Bright Sword: Flesh Military Industrial Base

The beginning is a bit difficult to get into. Li Yunlong's subordinate is still the company commander and has no autonomy. Moreover, in Liangjian, except for the battalion commander, the company level is replaced one after another. Moreover, materials are in short supply at that time, and you can't develop. If you don't see that Li Yunlong has some good things, will you be taken advantage of by the higher level? Where is your organization? It is impossible for a regiment to be larger than a brigade.

I had just been thinking about promoting the novel for an hour, and then suddenly I felt that it was most practical to continue writing seriously and embody the blueprint in my mind step by step. Maybe more people would see it and make money.

Have you been following Li Yunlong? 38 Years is not too late. Hurry up and go out to open up base areas. When the military region is established, you can at least get one military subdivision. The military subdivision has great autonomy. As long as you have the ability, you can grow to 50,000 people. By the time of liberation, one column will not be able to escape.

The God of War and Courage gives you a thumbs up from the Golden Throne!

Brother, I can't stand it anymore. The main buildings are already very powerful. It's too much for you to have a summoner. You don't think that the protagonist is more professional than the summoner. If he is more professional than the protagonist, why does the system need the protagonist?

Whether it's your military camp or the stables, the soldiers who died in battle and died in the battle are a bit mythical, not to mention re-summoning them. At least the occupied quotas should be released. Otherwise, what should you do if your army is replaced by another round?

It has to be this or that

Can you develop more sources of gold resources? Just rely on the command knife to melt and realize it? Those things were more or less a manifestation of military exploits, and they were later important collections of the military museum. It was a pity that they were all melted, and even if they were all melted, it feels like there wouldn't be much left behind.

Three major disciplines and eight points of attention. All seizures must be returned to the public

Is there anyone watching? Even if it means scolding me, my heart is a bit broken.

It's taken too much for granted, without any excitement or passion.

The title of brother is too feudal, it's best to change it

·The text, plot, and characters are passable as a web writer; ·There are major deficiencies in the brain and ideas, resulting in dull and boring writing; ·It is recommended to learn from experience and consider the next book. ———————— The title of the book Flesh xx is too closely related to the inherent concept of flesh and blood factory, which leads to preconceived impressions and affects readers. After all, people who read the anti-Japanese war came here to kill Japan for fun, but in the end, you also set up a cow and horse flesh and blood factory, which will make people feel uncomfortable at first glance. Goldfinger exchanged Japanese corpses for soldiers and technical population, and the system helped complete the background. Too much pursuit of rationalization leads to a lack of highlights and plot driving force. The golden finger that was supposed to provide satisfaction is now a politician who is good at recruiting troops. The author can only provide satisfaction by leading troops to fight, but the fact is that the author's writing about war is average, and it is not at all the level of Liuliu that can provide satisfaction by writing about battles. In addition, gold fingers are dropped when enemies are killed or skills are strengthened by killing enemies. The enhancement is immediate, and what you see is what you get, which can make readers feel happy just like playing a game. You recruit soldiers... I can only say that it can be fun, but the excellent system localization prevents it. For example, suppose your system recruits not the completely rationalized local soldiers you have carefully set up, but various monsters and monsters from the Warhammer world... The protagonist carefully recruits a group of Bigfoot slave rat soldiers, who usually live in the wild and eat all kinds of garbage. To fight the Japanese, let them dig holes in the ground for a sneak attack, dig holes with explosive bags on their backs, and then blow themselves up when they get in. During the day, he is the people's company commander, and at night, he is the big-footed warlord who enjoys eating little Japan. Of course, this setting will cause a lot of plausibility problems... But at least it is interesting. The biggest problem with the plot of your book is that it lacks interest. Actually, if you think about it, why is Li Yunlong in Bright Sword more attractive than the protagonists of many anti-Japanese dramas? The positive statement must be that the writing is vivid, special, and no longer rigid... In fact, Li Yunlong is more interesting. Internet articles must first be interesting, and then pursue reasonableness. ———————— The above are all personal subjective opinions. If you have different opinions, you are right.