Frilian: the Hero Who Inherits the South at the Beginning

It turned out to be the starting point, I thought I had ordered a tomato 🤭

The plot develops too fast. I feel like I'm not reading a novel, but an outline 😅

Watching Japanese anime really makes my three senses burn. If it weren't for Florian, it would just be Simmel and the others who would have been killed by the demon king. If it weren't for Flame, they would have been crushed by the demons. If it weren't for the Lao Denli Magic Association, they would have been treated like dogs by the nobles.

The plot progresses too fast... This is a novel, not a comic. If you skip so many daily details, the comic will not progress as fast as you do...

Just the introduction makes me want to complain. They all have the magic to predict the future and still find their way home.

Too dry, too rushed. It's obviously a quick passage...

Hard!

Whether there is a heroine or not, I will treat it as if there is no heroine.

It's really a bit dry, and it feels like it will be over soon.

The overall pace is fast, and I like to play time games, pulling the timeline here and there, which makes the main line blurred. I don't even know what to write in the next story. It seems that I just write whatever comes to mind, and the overall context is messy.

Investigation report: "Number" - 490 Investigation target: "Furilian: The Brave who inherits the South in the Beginning" - Male Protagonist - [Lynn] Investigation Result: [Physical Time Travel] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all the worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on December 24, 2025

It's really well written, the author is very capable.

It's better not to talk about any timeline

It's pretty cool, and the annoying kid Ellie actually has some foreshadowing.

The author is so honest, he gave me dozens of chapters in ten chapters.

I think the emotional changes of the characters are quite in place. The author has a foundation in writing, but he needs more practice to express the corresponding writing style. The most uncomfortable thing for me was that after reading it, I realized he was a eunuch. My evaluation of this article is that it is of high quality, the plot is consistent, the plot is coherent, the story is self-explanatory, and the three factors support each other (the male hero, the protagonist, and the old lady who became an unknown hero). I became excited after seeing this. Unfortunately, it's hard to agree with everyone, and what works for me may not work for other readers.

You see, although it's pretty fast, it's hard to maintain. .

Why is it gone? It's clearly written well.

I don't know if it's my fault, but it looks worse and worse after two years of wearing it.

They say it's fast-paced, but how fast is it? It's the kind of thing where you can clear the level directly.