In the Seventeenth Year of Kaihuang, I Wrote My Last Will in the Exam Hall

I was looking for a book late at night, and I saw very poisonous points starting from the second chapter, and then I forced myself to read on. By the time I read the five strategies of hook and eight in Chapter 19, I was completely poisoned to death. 1. At the beginning of Chapter 2, is the Analects of Confucius included in the Sui Dynasty's classics and meanings test? After the unification of the Sui Dynasty, the Analects of Confucius was only treated as basic reading material. You can directly come to the "Classic Meaning Questions" of "The Analects of Confucius Zilu". Also, do you understand the meaning of the classics during the Sui Dynasty and the Wen Dynasty? Just write a lot of articles about it. What kind of nt behavior? Others only tried to explain the basic content at that time, and it has not developed to the level of the Song, Ming and Qing Dynasties. You write an article about the Ming Dynasty, and it has nothing to do with it. Later, the emperor's reading was really messy and unbearable 2. The third chapter was really overturned. The prince was still alive (it was really abolished in 600). The eldest son of the prince's concubine secretly took the imperial examination and was controlled by Yang Jian throughout the whole process. He was closely monitored and controlled. Some people thought he was doing it for me during the Ming and Qing Dynasties. Directly close to the face and open up, a carriage that has just left the examination room is out of control and hurtles with precision, and then the protagonist rolls to avoid it. Putting aside the plot, I really admire the superhuman character of the protagonist. Going back to the plot, outside the imperial examination room and around the corner of the square, let me ask you which fool would choose this place to kill. Under Emperor Street, the place where the pillars are selected, there are no guards to assassinate in the street, right? Let's just describe the protagonist Superman's one-man show. After escaping, he told him to go back. Then the servant clearly said that he would assassinate and then find the guards. Hehehehehe, he was about to go back. And because of the servant's words, he went to see the accident scene, wiped the axle and said he had applied a lot of tung oil, and even smelled it and said he had eaten drugged fodder, and then concluded that it was an assassination. If someone really wants to assassinate you, why don't they look at what you did after you were assassinated? Your brain circuit is quite novel. If you say you continue to act like a idiot, I'll just slap you two eldest son, okay? Third, there is also a question about the Sui Dynasty. What kind of pavilion style did you use? Four, do you want to see what you wrote? Emperor Wen of the Sui Dynasty, a usurper to establish the country, faced the powerful power of the Guanlong military aristocratic group and the complicated political situation. His suspicion of the heroes and strict supervision were originally normal means to maintain the stability of the rule. You said "The imperial court regarded ministers as family traitors", I really laughed. What about the serious loss of government decrees and supervision, "Ten Sheep and Nine Animal Husbands", can you please understand it? Can we understand the development of the three provinces and six ministries system? "The emperor's suspicion comes from having to guess", which is pure nonsense. He co-authored Yang Jian to carry out large-scale inspections, check hidden households, and guard against tycoons. Is it not because he wants to collect taxes, recruit troops, or consolidate imperial power? Is it purely because he has no idea? Does this causal relationship mean why not eat minced meat? Pure correct bullshit. If the emperor of the Sui Dynasty could govern the country by relying on his inner confidence, and he also carried out supervision, what kind of government and military system would he have... Then, Yang Jian, an emperor who relied on the rebellion of the leaders of the Long Army to rise to power, you said to him, "Stop being suspicious, let's rebuild the trust contract." Is it funny to you? In the end, I saw a "hidden cost" to scare me, and let a founding emperor who licked blood from his knife to sit on the throne, and calculated every day about military power and political power, suffered from insomnia and tossed and turned every day because of lack of trust? Fifth, the relic left by a biological mother in Chapter 6 was placed before the person died 👍👍👍 The AI ​​was not adjusted well, right... Chapter 78 is true💩, Yang Yong was drunk and wore a dragon robe. The history books said that Yang Yong had a mediocre nature and a dark mind. He was not crazy and looking for death. A person who has been a prince for twenty years, no matter how frustrated he is, can't publicly wear a dragon robe and become drunk and crazy in the front hall of his house. Does this person think that the process of deposing the prince is too slow, right? Just hand him the knife? 6. What did Dugu Jialuo write? She completely abandoned Yang Yong to help the second child. You describe a purely political creature. You must know that Yang Yong was drunk and wore a dragon robe. His speed would have been useless a long time ago. He gave the crown prince position to the second child and looked down on his eldest grandson too much. Byd will examine it again here and forgive me... The protagonist wants to awaken family affection with two sweet words, and then writes about absolute obedience, haha Seven, a modern liberal arts student, who can be beaten with 20 sticks without saying a word, can still walk into the palace and kneel down straight, superman wow Eight, the emperor is ready to ask, you make an embarrassing twist and say "faith" and "broken faith" and don't ask, do you want to be more outrageous? The foundation of Yang Jian's imperial power is TM's military power, checks and balances, and terror, not "faith." If you tell him with all your heart and soul, "I was wrong, I speculated," he will only become more suspicious: "This kid is retreating in order to advance, and his goals are bigger." And "unreserved confession" about Yang Jian's suspicious background in his later years, isn't this just a piece of meat on a chopping board for others to slaughter. If Yang Jian really wanted to "believe" this, he would have been tricked to death by powerful officials. Nine, without asking, he inserted some information about Liaodong military affairs and started to show off. The plot is pure and simple. When the military situation in Liaodong comes, take a second look and see Yang Jian imitating Boss Cao of the New Three Kingdoms and throwing bowls, haha. Historically, Yang