After I Began Cultivating, I Debated Lifespans with a Long-Lived Elf

It's too tender, too tender. The author's writing skills are too tender. His writing is okay, but it's not watery. It's all dry stuff, very dry. I can say that if I polish it up, I can at least double the number of words I've written so far. 😊😊😊

It is completely a novel written to follow the trend. The plug-in system has to be superfluous and the idealistic system suddenly becomes ugly, and it feels like the protagonist is dreaming. In the third chapter, it was revealed that the protagonist is disgusted by the elements. I really don't understand why I wrote this. All of a sudden, the previous so-called low-key development was like a slap in the face. The inexplicable protagonist turned into an evil cultivator, the inexplicable protagonist's system turned into a spiritual plug-in, and the inexplicable protagonist was disgusted by the four elements and it only happened in a few days.

Most of the memes on the Internet are just strong words with so many loopholes that you even use them as the subject of novels! First of all, in the setting of modern immortality novels, spiritual roots are used to sense the existence of spiritual energy. Well, as an elf who is an extraordinary race, he can feel the earth, wind, water, and fire, but he cannot sense the aura existing in the air. Because there are monsters in cultivating immortals, there is absolutely no problem with the body structure. Then there are two possibilities. The world consciousness will not let you cultivate immortality. Aura is an idealistic thing that I think, therefore I am. If you don't believe it, it definitely does not exist! If an elf doesn't believe in cultivating immortality even if he's old and dead, and he wants to cultivate immortality, he might as well consider the method of immortality inherent in the magical worldview.

Author: Have you read it? Keep spraying.

Have you ever been an immortal? Just write it out😡 Have you ever been an immortal? Just write it out😤😤😤😤

To be honest, the world of cultivation with spiritual roots is basically a disabled world, and the ones with the strongest single spiritual roots are even more useless. Immortals are flawless and have their own world, so the most basic thing is that the five elements should be perfect in the body of an immortal, just like a world forming a cycle. As a result, the body that can absorb the five major attributes is a waste body. The strongest single spiritual root is ridiculous. How can you become an immortal if you are missing four of the five elements? If the thunder tribulation comes and fucks you with the four attributes you are missing, you will not die.

The creativity is good, but it is just a meme on the Internet. Throw away the creativity and the writing is average.

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Has the Mahayana period not been able to solve the lifespan problem? He will become an immortal soon. Let alone spiritual roots, he will be a character who can participate in the design of the world. The problem of lifespan cannot be solved yet.

It doesn't convey the feeling of being in a Western fantasy world. The characters' speech and behavior are too strong in the fairy tale. It feels like an Eastern work with a Western fantasy skin.