Right? Why Is the Love Script so Full of Bullshit?

Reader, I kneel down for you. Please vote for me in your comments. I fell in love with you at the first sight. You are the beacon in my life, illuminating my path forward. I feel sad when I can't see you for a day. I live in darkness all day long. You are my tomorrow. Without you, my world will not bloom. I almost went crazy thinking about it and fell down. As soon as I was covered with the quilt on the bed, I started screaming and crying with my hands on the pillow. I was yelling and holding back, and I was crying at the same time. My hands were shaking when I was typing. Later, my hands were shaking more and more. The thoughts, feelings and dreams that surged from my heart, this envy and regret were intertwined. I still had a smile on my face, but the tears fell down all at once. I can't bear it anymore...🥵🥵♡My favorite readers! …🥰🥰Like an idiot😍😍…Always, always🥵🥵🥵I really, really like readers…🥵🥵🥰Woo…The cool way readers comment and vote has been deeply engraved in my heart😍😍😍

I don't want to write a cool novel in the traditional sense, nor do I want to write a gimmicky story where the heroine falls madly in love with the hero as soon as she sees him. My youth is not perfect, but I still want to create a story that can make the fans laugh and relax after reading it. Every individual and every character should be contradictory and should have their own arc and growth. My writing logic and plot may indeed be insufficient, so I am very grateful to all readers for their support and affirmation. Thank you very much. Here we seriously welcome every reader who has clicked in, read the book, posted a comment, and voted. I burst into tears and didn't know what to say.

A heroine is gentle to everyone, and a heroine likes to hang out with many men. To be honest, it is not lovable, and it is something that you can find when you are sick. This book is directly GG level. As long as the pulling is too much, there will be surprises. The author should not write explosive points and just reveal a few surprises. These two are already a bit borderline, Nuo Huan Okay, there is another hidden possibility. If you want to write a supporting role and separate the protagonist and the reader, then it may be a disaster. Now it feels like walking a tightrope. For green tea, you can refer to the Brahman Green Tea next door. That one handles it really well. In summary, walking a tightrope, if you get sick, you may directly explode.

There are so few discussion posts. What a pitiful author.

From the fact that the author replied to almost every Rui comment post, but stated that I will not change it, I think what I wrote is completely fine, I can see the ending. You are so stubborn, this is really the first time I see you, male videos are not common 🙂

🙂 I feel that Li Ming's plot is indeed a bit weird, and the method of solving the confession wall is also a bit deus ex machina. However, the plot of Little Green Tea is quite interesting. Come on, author.

From the beginning to now, I have read it about three times The author's daily writing is good, and the pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot is okay But there are always a few disgusting "adult words" But the overall look is very good, interesting and engaging Among the light novels I follow, I can reach the level of being the best [fn= 2]🌹🌹 Come on, I believe you will be better 😄😄😄 (But I prefer to read more twisted ones, please author, write more twisted ones, I can do anything 😍😍😍)

After reading sixty chapters, the author's writing style is actually good. It's really good. I'm not flattering. It's enough for writing a web article, but the narrative skills are really a bit new, and it has a typical newcomer flavor. The sixty chapters are estimated to be more than 100,000 words, and the plot has no ups and downs. Li Ming's scene is the only breaking point so far, but it's quite witty and he strikes out when provoked. It looks too stupid. Although this person is a clown, clowns can't be too stupid. It's not handled well here. There aren't many readers yet, so if you have good ideas, you can revise them appropriately, really. Later, the conflict over the club's land was resolved too easily, failing to show the male protagonist's ability, or not showing it enough. Another point is that the emotional line advances very slowly. The title of your book is Love Script, and readers who click on it just want to read it. It's not a problem if the plot is slow, and it's not impossible to write a slow book, but it must be interesting. I think the author is also good at making jokes in the book review section. It would be much better if you put your sense of humor into the story. Finally, non-system, non-reborn, purely daily-based novels are so rare these days. Among the full-platform systems and Tokyo novels, this book still has a refreshing feeling. Now that I have signed the contract, I hope the author can finish the story well and don't just let it go just because of poor grades. I see that you said yourself that you don't intend to write enjoyable articles in the ordinary sense. It's good to have this kind of attitude, and you must keep it. But you should also pay attention to study. Cool writing has the meaning of refreshing writing, especially narrative techniques. You can scan the charts and open books to see how similar works are narrated. I personally have a feeling that both authors and readers are getting tired of the systems and Tokyo texts that are widely available on the street, as well as those vulgar routines such as weekly refreshes, especially Tokyo texts and various Chinese-style Japanese novels. As the world situation changes, I might be able to post them one day. It is definitely a major trend for daily literature and love stories to return to the local area and return to reality. In short, keep working hard and make progress. I will support the first order when it is released!

