Eternal Night Magician

This is my first time doing science popularization, I hope it can help other readers. At the beginning of the book, the reader is not given any background of the protagonist, nor is there much introduction to the power system, making it a bit difficult to read. The main elements of this book are cyber + profession + mystery. The protagonist is a repairman in the lower city, living in seclusion with a loli (?) Hacker, and repaying his huge debt by completing various commissions. Magic is released through the medium of ether, but the protagonist currently does not show much ability in this area. It is foreseeable that the protagonist and his party will be involved in conflicts between large companies. Suggestions to the author: The pace is a bit fast at the moment, and the reading is a bit hazy. It is recommended to intersperse setting chapters to supplement the details of the characters and power systems, improve the protagonist's character and historical background, etc. Finally, I wish you all a happy reading.

The writing is good, but it is too difficult to sign. The current online literature market is not friendly to newcomers. If the pace is slow and there is no selling point, it will not be popular It is recommended to systematically scan the list to read more new books with high traffic, learn the opening rhythm and set highlights, the atmosphere creation and description are good, and the foundation will be improved quickly.

Recommending books is useless, it will disrupt the system and pollute the reader pool....

I didn't understand the first three pictures. Why does the protagonist owe money? What is the relationship between this woman and the protagonist, and whether this woman has a background. If she doesn't have a background, can she be killed and the debt owed cleared. Personally, I feel that there is a problem at the beginning. There is a sense of control that the protagonist is controlled at the beginning, and then I feel that the update with this woman is very good. I felt very conflicted while reading the book.

The writing is readable, but there are a lot of problems. The protagonist owes 700 million, but I feel that there is no sense of crisis, there is almost no sense of satisfaction in making money, and my strength has not improved after a long time. This kind of story background is really not interesting unless it draws people's imagination.

A man who owes 700 million. He took a job worth RMB 50,000 even though he knew it was dangerous. And without any consideration. The protagonist's character is also like a conflicting code. If you don't consider it, you won't owe 700 million. If you consider it, you won't do such a thing at all. It seems like a contradiction.

There are too many chapters, so keep the quality up and it will explode in the early and middle stages.

Follow up

Did you make this book cover yourself? Why doesn't Qidian have a logo?

Look, look good, look good, look good!

Following up

150,000 Words will not be published or signed? You can't even vote for monthly votes 🙂

Author, tell the truth 🙂 did you use AI to polish it?

I've read Chapter 20 or 30, and I don't think it's a big problem at the moment. As long as the male protagonist is not written as a turtle boy, I have no problem with it.