Douluo Peerless: Flame Martial God, Partner Daligu

This is the first Douluo fanfic I have finished reading. Part of the reason is that I was almost finished when I read it, and part of the reason is that the book is really good-looking, and overall it is indeed excellent. There are no particularly embarrassing operations or plots that reduce intelligence. The plot writing is also relatively smooth. Let me talk about the reasons why I think this book can be successful compared with other Douluo fans. (First: the protagonist's growth and ability settings. The protagonist's growth curve is very smooth, without deliberate leveling or bursts of combat power. It is a very standard cool text template. This allows me to smoothly read more than one million words and start to catch up on updates and build expectations for the subsequent plot. Compared with most Douluo fans, this book abandons the setting of dual martial arts. Instead, it is The focus is on Daligu, the protagonist of the childhood masterpiece. Dragon Fighter and Douluo Continent seem to have nothing to do with each other, but one thing is very important, that is, they are both memories of the post-00s generation's childhood and growth. How many of the readers of this book shouted "Tianyi Lion King Demon Breaking Fist" in front of the TV when they were young? Only the overlap of the audience can make me and most passers-by avoid reading this book. Luo Dalu itself has a lot of demand for skill naming and design. It only has two martial souls and a bunch of soul rings and soul bones, but only those few can be remembered and used in actual combat. At the same time, it also avoids the hydrology generated by a large number of texts (this is very important) (Second: the character's personality and emotional line. The heroine Xiao Xiao's performance in the early stage is really amazing. Although there are fewer appearances in the middle and later stages, there is no doubt. This is something that attracts me very much. The arrogance and human-machine sense of the Snow Emperor are also very interesting to me. Compared with most other Douluo fans, this book has very few female protagonists, and the emotional interactions in the whole book are not frequent. This may not be the best design for readers who particularly like Douluo and those who are not very interested in Douluo. This is actually an advantage. Looking at the entire category of Douluo fanfics, the majority are poor writing and awkward emotional dramas, so that when I browsed Douluo fanfics, the first thing I saw was not the introduction but the character card. The stereotyped heroine and the awkward and homogeneous and boring character are the big ones that I can't avoid. The above is what I think. This is part of the reason why this book has achieved good results. If you have different ideas, please comment but don't attack. As for the shortcomings, I will make it short here, because it is too obvious: the fighting scenes are really messy. This is also an important reason why the author's writing style can only be limited to writing fan fiction. There is not a single eye-catching fight in the whole article, and the author even has a lack of attention to the fighting scenes themselves. I want to reduce the description, but if you don't write more and practice more for the already bad batch, will it help you? Finally, I want to talk about the new books prepared by the author. It is best to reduce the skill text and streamline the article to reduce redundancy. This is my suggestion for Dual Martial Soul. As mentioned above, the author's portrayal of the characters in this book is also very demanding. There is a certain level of skill, but it can still be seen that the emotional interaction in the middle and later stages is deliberately reduced due to lack of proficiency! Also, if you can't fight well with swords, why are you still playing with a shitty sword?

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I heard that if you slander Ma Xiaotao in the author's book review section, you will be chased and scolded.

I kind of forgot about the setting of Dou Er, but wouldn't Dou Yi, a civilian, be able to awaken his martial spirit when he reaches an age? Why has the popularity rate declined after so many years? Is the Wuhun Palace responsible for awakening Wuhun gone?

Author, you have a big problem with your current plot. First, the biggest problem is your heroine. You have only created Xiao Xiao, who can barely be seen as the heroine. Ning Tian, you have very little portrayal. There is nothing outstanding about your character. The character list says she is a supporting actress. I don't know if she can become a heroine. If If you want to turn her martial soul into the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect, your description is too thin. I originally thought that after the emotion was reached, she would evolve the Nine Treasure Glazed Pagoda and master the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect. In fact, the protagonist had no emotional interaction with her. They were all helping and being helped, giving and receiving money. In the end, it was Meng Hongchen. The female protagonist has even fewer scenes. I really wonder why the author didn't do much to shape the relationship between her and the protagonist for a character with such high praise on the character list. And your plot part. I have seen more than 150 chapters. The part where the protagonist decides to go on a three-year journey on his own should be because you think the protagonist's character is too It's too thin. I want to portray his spirit as a dragon warrior. That's okay, but when I saw this paragraph, I felt that the protagonist's personality was a bit biased toward a bad guy. It felt like his strength and temperament were not in line. It's time to give the protagonist a bit of his own personality, and stop acting like a housewife.

