Warhammer Is Not Like That at All!

I came in after looking at the title and the light novel tag. I originally thought it was about falling in love with Huang Pizi and the Four Gods, but this is what happened... There is no big guy, there is no big guy, the meaning of the little boy and the girl is unclear, and I have no idea what it is about Is it a real drama? If you come up with this title and submit it to this section, why don't you change the title, the introduction, and switch it to science fiction? I have read more than 30 chapters and there is basically no plot to give away any corners The evaluation is that I want to write a drama but also want to get Gala traffic, but I am not happy with both ends.

You Khorne cultist is not Khorne at all. Either you can fight or you are a Khorne cultist. You Khorne cultist is so convoluted that you look like a Tzeentch cultist.

Finished watching it. The overall pace is good. But I am very disappointed. Where is the big female in your profile? At present, there are 45 chapters, except for a mysterious young man with unknown meaning. I don't know what foreshadowing is being laid or there is no foreshadowing at all. In addition, there is a Dark Angel Riddler. The length is even more pitiful Then your introduction is not just selling sheep over others. There is no plot description in your introduction, only "I am writing about sex change Warhammer" But in fact, this kind of plot with a slow and steady handover at the bottom is actually quite old-fashioned. I came here because there is a big female guy in the introduction With your current plot, I don't know how you can speed up to get a big guy. How about changing the introduction Also, the resurrection is actually quite good, but your story is not dangerous enough to require resurrection, so this golden finger will be in vain Come on

This... This isn't right! This is not the case in Warhammer at all! ! You are wrong! !

Normally I don't look at things that are ugly, but if they are like this, I have to taste them carefully.

The writing is very good. If you keep writing patiently, you will get good results sooner or later. I saw the author's complaint at the end and would like to share my opinion. Today I opened a MC Warhammer novel and this novel at the same time. MC Warhammer's novels are not very good in terms of logic and characterization. Compared with this one, this one is much better, but it seems that the other party's results are better. As far as my personal experience is concerned, if you can read it, the author's novels will retain more readers. Then there are only two reasons for the poor performance, one is the attraction level, and the other is the reading level. 1. Attraction level: -mc Warhammer is obviously more clear. When readers see the name, they will know that this is a big attraction and generate expectations. -As a reader, the first impression of this novel is that it is a bad joke, but is it actually a harem novel (glgame gag)? Or something else? There is no clear expression. 2. Reading level: -MC Warhammer complies with the readers' expectations. From the beginning, it opens up big hooks through MC and arranges the plot according to needs. Although it is mentally retarded, readers don't care because it is expected. -This book is obviously telling a slightly serious story in an exaggerated background. It is undeniable that I like this very much, and many foreshadowings and hints are also very interesting. However, the cost of reading will definitely increase accordingly, the improvement from the system is relatively limited, and the feedback of pleasure is relatively slow. Talk too much. Whether writing a book, making a video, or working, positive feedback is the author's core driving force. But if you want to express yourself, it will not be achieved overnight. There is a process to get more understanders and supporters. My personal suggestion is to start by expanding your introduction to build expectations for readers, build a plot that your target group will like based on expectations, and keep it updated. In fact, renewal is the greatest exposure. Gold can only be seen by people if it continues to shine. Finally come on 👍

Well, the title of the book is indeed correct, "Warhammer is not like this at all!" . Now it seems that it is really true. How should I put it? I believe that a large number of readers were tricked into it by the introduction and the beginning. The purpose is to see how fun it will be to see the battle between the crazy woman and the sexual transformation of the emperor's son. Actually, for me, Chapters 1 to 11 and 46 to 55 of this book are the only content that I am interested in. It can be said that if you delete all the content between Chapters 11 to 46, it will have no impact on my reading experience. After all, the political games and adventures in Chapters 11 to 46 are really mediocre in the Western fantasy novels from the starting point, not even to the point of being tasteless and discarded. I want to emphasize that I am a Cloud Hammer, so I was deceived by the introduction. In my opinion, Warhammer is a big cesspool. If someone writes a Warhammer fanfic, I would rather see the cesspool managed well, so that it looks good and has a sense of purpose, or it can give everyone some fun and throw firecrackers into the cesspool, which is purely a spoof. Looking at it now, it is an ordinary story with more than 30 chapters. How can I put it, it is not a big hit. Maybe those who are familiar with the Warhammer world view will find it very restored and interesting. For me, who was deceived into it, I can see that the author is writing seriously. I also respect and understand this idea of ​​using gimmicks to attract traffic. Wish you better and better as you write more

I have never seen this before, I want to stand up and watch.

It's hard to tell from the introduction what I want to write about, whether I will participate in any events, or is it just my daily life of slowly climbing up the ranks as a law enforcer in the hive city. I don't see the role of the gender flipping of Space Marines and Battle Sisters in front of me. They basically have nothing to do with them in the first thirty chapters.

Some readers said that the last few chapters have a strange smell, and maybe someone has changed. Yes, you guessed it right, the person has been replaced. The original author, Low Carbon Snow Leopard, had poor performance in writing books. He ate red envelopes and support packages every day until he became delirious. Now he asked me, High Carbon Snow Leopard, to write... If you are not joking, I have had some mental fluctuations recently due to unsatisfactory performance in writing books. When it comes to creation, everything is fine if you have a good attitude, and there is a constant flow of inspiration, but when you have a bad attitude, it is very painful to code. On the other hand, a few days ago some readers said that my pace was too slow and procrastinating. I thought about it and it seems to make sense? So I want to try to speed up the pace, maybe this can make the reading more interesting? So when the speed suddenly starts to increase from Wei Dao, there will naturally be some changes... But whether it is a good change or a bad change, I will stay in Mongolia for now. Above.

