I Rely on My Fighting Power to Kill the Stars

First of all, I like the fact that the heroine is powerful, but I feel that the emotional description is a bit abrupt. Lu suddenly fell in love with the heroine, suddenly held her hand intimately, and had an inexplicable possessiveness to freeze others. The heroine didn't know that Lu liked her, so she didn't even give her a name and Lu just took care of it... It felt a bit like the male protagonist in ancient times... There are also the names of the heroine's friends, some cuties that don't feel appropriate, and they always rush to hug her. I don't think it's appropriate. Do friends hug each other anytime and anywhere? I think it's more appropriate to hug each other than to hug each other. Even though the heroine Lan's family is acting, some of the tone words are not appropriate, and the words they say are not appropriate. Although a woman pretending to be a man doesn't necessarily have to be disguised in all aspects, it doesn't feel appropriate to me. Well, there are also action words to describe the heroine,,,, example: beautiful eyebrows. . . His beautiful eyes widened. . . . . The white fingertips moved slightly. . . The white and tender hands look like nothing. . . . I personally think these verbs can be reduced in adjectives. I know the heroine is very beautiful, but don't describe it too much. It's a bit strange. Moreover, the heroine has been farming monsters on the garbage planet for a few months. Is it inappropriate to describe the heroine's white, tender and delicate hands? Well, if the healing power can treat trauma and skin care, it would be more reasonable. . . There is nothing wrong with describing the plot in general, it is these small details that make people care more 🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨

I'm coming, I'm coming! This new article looks great! Compared with the previous article, many settings have grown a lot! I'm looking forward to it. I'm here to catch up!

I have to check several times a day to see if there are any updates🤭🤭

Come on

Why hasn't the author updated recently?

It looks good, the author will update more

It looks good, the author will update more

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Reading, fifth place

There are a little bugs, but overall it's good

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

I've always wanted to ask, the heroine's soul seems to be in her original body. This interstellar world is a world of beasts. So I'm curious, what is the heroine's beast form? ? ? ? ?

Can you please tell me, is the heroine a one-to-many or one-to-one setting? ? ?

The heroine is very strong and I like it, although the emotional line is a bit stiff.