I Use My Vest to Build the Path to Immortality

After reading ten chapters, the author has great ideas, good literary talent, and good writing skills. There is no Riddler phenomenon, but the world situation is slowly unfolding, which is very comfortable. Then Golden Finger is also very fun, it is a clone, and one person can experience N kinds of things, which can be considered good. But the clones here have to be traced, and there is no joy in drawing cards and pinching people. After all, they have to have their origins. It's quite scary if you think about it carefully. A person who grew up well was used as a clone. Invisible big hand, tsk tsk tsk. I wonder if this will be explained in detail later. Then, the two characters currently used are shadows of real characters. I'm actually a little uncomfortable with this. Because as a clone, the protagonist's thoughts are dominated by the protagonist. Although the traces of development are roughly the same as the original, there is no original burning. Yes, that's what it feels like. Secondly, his vest simulation is no better than the heroic spirit simulation, which will bring some excitement to the history of the people around him. Instead, no matter what he does, he has to pave the way for the protagonist to show off, which feels a bit deliberate. It's hard to get immersed in it quickly🥲

I decided to cut it after all. To be honest, there is no problem with the behind-the-scenes and vest-style stories, and there is no problem with the harem story. The influence of the previous book was so great that everyone came here for the fandom. I hope the next one will be better!

Ma Jia Liu, I think you should go back to writing fan fiction for Ma Jia Liu. I feel like it's going to collapse. I feel like you'll get popular if you write about Zhe Tian in the behind-the-scenes Ma Jia flow. Most people came for Zhe Tian in the last book. You don't write about Zhe Tian anymore. This popularity seems to be gone. Zhe Tian fans don't feel like it. The behind-the-scenes Ma Jia flow might be good. It might be better if you add Zhe Tian to it. Even I came here for Zhe Tian.

Fans cannot guarantee stable updates, and writing your own worldview is even more tiring 😅😅😅

When I saw the settings, my eyes lit up. I wanted to be a divine farmer and taste all the joys and sorrows! The book is coming!

This is well written, feels fast-paced, and very enjoyable - Xiancao

Is the clone a character that originally existed, or was it arranged by a plug-in?

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To be honest, I thought it was a fan creation at first, but after reading more than a dozen chapters, I lost interest. It's better to continue writing fan fiction. Popular themes like Zhe Tian or Mortal are quite good.

The witchcraft doll's cloth strip is a clue. Other methods can also be used. (The protagonist must have the top level of strength in the world or be close to it before leaving the sect's mansion. If you don't show your strength... It's boring for the protagonist to be in the sect's mansion all the time.) The immortal cultivator cannot appear too early. Jianghu Chaotang cannot be written too early.

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The first clone was a mess It's boring, I thought the clones were on the same stage Is it the same as the reincarnation flow Die one clone and open another Maryoshka doll