The Magician in Conan

The first and second time travels are simply not necessary. Just travel through the third time to get the ability. After all, judging from the experience of the first and second time travels, can the protagonist's cunning and sophisticated design really convey that feeling in the third time travel? If you don't have this confidence, why do you want to travel through time for the first and second time? The source of power, time travel, explains everything. Who would argue with you?

The grooves are all magically resurrected.

Where did FGO get the sixth magic?

It's really better to just write about traveling to Conan, where Goldfinger is a magic circuit, and then slowly improve your abilities.

This kind of novel is written in long paragraphs, and I don't even bother to read it at a glance.

Just like the previous Conan

After reading the first chapter, I was unsurprisingly disappointed. Apart from the good ideas, everything else was a bit awkward.

Let's not talk about where your sixth method came from. Just treat it as your second creation. I can't think of anything to write home about when a magician goes to Conan. Shouldn't the main character not eat beef? 😨😨

The introduction is not good, why do you treat Guda like this, nmdwsm

A eunuch? D(ŐдŐ๑)

The setting is logically self-consistent. The five magics in the Moon World correspond to the five stages of civilization, budding, branches, leaves, blossoms, and fruits. The concepts and corresponding expressions of the second, third, and fifth magics that have been disclosed at this stage are all in perfect correspondence. Therefore, if the sixth method is to be developed, it must represent the concepts of rebirth and reincarnation. The time traveler can be said to have a natural strong adaptability to this. In Xingyue's worldview, magic is indeed the most adaptable. Magic can be said to be a crude imitation of magical darlings by people who are not adaptable. This can be seen from the comparison of the sisters Aoko and Orange. No matter how talented Orange is, her grandfather passed down magic to Qingzi because she said you are not suitable. This is also the most unreasonable part of magic.

There are too many things set up in the first chapter, and it probably won't last long.

It's like I've seen my future😁 Come on↖(^ω^)↗

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