Does the heroine only have those character cards? I felt like it was too little, so I asked if it was true. If so, I stopped watching it. I didn't like watching so little of the Douluo heroine.

Give the protagonist a panel. If there are any omissions, you can help to add them 😁 Chen Yuan God position: God of War (fusion of Fire Dragon King and God of Fire) Plug-ins: Column of Courage, Daligu (Ultimate God of War Dragon), Electrolux, Son of Nature, Vulcan Heritage Equipment: Yang Shen Bow, Pegasus Double-barreled Cannon, Lion Fire Axe, Heart of Creature, Great Sword, Arrows (Super Artifact) Tribulation Flame (Big sword, super artifact, forged with the fusion of the Fire God Sword and the Dragon-Slaying Knife), the water-fire dragon king's bone and blood and the sky-burning god's pestle plus the protagonist's god-level essence and blood to forge super artifact arrows Skills: Ligu Fireball, Eighteen Arhat Fist, Hip-Hop Light Saber, Batty's Holy Flame, Ligu Aperture, Dragon Flame Ball, Brilliant Flame Strike, Sky-Wing Lion King's Demon-breaking Fist! (From Daligu) Undead magic, soul explosion, overlapping strength, soul spell (from Electrolux) Rule the world, lion's teeth (adapted from Moon's inheritance) Triple martial soul fusion skills (Xiao Xiao) Fire Sun Break Coron of Light All ashes return to silence Condensing flames Burning the sky and boiling the sea Qianyuan Fire Domain Flame Wings, Sky Dance Sky Winged Lion King Spiritual Domain: Space Soul Bone (transformed into a divine outfit): Head: Skull of the Bright Dragon King Torso: Torso bone of Mountain Dragon King Right hand: Right arm bone of Fire Dragon King (Fire Dragon Claw), Right metacarpal bone of Blond Lion Mastiff (Dominator Domain), Left hand: Left arm bone of Light (Dark) Dragon King, Left metacarpal bone of Titan Ape (Titan Sky Cannon (Die Jin·Meteor), Power of the Earth ) Legs: Blazing Pegasus right leg bone (Tianma Xingkong realm), Liehuo Xingjiaoshu left leg bone (Tianyan Yangquan realm, burning fire to rejuvenate) The evil eye tyrant dominates the external soul bone to swallow the 50,000-year-old phantom flying Luan skull, and then attaches it to the skull of the Bright Dragon King as a component (No loss) The left arm bone of the light (dark) Dragon King was transformed by Yi Lao using the left arm bone of the Dark Dragon King plus absorbing the energy of the dragon cloud and the black dragon soul bone Feo Ji Tai Martial Spirit: Blazing Gloves (six reds, three divine rings) First soul skill: flame pattern Second Soul Skill: Blazing Third Soul Skill: Heart of Flame Fourth Soul Skill: Burning Sky Concentration Fifth Soul Skill: Ember-Destroying Fury Sixth Soul Skill: Dragon Armor Fire Core, Flame Yuan Seventh Soul Skill: Martial Soul True Body Eighth Soul Skill: Dragon Prison Flame Ninth Soul Skill: Golden Flame Burning Sky Items: Water and Fire Dragon King Essence and Parts, Thousand-Year Dark Gold Terror Claw Left Metacarpal Bone, Dragon Zhi Leaf, Ten Thousand Years Black Ice Marrow, Ice Divine Crystal, Snow Emperor Origin, Evil Emperor Origin, Evil Eye with Soul Bones attached outside, several Soul Bones, Holy Spirit Cult Heritage, The right to use the demiplane of the undead, the right to use the Ice and Fire Eyes, and the Seven Kills Sword Manual Industry: Spirit Transferring Tower (retired as the first generation tower master) Soul: Fire Dragon King (God King level, evolving, big stomach bag, red gold Xuanyan) Fire Apricot Jiaoshu

It's okay. I'd say it looks much more comfortable than the one about Dou Yihai Shenlong. Although it's a bit bland, it's the best if it doesn't make any mistakes. As long as I keep it up, I feel that the results won't be bad. It's just the heroine problem. I can't tell at the moment whether it's more or less. Xiaoxiao should be the heroine. After all, it's like this. Ning Tian can't tell. I have to look behind.

