Infinite Script: Start with Detective Showdown

Come on, author, take good care of you. The previous scripts are all very good, the characters are not clever and their actions are straightforward and neat. What amazes me most about this book is your description of fighting. It's rare that you don't just fight with force, but you calmly think about each move. However, this book still has a big shortcoming. Each script is too simple and straight. There is no ups and downs in the plot, and it does not arouse the reader's emotions. The script often only needs to be done one thing to solve the script. It does not immerse the reader into the script world at all, and there is no NPC in the script world that leaves a deep impression on the reader. This problem is most obvious in the last two scripts. The knights only need to assassinate one person, and then wait for Li Bai to come. Santu Town As long as you walk around and discover the secrets of the two-dimensional Rubik's Cube, you can get out of Santu Town. Maybe you are laying the groundwork for subsequent plots and will continue to explore these script worlds later. However, after writing a rich script world, it is not impossible to continue to explore it in depth later. It makes readers feel monotonous in the early stage, and it becomes difficult to continue writing later. Come on, author, I look forward to your next book.

Another book delayed by its title

I feel like the writing is pretty good and the logic is okay, but why no one reads it, strange?

It's good to watch, a bit like watching the horror movies in the early years. The Fool has a crushing IQ in the prologue, but as a result, the first script has a "feeling wrong, but I don't know what's going on" message after a while. To be honest, I know this is to create a suspenseful atmosphere, but it's really a bit lacking.

Come on, good books shouldn't be buried.

If the subsequent scripts are of the same quality as the first copy, they will be worth it. However, some problems were exposed at the beginning. For example, many hidden settings of the park need to be explored by oneself and popularized by others. Although they know that they are necessary to promote the plot, adding them after the fact every time will give people a strong sense of making amends after the fact.

Wondering if there is a female protagonist? Hope is a protagonist without a heroine or a woman.

The second script was a big disappointment. Theoretically speaking, the background of this script can be explored more and more exciting than the first one. The storyline of the antagonist Bei Zileng and his brother Wang Buqi was not written at all. To use a movie analogy, when watching "Infernal Affairs", the ending suddenly jumped to Wang Jing's "Chasing the Dragon"

I didn't have much motivation to follow the reading, and each script was set to be in the form of acting. As a result, there was no intuitive improvement in ability after the script was completed, and the authority in the early stage did not write an intuitive route to advance the ability level.

Children born to humans need to be tested when the moon is full to see if they are human or demon? The original owner's younger brother has a hatred for the original owner played by the protagonist. At the beginning of the plot, the protagonist asked the mask maker if he could make a head model. I feel that the protagonist will pretend to be the equal rights boss for his brother in the future.

It feels like when I first watched Horror Paradise

Can you change the background to old Lenden?

The writing is really good. I suggest you change the name to an attractive one and write more lines to make it more attractive. This name really sounds like a wholesale article, and I have no desire to read it.