After the Great Expedition was a complete success, everything was booming. Then the Space King saw that many of the guys were bored to death, so he took the initiative to disappear and play a thousand-year hide-and-seek game with them.

First of all, let's talk about the advantages. The author's description of the female Space Marines is quite consistent with Warhammer. The World Eaters are mad dogs, and the Fallen Angels are on the run. I am looking forward to the Night Lords and the Emperor's Children. Secondly, the protagonist is not very good at fighting, not even a psyker. Finally, the author has not written a single bit of content consistent with the introduction. Anyway, forget about these 40-odd chapters about Warhammer. Instead, he wrote "In the Name of the Emperor", which talks about the sophistication of human relations and officialdom in the background of Warhammer. The latest chapter did mention that there will be a new big female guy soon, but it still has nothing to do with the naughty little guy.

Do the yellow-skinned people in this world end up with little boys every day?

There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand readers. I have always felt that I am actually deceiving myself if I cannot hear the harsh voices. So what many readers said in the comment area are actually quite sharp. According to some old authors, keeping them will only affect my grades, but I also keep them. Because they at least read my book and pointed out the problems sincerely (and many of the problems are very good. I did write some mistakes in the early stage, and I am working hard to correct them; there are also some that I feel are not my problem, such as why the followers of Khorne are plotting. I think I should write it clearly. This is because the real mastermind behind the scenes is a Tzeentch wizard) In any case, the suggestions and opinions of these book friends are a kind of help and feedback to me. In my opinion, everything is a two-way choice. The meaning of the comment area is to let you know what the shortcomings and advantages of this book are. After reading these reviews, you will know that this book may not be perfect in some places, but if you are still willing to come in, sit down and listen to this story, give it a try. That's good, we can walk together in this story for a while. If you feel bad, just cut it out at any time. And if you feel that after listening to the story for so long, there are some words that you feel uncomfortable saying, then you can do whatever you want. As long as it is not a baseless rant, I can guarantee that I will never do anything to your comments, and you can feel free to speak freely (but if you just start blaming without having read the book, then I'm sorry)

When will the war begin? In the early days of Warhammer, it was okay to write about the protagonists' intrigues and development on a planet, but it's not good to keep doing this.

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There are no obvious drawbacks other than being a bit slow. The previous gimmicks of the female Space Marines and the female Primarchs were not reflected very well, but the recent update seems to have made some improvements. I can only say that the author is finally on the right track. Personally, I think it's a bit awkward to meet the final boss of the event and then be killed with a knife... I can only say that people have different opinions. After all, Goldfinger can't just hide like this. But describing a scene through repeated rebirths just makes me feel that the number of words is a bit low, but it can be seen that the author is also aware of this problem and is accelerating progress. Besides, there is no need to worry about the writing. If the writing is bad, I will not leave a book review. I will give up after reading the first chapter. It allows me to catch up with the final progress and give two monthly passes. The writing is at least 70% or 80% higher than the author's seven points. As for the design of the story, it seems that there is no problem overall. It is a classic story of Tzeentch and Khorne destroying moths in the lower area. It is quite satisfactory, but there is still room for improvement. In short, I still recommend it to some old bookworms who are not interested in reading. The female Astartes and female Primarchs will come up later, and there must be a lot of life. From what I have seen so far, it looks like the Space Wolves will have a silver party after the battle. I enjoy watching this small detail anyway. In addition, I personally want to contact the author, and I can turn some long-term failure timelines into extras. Occasionally write to supplement the world view and increase the three-dimensional sense of the characters. There is no need to write out such a long failure timeline. It interrupts the reading rhythm and is quite abrupt.

The protagonist can load files, get skill bonuses, and slowly become stronger. Why should he become a Thunder Warrior? Or are you saying that you don't plan to be a part of the empire in the future, but are planning to become a gangster/a peptide/a pirate?

The Ministry of Justice chapter only had problems with the main plot being chaotic, the protagonist's combat power was low, the protagonist's abilities were stretched, and the plot had almost nothing to do with the title. But now it has no features at all. The interaction with the chaotic female lunatic that I originally expected is gone now. A World Eater or a Tzeentch birdman can still have some plot, but now so many canned Chaos are just crushed to death by the protagonist's sudden increase in combat power, suddenly changed to a Thunder Warrior, suddenly rushed to the main plot, ran to Macragge, and then spoiled it for Guilliman, and then what? It turns out that the planet is no longer available? Is there any difference whether you have a gender change or not?

The original selling points were the file loading and the big female sex, but in the end both selling points were marginalized. At the beginning, it was suspenseful and solved through cheating and rebirth, but in the end, it went straight to the sky and started to develop power and farm. The writing in the fanfic about Master Thirteen's Concubine of the Dragon is bad. What's the point of changing the gender but keeping the same content? What a pity, I thought it was the 40K version that destroyed the world today?

It's great. I love reading it. I hope you can stick with it and watch it finish normally.

There are still not enough Space Marines! Looking forward to new roles

The Law Enforcer chapter can be said to be an anticlimax, but the Guilliman chapter is just unclear and too watery One thing to say, if the author really can't write two chapters, then he should simplify the content and write one chapter.

I saw dozens of pictures before and couldn't stand it without the big guy standing there. Now there are several big guys. Isn't it just that one guy who showed up?

Warhammer Black Library has novels about the protagonist of the Arbitrator. You can learn from the settings, characters, and events. Anyway, not many people in China read it in English. You can use AI to read it and learn from it. If you want to write about the protagonist group, the bottom line is that you are not capable of writing original plots, but the popular main plots from the starting point are badly written, such as the thirteenth master of the group. If you can write a badass protagonist and conquer Sheila Calpurnia, you will be the first to try it. The plot of Kai Xiaobao is also good. In short, it is about digging into the library.

I hope the author will go further in his next work 😳