clan in the original work. In this context, something that overwhelms the protagonist appears out of thin air, and then there seems to be more than one of the same NB, which is completely disgusting. Goldfinger obviously has a good design, why do you like to add these messy things so much.

Not long after watching it, I felt that the protagonist was relieved a little too quickly, and it didn't feel like I was reading a dragon fanfic, which was a bit weird.

Can the author upgrade the bartender?