I Am the Only One Who Can Make up the Myth of Mountains and Seas at the Beginning

I signed the contract once it was manufactured and haven't seen it played until now. Is that so luxurious? It's too unreasonable and a bit abrupt.

The stinking problem of male-channeled novels is that the female characters are written like wise men. The male characters, except for the protagonist, are basically the same as the brain stems. Don't you think this is more enjoyable?

The subject matter is okay, the writing is average, and the setting logic has some bugs. bug1: Crafting items and levels. The description of making items is too low-level. It doesn't feel like making, but retrieval and screening. For example, making a seven-emotion gourd. If it is something created by the protagonist, it should not be named. When the male protagonist makes something, he almost only specifies the direction, required lifespan, age, function, and even has the property of reducing his presence? Can this be considered as something created by the male protagonist? For example, can the male protagonist delete the special effects of the Seven Emotions Gourd to reduce life expectancy expenses? For example, can the collection scope be reduced? Collection efficiency and other conditions to reduce life expenses? Especially the rank is a complete failure. It's like everything has been set at a certain value. This kind of thing will only appear in a system that already has a valuable civilization. Anyway, it is said to be manufacturing, but judging from the description, it seems to be searching. The male protagonist's IQ and personality appear to be very low. bug2: Just standing in front of the stage and talking about so much knowledge. Under normal circumstances, the identity of the male protagonist will definitely be suspected. Just like at a crime scene, the first thing to suspect must be whether the people nearby are the murderers. And it just so happens that the male protagonist knows so much, no one suspects that there is something wrong with the male protagonist? To put it harshly, everyone who enters is the focus of attention. Normal people don't doubt it, but she doesn't doubt it when the female teacher is described as so intelligent?

So-so, Xiaobai. At least you write other people as normal people. No matter how you feel, they are all mentally retarded.

The writing is not very good, it is not particularly poisonous, there are no major poisons, and there are a lot of small bugs 🙂. I just read this because there is nothing to see.

It feels very much like the AI ​​articles from Persimmon. Com, even the names are very similar 😴😴😴

I finished it as soon as I saw Chapter 30. I wrote about the world of mountains and seas, and the result was a real-life movie and novel setting, and it was put on the shelf as a eunuch.

I suddenly changed the theme. In fact, the original idea was quite good. 80Th floor, and then slowly open up, like Korean underground comics. One world per level. The sudden resurgence of mythology may be due to the fact that not many people watched it. Not hot enough.

. . . I don't understand what you wrote. Let's go.

When I read Chapter 47, the dream was quite interesting, but the content behind it was filled with chats and dialogues, so I skipped through them all!

Why is there no one? I think the setting is quite interesting.