The plot and setting are quite good and quite normal, but the author's writing style needs to be improved. I have read too many works by great masters, and I always feel a very awkward feeling when reading this. It makes me want to read it but not want to read it. The book has been on the bookshelf for a long time. Every time I read one or two chapters, I don't want to read it. I read it again after a while, and it keeps looping and uncomfortable😔

The pace is too fast. When watching, it feels like you are in a hurry. There is no time to rest. You finish one thing today and do another thing immediately tomorrow There is no emotional development in leisure time. The alternative branch line makes people look like a robot that only completes the task. The emotional line or some private exchanges are to say a few words to people and then drive them away. It seems that there is no time to breathe and then immediately do the next thing. There is no sense of relaxation when watching the protagonist, and the original timeline is followed step by step.

It developed faster than I imagined, and it ended a little earlier. It's not the kind of crazy water injection in the later stage. It's good to finish it early. It has been completed successfully for more than a month. Let's start a new book as soon as possible.

If the author wanted to write that the Fire Dragon King directly transformed into an Eastern Dragon, that would be a bit too deliberate. The feeling it gives me now is that if it is not a cultural issue, the transformation from a Western dragon to an Eastern dragon gives the impression that a normal person has changed his shape, with shorter arms, shorter legs, and longer body. After all, if the Fire Dragon King was originally a Western Dragon, then from his birth to his growth until now. His body was elongated in this way, and his limbs became shorter, as if he had mutated. I hope it won't become a pure oriental dragon, but keep some characteristics of a western dragon. Combining the two will give me a better feeling. In recent years, when I look at a Western fantasy, it is said in the comment section or paragraphs that all magic is weak, not as good as cultivating immortals, and that Eastern dragons are stronger than Western dragons. They are just rubbish. Comments like these make me want to vomit. I feel disgusted by them even when I watch a Western fantasy 🤔 These things to me feel like the kind of space country in Korea, which everyone wants to belittle. It gives people a sense of arrogance and arrogance, just like those jokes and videos in which others have developed to the level of cosmic civilization, and he also said that others are just eccentric and cunning, not as good as the Tao of Confucius and Mencius 🙄

I heard that the author hates Ma Xiaotao very much, so I have to read it, Ma Xiaotao is so disgusting

I believe that readers of this book all know that Electrolux is a character in "The Divine Throne" And in the Divine Throne, when each profession breaks through the sixth level, it will condense something called a "spiritual orifice" It has two functions. One is to increase the speed of spiritual power recovery, even just breathing can quickly restore spiritual power; the other is to give professionals the ability to convert other alien energies into their own attribute energy in any environment. And it can condense up to nine spiritual orifices, the first three corresponding to the chest, lower abdomen and eyebrows respectively. It is basically the same as the soul cores on Douluo Continent. I am thinking that the magic of Electrolux can have an effect on Douluo Continent. Can the spiritual aperture be brought over and localized? Directly let the protagonist condense three soul cores in advance and continuously strengthen the three soul cores. This is what I think, please give me some advice

I've read Chapter 160, and I still don't know why Meng Hongchen is the heroine. You should be at the middle of your book. She has never experienced anything to develop a relationship with the male protagonist, and she has never done anything to help him. How can she be the heroine? Is she beautiful? Ning Tian is not bad at all, and she still contributes money and effort, but Meng Hongchen doesn't deserve it! Of course, if you say that the book is still in its early stages, then just pretend that I didn't say that.

A guy who needs to steal martial arts from a sect, or a sect like Tang Sect, was caught in the end, jumped off a cliff, and finally became a god by relying on a book of Tang Sect's internal skills and mental skills. Do you think it's funny? What good things can Tang Sect's internal skills and mental skills be? You said hidden weapons and poisons, Tang Sect is You did this, but it turned out that you stole the Tang Sect's internal energy and then used this thing to become a god. It's really hard for me to understand. Douluo is not an ancient ape. He has nothing of his own. He was beaten like this by a sect's internal energy who used hidden weapons. I can only say that this setting was really thought up with toenails.

