On a Rainy Night, the Girl with a Cane That She Picked up at Home Was Obedient and Soft.

Is this a short story? This is the first time I've seen it.

I have a little humble opinion Although the story has a clear context, there is nothing that can arouse the reader's strong interest.                                The characters are not so rich and can be summarized in one sentence, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also a bit bland. Slightly sugary is not bad, but in a world of pure love and no magic, it is not enough. And a rare point of conflict - uncle called the police, some raised it high and put it down gently. (There will be obstacles to the plot in the later period, so I didn't say it) It is recommended to strengthen the conflict from the character design and plot aspects, enhance the fun and attraction, and lay the foreshadowing as soon as possible to detonate the conflict. Secondly, from the market point of view, the requirements for slow-burning single-female protagonists are relatively high. Finally, I would like to encourage the author. It is already very good to be able to write a novel like this. If you can beat me ten times 😢 , please don't blame me for giving some suggestions purely from the perspective of readers.