I Drove Gundam in Naruto and Beat the Ninja Alliance Violently

Someone actually wrote about Demon King, let me taste it

"Light Envoy" "Cut in two, the Ruyi Divine Sword!"

Childhood memories, Light Envoy, we ate so well when we were young, but today's children are so pitiful that they can only watch domestic films for mentally retarded people.

I came here to see the Light Envoy, but it's boring since you haven't even appeared once. 88

You can see, it's rare that there aren't any random conspiracy theories, but I prefer the Dragon God to the Lightbringer

This protagonist is a loli-controller, everything looks okay in the previous scenes, but when he encounters a little loli whom he sees every day, he blushes when his head is touched? People with a mental age of 23 told me that they would blush if little loli touched their heads.

Was the protagonist a primary school student or a junior high school student before traveling through time?

Currently, there is no Gundam in the first hundred chapters, but the content is not bad. You can completely ignore the Gundam novels and read them today.

The Eight Gates are really useless. I don't even understand why I need to practice this thing. Besides, both Kai and his father are late bloomers. They have been practicing the Eight Gates their whole lives. That's why they are so awesome. It's so easy to practice and it has become popular a long time ago.

There are many metaphors, but why does the latter smell like Japanese light novels, and is still artificial?

There's no follow-up to your kaleidoscope, right? I said I couldn't turn it off, but I didn't see that I could turn off the kaleidoscope. I haven't seen you mention wearing contact lenses, but you went to school normally. Why is everyone in Konoha blind?

Three questions. First, you wrote the last paragraph of Chapter 5 twice. In the Second Konoha Hospital, McDay's injuries were not serious, so Tsunade wouldn't have to treat him. This is not important, third. After the protagonist and Mike Day finished fighting, they supported each other and walked towards Ichiraku Ramen. One was in his 20s and the other was 5 years old. How about supporting each other. The protagonist pesters McDay, but McDay has to squat and walk if he wants to pester the protagonist.

In the first ten chapters, the plot is too ordinary.

The combat description is a mess. First grade awakening kaleidoscope, sage mode. And then I haven't fought a decent battle for 50 chapters. Is this considered a lack of combat effectiveness? Senju Tobirama had decided to disband the family before his death. You're still writing Senju vs. Uchiha. Why not start from the Warring States Period.

Sauce sauce comes with the roasted bird set meal, chicken drumsticks with green onion, mentaiko zucchini, wagyu beef skewers, 2 lantern skewers, grilled pineapple, plus a portion of sukiyaki pot, add some freshness, and serve the roasted bird!

Uchiha, Eight Gates? I was also discussing this and that with Dai... You said that you can figure out how to learn medical ninjutsu and use Yang shield, and finally you can figure out how to combine Yin and Yang. In the middle, you can improve it by relying on Yang escape or thunder escape. In addition to practicing the eight gates.

Is it a female author? It looks so awkward

Lily text?