Jian was known as "profound and powerful, with no expression of joy or anger". He was already 58 years old in the 18th year of his founding of the emperor. What kind of troubles has he not seen for a man who has been in power for nearly 20 years? Will he throw a memorial in front of his juniors and yell at them just because of a side report? The conquest of Goguryeo was a national-level decision. Yang Jian's reaction was that he was furious on the spot, immediately summoned the ministers, and shouted for beating and killing... In real history, when he made the decision in the 18th year of the founding of the Emperor, he was furious first, but still prepared for several months (although the preparation was insufficient). This kind of description that just slaps the head directly reduces him from the founding hero to a reckless village guy. Ten, let's look at the protagonist again. Yang Jian is directly reduced to wisdom. The founding emperor actually needs Sun Tzu to ask "What is the purpose of the war" before making decisions? You still patiently explained the historical legal system. Are you afraid of being ashamed of the Qin Emperor and the Han Dynasty by returning the responsibility to your homeland? Laughing to death. The protagonist only needs to memorize a few more numbers from the "Military Food Examination" before he dares to show off his logistics in front of the emperor on such a horse. Do you want to "defeat more with less and reach the hinterland at any time" to make Goguryeo surrender? Completely ignoring geography, climate, and enemy organization. Historically, the Sui and Tang Dynasties used hundreds of thousands of troops to solve the problem, which took hundreds of years. The protagonist always wanted to "solve it efficiently". 💩 On the 11th, the protagonist's grandson began to transcend the limitations of time and space. He went back to the things built by Emperor Yang of Luocang, the Grand Canal opened by Emperor Yang of Luoyang, and the transportation of grain and grass to the south of the Yangtze River in Luoyang. Everything was moved to Da Gaoyuan 😄😄😄 and was poisoned to death. The emperor was frightened when he heard about 5 million stones of food and grass after fighting for such a long time, haha. Then he talked about the Liaodong grain levy. Based on the data, talking to this kind of political creature about the people directly levying their life-saving grain would be depressing. Isn't it true that the emperor doesn't criticize or read these mistakes? They also said that the Sui Dynasty had a lot of food but could not sustain this war. Losing would shake the foundation of the north and the country. The Sui Dynasty, the great unification and the founding of the emperor's rule, could not be fought 😄😄😄. It was ridiculous to laugh, and there was a people's rebellion by requisitioning grain. What happened to the national grain pile? "The warehouse is overflowing and the warehouse is full". After long-term accumulation, it is absolutely abundant. The protagonist directly threatened Emperor Wen by taking the "bottomless pit of squandering" as a fait accompli, and also claimed that confiscation of people's food supplies would cause a popular uprising. A dynasty that had just ended its division, had an unprecedentedly full treasury, and was preparing to flex its muscles, found that the treasury could not support it. What others, Emperor Wen of the Sui Dynasty, worried about was not "no food", but "the food cannot be transported, and the loss is too large to be cost-effective." Do others lack your grain? 😄😄😄 The war fought by Liaodong at the border has shaken the foundation of the north. Do you want to see in the official history that Gao Yuan can immediately apologize if he loses and says that he is "Liaodong's dung soil minister Yuan", and then hello, me, hello everyone Twelve, Lord Jiao Xian's five strategies, Huo Qubing was mentioned before the presentation, directly copied the Han Dynasty's cavalry blitzkrieg against the nomads on the grasslands, and copied it to the Sui Dynasty's war against the agricultural city-state Goguryeo in the mountains of Liaodong. Goguryeo had a strong city and rugged mountains, otherwise Yang Liang would have won 30w earlier. What are you talking about Huo Qubing's tactics? Come on, the first strategy is to adapt the elites of the 8w Northland to the bitter cold in advance. Do you know what elites are? They also assemble quickly and fight to the death to reduce the pressure on the food road. Haha, do you know what the military system is? You can directly say that the standing army is ready to be decommissioned, start a war without consumption, and have elites with good support so that they can guard the food road. The second strategy, what kind of AI editing, inconsistent from top to bottom, a surprise attack by dead soldiers, defying the will of heaven, tens of thousands of elites went to the mountains of Liaodong in simple clothes to cross the mountains and ridges, there must be something wrong with their brains, and they also imitated Huo Qubing, you are playing yurts on the prairie, and you are burning grain and grass. It is hard to say whether you are mobile or not. Where did you get the information about other people's granaries? And do you know the way? Do you have a guide like Zhao Ponu? Unbelievable stuff. The third strategy is to give a big stick to a sweet date, and go to Liaodong to protect the Sui people. Do you want to read what you wrote? Liaodong is a great ethnic blending area, and others are not your people, but you still give food to win people's hearts. You used to destroy other countries. It's so abstract. The fourth strategy, the most outrageous of all, was to confiscate the tycoons in Liaodong and Hebei who had annexed the land and confiscate their property. You really have a serious problem in your head. The power of Hebei and Shandong is an important political foundation for the rule of the Sui Dynasty, and it is also the main support for the logistics of this war. Before the war started, in the name of "annexing land", which was a common phenomenon at the time, they systematically ransacked and robbed the homes of the ruling elites behind them? This is tantamount to forcing the entire Kanto region to rebel. The frontline army's food routes and sources of troops will be cut off immediately, and internal rebellion will break out before the war against Goguryeo. Also, do you think it's easy to "attack local tyrants and divide their land"? If it were that simple, Yang Jian would have collected them a long time ago. He really wants to turn you into ashes after hearing what you said. The fifth strategy is the last yy of the first four strategies. Yang Jian can still praise you after listening to your five strategies, haha

