Time Travel at the Same Time, My Golden Finger Is a Plot Veteran

The previous headmaster of Hogwarts is known to have lived to be over 300 years old. Now, the ancestor of the protagonist of Hogwarts Legacy only had more than 100 people in 1991, but his strength was stronger than that of the previous principal. Then how did his ancestor die?

As for the sun and the moon, you won't be able to survive if you don't survive.

You're so awesome. Why don't you go to a magic school?

In Zhenhun Street, the Zhenhun General is equivalent to the Lord. If you summon Ying Zheng's legion, it is equivalent to you being Ying Zheng, or Ying Zheng's successor. In the end, it doesn't matter if you summon Ying Zheng, and no one else has summoned Cao Cao and Xiang Yu.

It doesn't feel like the protagonist has a boy and a girl in time travel. Even if it's a human and a beast, it's better than a boy and a girl. It's also a way for a woman to open a male harem and share memories and hurt herself.

I really like your work on Sun and the Moon, and Under One Person is okay, but the plot of Under One Person is too confusing. The sudden jump of "Demon Slayer Must Die" gives people a feeling of overwhelming fighting power.

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The power does not stack, what is the difference between this and not hanging? I always feel like this is another abusive article. I'll never see you again.

How many chapters is this? The author just added a lot of complicated settings and buried a lot of pitfalls. This pit is too big and too deep, and it is impossible for the author's level to fill it perfectly. Is this book either a dud or a eunuch?

I changed the map too quickly, and it was so confusing to change the scene right after the beginning of a story. There is also the dialogue, which is too complicated and concise, and contains less modal particles and psychological activities.

The protagonist is like a bastard. He knows that he is multitasking and has no door to talk to. He talks to the old man in his mind when he is alone. Especially for a person like the protagonist who has so many secrets. When the unspeakable things are exposed, he forgets them all in a panic and takes a dose of Shen Feng Wu Ying. I don't know what the meaning of this kind of operation is besides showing that the protagonist's IQ is even less than that of zombies.

For one person, it's better to write less about Demon Slayer. The world view is so small.

I have to say that there is something special about Under One Person. When I went to the set of the film about Zhu Tian, ​​it was basically ugly. The previous ones were quite good to watch. Under One Person made me a little bit unbearable╮()╭

Fate's old man is a bit of a jerk, shouldn't he be Gem Man or Solomon?

The dialogue is a bit messy, the scenes change a bit quickly, and the protagonist talks to himself a bit too much

Demon Slayer's bad review got stabbed inexplicably

Forget about the front, forget about the middle, forget about the back, in short, let Rhode Island burn

What kind of rubbish was written after it was put on the shelves? The previous one gave me a rather disappointing feeling. Not only was it invincible, it was at least semi-invincible. However, when you arrived at the Fairy Forest, you were bewitched and lost your mind. 🤔

It feels weird. Are there school governors at the opening ceremony of Hogwarts? The behavior and logic of some characters feel a bit too intellectual. Lucius asked his son to provoke the "most mysterious" wizard family that "has not been around all year round". Then when he saw his son being beaten, he rushed up and tried to bite the opponent. The plot is like this: My father, the school manager who came to shore with a clear conscience, pulled out a gun for me in public. Just, it's quite outrageous

Why do people who time travel like writing Western fantasy and Japanese comics so much? These have nothing to do with domestic novels! Even myths and legends have nothing to do with current online novels. If you can integrate the two well, it's enough. Why bother with Japanese comics and Western fantasy?

At the beginning, only memories are shared but no power is shared. There is a male protagonist who takes an assassin's potion and is forced to change his gender.

Force the king🐉

Withdraw first! Please kind-hearted book friends please let me know when sharing capabilities become available later. Thank you.

Just write a few chapters of a world, jump right into it, and change characters as soon as you get into it. It was hard to hold on until it developed. The result is the kind of critical literature that criticizes one thing after another in the past of the characters in the plot. Unless the reader happens to have the same idea as the author and will be attracted, doesn't it feel like the author is complaining?

It seems that those writing about the sun, moon or Gu are all eunuchs. Are they by the same author?

Sun and Moon Stage, don't come if you don't want to show up. Even if there is one, it is only on the side of the road.