Since the end of the game, my writing has become more and more watery, especially when it comes to Riyue.

Don't forget Tang San's identity in his previous life. He is a person from the ancient fictional martial arts world, and he is originally an "ancient person". We live in modern society and know how to look at problems from a development perspective. Of course, Tang San would have various problems. But for Tang San, the development of the times should be consistent. Hasn't the world been like this for thousands of years? The older the martial arts, the better. He has the standard thinking of ancient small farmers. I just feel that Tang San's behavior is very consistent with his identity. How did ancient emperors maintain their rule 1. Grasp thoughts and unify cognition (the core) Supremely respect one mainstream thought (the Han Dynasty only respected Confucianism) Propaganda: Loyalty to the emperor, patriotism, the three cardinal principles and the five constant principles Let the people think from an early age: The emperor is destiny, cannot resist, and only good people are obedient and lawful Restrict heretical speech, ban books, suppress dissent 2. Control the selection of officials and win over scholars Han: Chaju recommendation Wei and Jin: Nine grades of Zhongzheng After Sui and Tang Dynasties: imperial examinations Absorb all the smart people in the world into the imperial court as officials, If scholars have a future, they will not rebel. 3. Violent suppression and forceful use of force The central government controls elite forbidden troops and heavy troops Strictly controls weapons and prohibits civilians from privately hiding armor and weapons Local garrisons restrain each other to prevent local warlords from becoming bigger Peasant uprisings and rebellions will be brutally suppressed 4. Hierarchical management, locking the people in place Household registration system, Baojia system, joint sitting law Restricting free movement, not moving or running around at will Fixing people to the land, farming the land honestly and paying taxes 5. Economic control, stabilizing the bottom class Emphasis on agriculture and suppressing business, encouraging land cultivation, ensuring food Collecting taxes, corvee, and military service to control national financial resources Relief during famines to avoid starvation and triggering rebellion As long as the people can eat enough, they will not rebel easily 6. Hierarchy + Deify the imperial power Strict respect and inferiority: nobles, officials, common people, and slaves are hierarchical Promote the divine right of kings, the emperor is the emperor, sent by heaven Use etiquette and rules to oppress the lower class and make people accept their fate So, let's see, after Tang San became the god king, he still used the same old things. Even if a feudal ancient man had great power, his thoughts were there. He is definitely not as good as a capitalist who has capital means to maintain rule, because capitalists can liberate productive forces and use more civilized means to maintain rule,

What can I say? The current Shrek can be said to have no successor. Moon has only a few years to live. Xuanzi who is 98 is unreliable. The new generation Beibei and Zhang Lexuan have a high probability of being 98 or 99. Ma Xiaotao may become an evil soul master at some point, so Huo Yuhao in the original work Revealing his ultimate talents, he immediately began to win over him and wanted to tie him to Shrek. As a result, you, the soul king of the protagonist 14, have a high probability of becoming the ultimate attribute with your self-awakened martial soul. Your ultimate talents are so obvious, and you are still a poor man with ties to the village. It's not much different from Huo Yuhao in the original work, but Shrek's attitude towards the protagonist is a bit different from Huo Yuhao in the original work.

Where is Meng Hongchen? Didn't you make a decision from the beginning? Why is it gone now?

All of them have elements of fighting dragons and treasures. I feel that the Douluo fanfic is very suitable for Kuiba, Pulse Beast, Pulse Gate, Tianting (peerless divine world), and even Yichang Tianshu, which has a wide audience 🙂

It will be finished soon. I will give you a vote and go for it.

I've already voted for two monthly votes and they didn't unlock the extras for me. What a shame.

The more than a month-long follow-up of Sahua is over.

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Do you want to publish some pictures of the main characters? What does Chen Yuan's flame gauntlet spirit look like? To be honest, it always makes me think that Chen Yuan is the image of Chadu Taihu, and the flaming gauntlet is probably similar to the giant's right arm.