After I Became an Immortal, I Discussed the Theory of Lifespan with the Longevity Elf.

It's too tender, too tender. The author's writing skills are too tender. His writing is okay, but it's not watery. It's all dry stuff, very dry. I can say that if I polish it up, I can at least double the number of words I've written so far. 😊😊😊

It is completely a novel written to follow the trend. The plug-in system has to be superfluous and the idealistic system suddenly becomes ugly, and it feels like the protagonist is dreaming. In the third chapter, it was revealed that the protagonist is disgusted by the elements. I really don't understand why I wrote this. All of a sudden, the previous so-called low-key development was like a slap in the face. The inexplicable protagonist turned into an evil cultivator, the inexplicable protagonist's system turned into a spiritual plug-in, and the inexplicable protagonist was disgusted by the four elements and it only happened in a few days.

Most of the memes on the Internet are just strong words with so many loopholes that you even use them as the subject of novels! First of all, in the setting of modern immortality novels, spiritual roots are used to sense the existence of spiritual energy. Well, as an elf who is an extraordinary race, he can feel the earth, wind, water, and fire, but he cannot sense the aura existing in the air. Because there are monsters in cultivating immortals, there is absolutely no problem with the body structure. Then there are two possibilities. The world consciousness will not let you cultivate immortality. Aura is an idealistic thing that I think, therefore I am. If you don't believe it, it definitely does not exist! If an elf doesn't believe in cultivating immortality even if he's old and dead, and he wants to cultivate immortality, he might as well consider the method of immortality inherent in the magical worldview.

Author: Have you read it? Keep spraying.

Have you ever been an immortal? Just write it out😡 Have you ever been an immortal? Just write it out😤😤😤😤

To be honest, the world of cultivation with spiritual roots is basically a disabled world, and the ones with the strongest single spiritual roots are even more useless. Immortals are flawless and have their own world, so the most basic thing is that the five elements should be perfect in the body of an immortal, just like a world forming a cycle. As a result, the body that can absorb the five major attributes is a waste body. The strongest single spiritual root is ridiculous. How can you become an immortal if you are missing four of the five elements? If the thunder tribulation comes and fucks you with the four attributes you are missing, you will not die.

The creativity is good, but it is just a meme on the Internet. Throw away the creativity and the writing is average.

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Has the Mahayana period not been able to solve the lifespan problem? He will become an immortal soon. Let alone spiritual roots, he will be a character who can participate in the design of the world. The problem of lifespan cannot be solved yet.

It doesn't convey the feeling of being in a Western fantasy world. The characters' speech and behavior are too strong in the fairy tale. It feels like an Eastern work with a Western fantasy skin.

Literature

Can a lifespan without the same lifespan as heaven and earth be considered an elf? …

Whether they are practicing druids or mage, elves can live forever. In particular, the immortality ability of druids can extend their lifespan ten times. In addition, the original lifespan of elves is basically as long as that of an ancient dragon. With hard work and hard work to break through to the demigod level, they are basically immortal.

The people in the comment area are either those who have practiced immortality or are immortal beings in the Western fantasy world. The author should learn from them 😁

What can I say? It's very ordinary. I thought it would be amazing.

The economic system is a mess, and the details are not up to par. It's just a beginner's article.

Playing an anti-routine meme, but this meme is outdated without careful consideration. The meme of Chinese and Western magic cultivators has been updated to several versions. Use the immortal stream to counter the immortality of the Western fantasy elves. However, the characteristics of the elves are that they live longer than other species and have a beautiful appearance. The so-called immortals are the elves version 2.0, And the longevity of immortals is just a stereotype. Some novels set the life span of elves to tens of thousands of years or even eternity.

Elf: Do I have to cultivate this immortal? 😒Can't I just light the divine fire and gather the divine power to become a god? 😡

The subject matter is OK, but the writing is not good. It just doesn't look good, and there's nothing poisonous about it.

Aren't you very capable of understanding the setting of the spray, and are you so deeply involved in it? Isn't it true that each author has his own setting? Can't understand

Adventures of a Virgin, the union receptionist took the initiative to ask for a date but refused.

As for the information about the heroine No. 1 Being unable to disclose her relationship, it is currently known that she is not a member of a noble family such as the daughter of the team leader, or that she is just discriminating against short-lived species, and there is no discrimination after the magic stone is repaired. And as mentioned before, marrying her sister is easier than her. Her sister is a peak fourth-level magic swordsman with an age of 200+, and the heroine is a third-level archer/ranger, 18 years old. Finally, according to the average age of elves, which is 1,000 years old, the female protagonist is estimated to be 1 and a half years old in the elves, and her sister is 20 years old and is marriageable (). It feels like this is the only reason. The protagonist probably didn't realize that the other person in the elves was just an infant and not an adult. This can also be understood as the reason why he should be locked up.

Why did I come across this book again? It's not as good as keeping a running account or an AI article.

666, Several bandits are only at the peak of level 1, and the elf still hides his strength to let two bandits run away. Are you so confident that these two bandits are not looking for trouble? 😥

The idea is good, but entering the harem without any foreshadowing is really unacceptable, and there are already several reasons in front of it, all of which are reasonable, so I stopped watching it here.

It's just a headline. In the end, elves can become immortals. I'm done with what I want to see.

This elf setting seems to be an immortal species, right?

It feels weird, but I can keep watching

Why fight beyond the level

I saw it before it was put on the shelves, it was quite interesting But I still have to ask, do you have it all? It's not moisturizing, it's easy to get together and part ways