Covering the Sky: Fishing for the Heavens from the Great Saint Body

The protagonist is the Holy Body Enlightenment, and he has practiced the Divine Elephant's Prison Suppressing Power. If he can't kill the Dacheng Hegemon with one punch, his combat power is too much. As a result, the battle lasts for a long time (not really half a day, it means a long time) 😡

You are a coward, the Forbidden Zone Supreme and Overlord can still come out to besiege you 😅

Why are you, such an awesome Holy Body, still doing what you want to do? Go straight to the plateau finale. And the Immortal Fire bragging is so awesome, it takes another kind of enlightenment and Immortal Fire to extinguish a Supreme Being, what's so great about it? It's true that Immortal Fire was once Imperial Fire, but that was only once.

This kind of fanfic is just a disgusting idea of ​​the original work

What a lousy book! You actually start charging for it after it's put on the shelf. An author with a bad attitude like you doesn't care if you don't read the book, just throw it out of the bookshelf, never to be seen again!

I can only say that I don't understand the statues of gods. You can read what other books say about them. Don't write randomly.

If you want to go fishing, you can have other physiques. Even if you say you are a Chaos Body, it doesn't matter. But a physique like the Holy Physique and Hegemony, which is famous for fighting, still want to achieve the Holy Physique? Don't even think about it. Whether the protagonist can kill Dao or not is a question.

The front is fine, but the back has to be a blue dragon and pretend to be mysterious, which is quite boring! Just follow the plot, why do you need to delete you, will there be any impact? !

Baba ran to kneel down and lick Ye Hei, disgusting

There are two designs available, but the original Forbidden Zone Supreme is a mess.

If your introduction doesn't have the last paragraph, I might be tricked into taking a look. I don't hate Ye Fan, but I hate that fans rely solely on Ye Fan for plot, so why should I read your book? Why don't I go read Zhe Tian?

One million U. S. Dollars are converted into Zimbabwe dollars, and the gold finger presses hard

If you write mortal works, you cannot control the sky. There are too many restrictions, it is better not to write "Zhetian".

Heaven and earth are so repulsive. There are people who are not even repulsed by mortal beings. You are just proclaiming the emperor.

Good book, good book, don't read what Heizi said, the author's writing style surpasses Zhongyuan 5 Bai

Judging from the content in the introduction, this is not the start of Dacheng Holy Body, it is clearly the start of Sacrifice.

Why did you go to Diwu World Water Plot?

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The plot is actually pretty good, especially the plot between the daughter and Ye Fan, and the scene where Duan De plays with the fishing rod is very funny. But! ! ! ! Excessive adjective water injection, Normal chapters basically have 1/4 adjectives The female character has 1/3 adjectives A fight has 1/2 adjectives A bunch of messy adjectives desperately watering them Author, did you not read it after writing it yourself? It's okay, I feel like the number is not enough and I directly expanded the AI Example: Female character beautiful (adjective x2) figure (adjective) eyes (adjective) blablaba Fighting male protagonist punch (adjective) ferocious adjective x2, enemy (adjective adjective adjective adjective), counterattack adjective adjective, counterattack adjective adjective? ? ? ? ? ? The content is not enough and you overuse adjectives to get rid of the numbers You currently have 870,000 words. To be honest, I feel that if you remove all your outrageous and messy adjectives, the number of words will be reduced by at least 1/3. In order to open this comment thread, I specially gave a monthly pass. Obviously the author has been scolded a lot, so I set 500 book friend points before I can comment. I feel that this post may be deleted in the future but I can't help but feel unhappy.

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