It's well written, but no one seems to read it

I order you to kill the living committee next door and all the millions of pounds.

Although I have only read three chapters, I have been writing toilet paper for more than a month. I know that it is not easy to pass the test. Come on✊

It's a pity, I feel like someone will read it if I post it 🍅. It feels a bit weird to write this kind of Japanese anime style text, keep up the good work

After watching it, it was okay. The characters of the four heroines are quite distinct and can be used in daily life. Just after reading Chapter 114, I feel that the progress is still too slow. Except for Xiao Han, everyone else has not even made much progress, and the plot is not interesting enough. Come on!

After reading the first few chapters, I felt that the flavor of Nikkei was too strong. Could it be that the author had watched too many dramas about Nikkei's campus love dramas and then suddenly came up with the idea to write a book?

1. I didn't even notice that the introduction was actually changed, so is Qingmei the heroine? 2. It's already 280,000 words, and I've been reading through it a lot. Will it be available on the shelf? I'm really afraid that it will be lost after looking at it.

What about your ambiguity and pulling? The author, Chapters 1 to 10 are all about daily life, it's too boring, I can't stick to it 😥

The style is closer to Riqing. It may not have a large audience at the beginning, but the writing is pretty good.

🙂 It can be seen that the setting, phenomenon, and plot are similar to those of Chunwu. It is difficult to like or even substitute for the male protagonist. The same is true for a book called "Let you be a life committee member, but you conquer the whole school" (not a recommended book) The theme is youth and growth. The title is a harem/party struggle article. The male protagonist is "ordinary", but in fact he has low self-esteem, is aloof, withdrawn, and good at self-sacrifice... The second male protagonist is now a good student, handsome in appearance, well-socialized, a hexagonal warrior, and very popular. The male protagonist is accustomed to solving the problems of his classmates through self-sacrifice, and gradually wins the favor of the female protagonists. However, the second male protagonist is more capable of solving such social problems, such as observing people's emotions and communicating extensively... However, the stage focuses on the male protagonist, which is very unreasonable. In addition, the author of this book plans to write two endings: lone wolf (single) and harem, as well as a single if line. In fact, the lone wolf ending is what the author really wants to write, and the rest are due to market pressure. To sum up, I think it is best for the male and female protagonists of harem novels to be "well-matched". Don't be like Japanese comics, where the female protagonists are all blooming, but the male protagonists are all Asasi, cowardly, and lack mobility... The highlight of the male protagonist seems to be his stubborn personality and specific bonds.

Let's talk about some more Shura field plots and battles

The first order is a bit miserable 🙂 Come on. .

The first order is miserable, but it is still a relatively watchable type. The author should keep writing (monthly votes are strong😀)

I would like to ask if there are characters like a second male and a third male in the story of Shennong to support the thickness of the story. The pure male protagonist only has a love line and no friendship or career line. I find it difficult to write it down, and the love line is always boring.

Make up a hundred 🙂 and write well. Completion is more important than perfection.

How many have you ordered now? 😡

When will it be released? I want to order it all😋