My Disciple Is Taking Control of the World of Immortality

There are really people who write about everything. At first glance, there are traces of Xuanjian. The writing is not bad. The first few chapters even describe a group of villagers in depth. . . . Let's make a group portrait, I'm speechless, one is a treasure mirror and the other is a painting fairy, the same farmer. Based on the mention of cultivating the Qingfeng Qi and Zhong Taixuan's foundation of mountains and rivers, it is clear that I am not a traditional cultivation setting. Although it is not necessarily the fruit position set, the probability is a similar variant. If you give me a free investment, I can't even get into Xuanjian, let alone imitate and learn from it.

I have read forty chapters so far. The writing is good and can be maintained! ! At first I thought it was about the master-disciple development of the protagonists Xu Changqing and Li Qingshan, but I didn't expect that there would be other disciples... It seems that there will be more and more disciples in the future, and the fairy in the painting will become stronger and stronger. I hope the author will write harder and stop being a eunuch.

It's a poisonous article, I'd better revise the first ten chapters.

This author simply disgusts readers by writing about Gu Boyong as his disciple.

Second-level strength, create the "immortal" sect. It develops wildly, regardless of what it develops into. The defense is not just riddled with holes, it can be said to be riddled with holes. Haha, what a good baby.

What does the author know about "the Holy Mother?"

It's a pity, but articles can still be used as food. See you again in the author's new book...