My Girlfriend Is a Problem Girl

I feel that in this type of literature, apart from the male protagonist's perspective, the core audience should be mainly women. To the heroine, I am a bad girl, an easy girl, but I deserve someone who is 100% satisfied with me, has a perfect figure and appearance, and will save me and save me 😅 You ask me what I paid for, kissing, hugging and lifting me up? Isn't this enough? Moreover, I feel that the love of the male protagonist is a kind of hypocritical or nihilistic love, purely because of the person assigned by the mission.

It's a typical start with a debt-contract boyfriend. I thought there would be some reversal, but unfortunately there was nothing. It was very boring.

One day has passed since the trial period, and the results are not very satisfactory, but fortunately, I am a relatively laid-back person, and this is my first book, so I will still write it down seriously (◍ ´꒳` ◍) But I still want to ask everyone to keep reading, even if you turn to the last page and hang up for a minute, please! ! ! Gossip about the work: The beginning of this work is indeed a bit cliché, but it is still a little different. Each character's different personality should have different reactions in the same plot, and there should be some new ideas in the subsequent plots. If you really feel bored, I am extremely sorry for wasting your time (Kneeling apology. Jpg) If you have any suggestions, you can directly post them in the comment area. Although they may not be adopted, I will definitely check them out! ! ! Finally, thank you to everyone who clicked on the work (◍ ´꒳` ◍)

Generally speaking, it's okay. Some people in the comment area have doubts and some are bored, but I think it's still okay. First of all, the sugar is real. It must be praised. Many people have stomachaches when watching it. Although they also have stomachaches when fighting Fujiwara later, the overall tone is based on sweet stories. But depending on the details, there should be Shura Field later. I hope it won't cause stomachache. Speaking of the character, Sakurai Rena is a typical loan girlfriend, but she feels a little innovative, and her character is really ideal, arrogant and arrogant, coquettish and arrogant, perfect. As for the cliché, it's okay. There wasn't much borrowed money, and Yuka Matsudo also found out about it, so we can't regard this as a regular borrowed girlfriend. I don't know what happened in the following two posts (I suspect I didn't see Chapter 🔟?) And the "innocent" information is really awesome, and it completely rationalizes the heroine's behavior. The plot of Asakawa Kaede is really good. I have read a lot of novels that start with a good impression, but I fell in love with one thing immediately. I feel very speechless. The plot of this sister is really good, with multiple events in a row, and the writing is also good. It must be praised. I didn't like it when I was a kid, but later I liked it very much. It was a bit yandere-y, so that's what I liked. Fujiwara Iori's plot... The appearance is indeed novel, and the final emotional change is a bit abrupt, but it comes around later, and it's okay. By the latest chapter (coordinate 33), it can be seen that I have begun to trust the male protagonist. Based on the previous author's writing style, I guess it will be sweet again. Matsudo Yuka's appearance is relatively short, but she can see that she has a lot of personality. Sanqianyuan Dongling has not appeared yet, and I don't know when she will appear. However, the longer the author lays it out, the harder it will be to write. I hope it won't collapse. As for the male protagonist, it can be seen that the author is intentionally or unintentionally shaping the image of the male protagonist. The image of the male protagonist does seem perfect in front of him, but there is also a slight problem. It should be that the author is paving the way for the male protagonist's shortcomings later, right?

Fujiwara's story may not be very good in the early stage, but such a plot will never happen again. I hope you don't care. If you don't like it, you can skip it directly. I personally prefer to write sweet stories and daily interactions between male and female protagonists. Shura scenes will also appear later, but I will pay attention to the scale of Shura scenes. I hope everyone will support them (◍ ´꒳` ◍)

It's so right. Write it down for me.

How do you feel about the opening scene? 😥

In light novels, you should not underestimate the male protagonist.

Sauce sauce comes with the roasted bird set meal, chicken drumsticks with green onion, mentaiko zucchini, wagyu beef skewers, 2 lantern skewers, grilled pineapple, grilled shrimp with perilla, plus a portion of sukiyaki, add more oil, and serve the roasted bird!

Personal feelings: 1. The plot is too bland and there is no desire to watch it 2. The protagonist is like a puppet of the system, playing the image of the perfect boyfriend for the rewards of the system (or worse, being a licking dog), without any desire to take on the role.

Have you written anything else? It looks familiar.

Like the author😍😍

I don't know why I've read dozens of them, but I've already seen the plot develop like this in the precursor to the unfinished eunuch in the future. When the male protagonist's ex-girlfriend appears later, the author basically can't grasp the subsequent development in the middle of the novel. In the last eunuch, the plot is unfinished. I've seen countless such developments, and I can basically see it all at a glance. In addition, the author's writing skills are not very strong, so I gave it a 4.6 Out of 10 starting point. I don't want to control some details, especially the unit of money. In Japan, it is yen and can also be written as yen. You can just write it as yuan. Do you know what it feels like to see lemon tea priced at 7,000 yuan. The novel is currently rated 6 out of 10, and if you don't grasp it well at the end, it will be rated 2. I'll polish it a bit more and keep up the good work. I feel like a novice who has been writing for a short time, maybe a year.

Is this book somewhat similar to "Tokyo Sick Girlfriend"?

The work is updated every day from 18:00 to 19:00 (it may change in the future, but if it changes, I will tell everyone in time). If there are easter egg chapters or additional updates, it will not be fixed. The time will be random (◍ ´꒳` ◍) The last new book issue is very important to read. I hope that everyone who has collected it can turn to the last chapter and stay for a minute, please! ! !

I really like the character of the male protagonist. It's been a long time since I've seen a male protagonist who is very frank with the female protagonist and doesn't lie. He speaks straightforwardly and has strong actions. It's great.

So this is an Aboriginal protagonist? ?

Sure enough, no one has written well on this subject.

It's a bit strange. Regarding Asakawa Kaede's so-called "person I like", although it seems that he doesn't really like her, there is no explanation as to why there is such a thing as "the person he likes".

The shadow of another book can be seen in the text, the girlfriend who is still vain and studies art, the sister who covets her brother, the first one who broke up unilaterally System indicators for developing a girlfriend But the good and bad thing is how to transform the protagonist from a layman who squeezes the value of a tool man into a modern saint who cultivates immortality and redeems himself through his own interests It is written from a more realistic and detached perspective, which greatly reduces the utilitarianism and optimizes the female character. The Lord's Senses (I went back and flipped through it) is relatively slow-paced, and I can't say conflict. The daily writing is very bland, and the heroine's portrayal is not sharp If I really want to be specific and detailed, it is to squeeze the girlfriend into a daily routine of serious love and then lead to a better future It's not that the writing is not good, it is a bit warm, and it also arouses interest to see how the Shura field is triggered later, so I will write so much