The influence of Qing palace drama is simply "deeply rooted in people's hearts"😐

It started off well, but after going round and round and having to go outside to avoid disaster, the routine of farming, developing and advancing technology suddenly became clichéd. This kind of plot cannot be wrong, but it is a classic plot that has been badly written. It's like writing fantasy novels now and also writing about losers breaking off their engagements. It was like Hedong in the past thirty years. It's really not attractive.

Don't want to support his father Yang Yong's rise to power and go to Lingnan? Looking for a laugh? Don't you think you can die quickly enough?

The writing before Chapter 31 was quite good. In Chapter 31, I began to think about the emperor being far away and seeking to be exiled to Lingnan. It was mentioned earlier that the superiors were extremely jealous and the pig's feet were already showing their edge. Wouldn't someone keep an eye on him if he was really exiled? The struggle for hegemony by force is far away from the center. When the second generation succeeds to the throne, will they watch the protagonist become bigger? If you still want to write about power and strategy, you should change the text. If you want to write about military hegemony, then so be it. Chapter 35 is also very strange to write a chapter about beef. It talks about how to make roast beef and steak in this era. I want to write about the protagonist's shortcomings because he is greedy for food. Can we really eat beef at this time? Especially in the current situation where the prince wearing a yellow robe has just ended, are you still eating beef?

The beginning is okay, but the later part is not so good. It's too pretentious and not very down-to-earth. The later part is not easy to write. The protagonist is too bright in the early part, but the writing style in the later part cannot keep up.

I feel like I used a lot of AI, and then I made some simple changes. The smell of DeepSeek is too strong.

After reading this, I have a few questions. The protagonist does not ascend to the throne through inheritance, and I want to go to Lingnan to figure it out. First of all, if you go to Lingnan, you can basically ascend to the throne normally. Don't even think about it. If the protagonist thinks that he can help Yang Yong ascend to the throne if he goes to Lingnan, it's another matter. Secondly, the first time Yang Guang came to power was not to kill the protagonist. The protagonist felt that he could defeat Yang Guang with a Lingnan. That can only be said to be awesome. Third, if the protagonist gives up the throne and fights guerrillas in Lingnan, and waits until Yang Guang messes up the country and then comes out to fight for hegemony, then is the previous point still meaningful? It's no different from the usual struggle for hegemony in the late Sui Dynasty!

Interesting. Looks. Finally, we have to take the route of going out to avoid trouble. But novels cannot be written like this. The starting point is good. Do you know why you can't write like this? Haha, the key to historical writing is to tease famous historical figures. Never mind the teasing. This spindle cannot move. You have avoided disaster in Lingnan, so where are the historical celebrities? This opening chapter is quite nice. I think it's pretty good-looking. I can't write about Lingnan to avoid disaster in the future. The opening chapter expresses frustration and the majesty of imperial power. According to novel thinking, the next step is satisfaction. Get majesty, get rights. That is, giving candy to eat to induce a feeling of pleasure. Or you can take a different approach. No matter how you write it, you can. Only one cannot escape from historical celebrities. Cannot be separated from the protagonist's progress and goals. Well, it's very dangerous to write about avoiding disasters in Lingnan. The author should think about it himself. This is the problem I see. The author can read the history of fire. Basically there are few who are in a lower position. Protagonist situation. Even if you are fighting for hegemony and rebellion, the protagonist will not be placed in a low position and weak position. Understand what I mean. Not identity. The poor rebel leader is actually in charge. It is a superior position similar to that of an emperor. Hehe. The author thinks for himself. But please note, the next plot depends on how you write it. Haha. Careful.

Did the author use AI?