Bones Evolution Guide

I saw a zombie selling ducks and drinking duck blood before, and you, a skeleton, selling pork and drinking pig blood 🙂 The plots cannot be said to be the same, they can only be said to be exactly the same.

This white-bone spirit is too flat. There are so many ghosts and ghosts nearby trying to rob their Yang Qi. The progress of the plot is too slow.

I can only say that the writing is average, I can watch it, but it is not attractive, it is not interesting, and it has no hook. I have no desire to follow up on it. I am afraid that if I save it for a while and watch it again, I may forget all the plot.

Okay, no need to read anymore, it's over

It's like Miss Zombie's evil daily routine. . .

This seems to be a health novel. The protagonist lives in a busy city and grows up by sucking blood But when something happens, he comes to his door Eh The protagonist can't say no ? The neighbor asked you to help swat the mosquitoes. You are really dedicated. Does the mosquito have to absorb the yang energy? Do you have to show off your superb acupuncture skills? If you can dance so well, then you can jump out and make a living You have to hide and pretend at the same time The hiding is not thorough, but the pretending is stingy What rubbish

He died from the poison. First he was seen shooting mosquitoes with broken bones, and then he actually came to ask this "Xiao Li Flying Knife" to help kill mosquitoes in their house.

A level 5 boss really shouldn't imitate a level 1 cute guy, right?

The idea is good, but there is no plot conflict, and there is no main line of suspicion. It is basically a daily running account, plain water, neither fragrant nor smelly, and cannot arouse people's emotions.

Full score 10★, no obvious poisonous points, no obvious advantages, just plain boiled water.

If you don't have comedy talent, don't write it forcefully. It's really embarrassing.

There is quantity but no quality. There is no longer the feeling of reading the first 20 chapters repeatedly for fear of missing a sentence. Write more slowly, and go out for a walk more often to find inspiration. Otherwise, it would be a pity that this book is too late

Novel has a story and content, but your writing skills are so poor, like a draft doesn't look like a finished book. Don't you even read it yourself after you finish it? If it doesn't work, give me the bean bag and check it again. In many places, the preface is inconsistent with the postscript, and the reader has to figure it out on his own. . It's also invincible. Don't always think about learning some humorous style. Speak clearly first and tell the story clearly first.

When are we going to arrange this? It's a pity that there are so many female ghosts.

I think the protagonist, the spirit, is very down-to-earth.

Is this book a follow-up to Miss Zombie? Or are you inspired to learn from it and write it yourself? Is there any Shennong?

What's going on? It was hung up as soon as it was put on the shelf. 🤔

Why do you always make jokes about Chengdu? It really affects the perception.

I think it's quite good, interesting and relaxing, and a bit funny. After reading a lot of other articles, I suddenly found that the light-hearted ones are more interesting. The main line can be pushed slowly. I feel like there aren't many daily articles like this nowadays.

Chapters 105~108 are a bit abstract, like a big mess

Polish the content and stick to it

I've given you the first subscription, and I've also given you a monthly pass and a recommendation pass. I hope you'll stay tuned.

The writing is really good, keep up the good work