In a Year of Famine, I Lead the Whole Village to Prosperity

I originally thought it was a cool article, and I thought it was a cool article when I first read it, but the author of the cool article controlled the rhythm, procrastinating and swaying about having sex, and it was not fun to read. In the end, there was only one sentence left ~ It was so dragging! 😂

Your profile has a strong retro feel.

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There is a high probability that you will rush to the street. Young people do not like this style. If you are older and your writing is not in line with human logic, you have not found the right reader group.

I felt uncomfortable reading it. I thought it was a good article but it wasn't very good at the same time. It was like a running account.

Logically speaking, it is a very good story, but it is a pity that it is written like a running account. Are you adjusting the way you write the book? There are many touching places that could be more delicate.