American Fear: Starting from Escape from the American Killing Line

The forward motion is too long, many chapters do not get into the theme, the golden finger is not strong enough, it is vague, the clouds cover the fog, the protagonist is whimsical, and it is nothing. He just wants to solve the supernatural incident. He has no trump card, so he wants to solve it with a pendant because it is hot. What does this mean? It's so baffling that your parents left a broken pendant behind and it became your golden finger? Even if you find an exercise or a pendant in it, it's boring.

If the second generation of Chinese Americans do not enter the killing line, they will almost reach the stage of sterilization.

I just want to say that there is no point in writing about American horror if there are no beautiful and sexy heroines and supporting characters to collect as trophies.

I don't want to watch Crusu after seeing it 🔨🔨🔨

The plot is too slow. It took me so long to write the book, and I can't even control the plot well enough to make it bland and boring.

I can't see it, and I don't know why. It's so weird.

It's so long-winded. After writing so many chapters, I still don't know the topic. It's all fast-paced now. Who likes to read your long speech?

If you don't get to the point in Chapter 9, your book will be difficult.

Generally speaking, the subject matter is good, but the early stage was foggy, and the golden finger was too small. This is not pleasant at all. It is very likely that the eunuch will be needed before it is released.

First, it doesn't matter whether the plug-in is powerful or not, but the problem is that the plug-in upgrade route is too vague, which greatly reduces readers' expectations for the plot. Second, there is a problem with the rhythm. According to the rhythm of traditional literature, there is nothing wrong with this book, but according to the Internet, the rhythm of this book is too big. The first twenty-three chapters are almost all about unfolding the world view and setting. Readers of online novels at this pace will only find it boring.

Trivia, in Las Vegas, the killing line is that as long as your ID is stolen, you will be automatically killed.

Sofia:

Try to stay away from him, he will get cold.

Reading this novel made me think of several questions For example, if one of my employees died suddenly because of unpaid overtime, could I sue their parents and ask them to compensate for the losses caused to the company because their son died suddenly while working overtime and failed to complete the expected workload Also, if the employees refused to work overtime without pay, could I sue them and ask them to compensate, for example They say I can earn 10 million from this job, but because you refused to work overtime, or said you didn't work hard enough at work, I only earned 8 million. Can I sue you in court and ask you to compensate for the remaining 2 million? Also, if my employees leave after a few days of employment, can I sue them and ask them to compensate for the value they can create for me during their future work? For example, in the future job, he can bring me 1 million in income in the second half of his life, but he runs away after working for a few days. Can I sue him and ask him to compensate for his 1 million? And today's students go to school to study, aren't they all to work? Then why can't these students pay to come to me? I work in our company. This way not only does the company have enough funds to operate, but it also solves the problem of college students' employment difficulties. It is perfect. Finally, there is the question that I can't figure out the most. Since chickens, ducks and geese can be killed and eaten, then if my employees die, why can't the company recycle their property?

Not only is your golden finger weak👎🏻, your upgrade route is unclear. Might as well add some systems. The most important thing is not to participate in the plot. The Shining is scary and the clown is back. Hurry up and get into the plot

Hope to add some "American Horror Story" and "Supernatural" content

The author has time to discuss topics with me, but he doesn't have time to update. It's true. No matter what, you have to be mixed up, let me watch it for free. There is no update at this time today. Is it because the manuscript has not been saved? You are really making it difficult for me, otherwise you should take a few days off. Think about what happens next. Don't be too anxious and unmotivated to take a few days off. I'm wondering if I can do it well, or let's just say that it is like this, it doesn't matter.

The author should change the cover to one with a classic character from an American TV series to attract a wave of passers-by.

It's not a pity to throw away the food if it tastes tasteless

I've read a few chapters, and I think they're pretty good, slow-burning.

Author, don't let the readers catch you. If you are caught, you will suffer the same consequences