Martial Arts Immortality: I Have Full Cultivation Speed

What? To achieve a realm breakthrough, martial arts skills must also be up to standard. Martial skills and martial arts are two different things, right?

The writing is pretty good, good luck to the author!

There are too many interludes and it doesn't feel good to read, but the plot is still okay.

When I saw Chapter 60, the protagonist in the first chapter was at the peak of Qi cultivation, and he was still at the peak of Qi cultivation until Chapter 60. The reason was to polish his skills and increase the strength of his soul. Isn't this the background of the Cang Yuan Tu I had before I ate tomatoes? Demons ≈ Monsters, even the X-sect has it, a low-end version of Cang Yuan Tu. Then let me talk about the problem now. Most of your plots are described from the perspective of supporting characters, which is not good. It makes readers feel that you are too verbose. You repeatedly describe the inner activities of the characters on the side of the road, resulting in a pitiful character vision. There is also a realm. You have not made a breakthrough in 60 chapters. If you read this in a new book for a newcomer, you will shake your head. The challenge of leapfrogging is already outdated, and you are still writing in the same old way. The last thing is the demon core explosion. Are you talking about the self-destruction of the demon boss, and the protagonist and a small party rushed to the scene first? ? ? Fairy plot

It's also contrary to nature. If you don't make a breakthrough, you won't make a breakthrough. There are more than 50 episodes, and it's perfect from the first episode. It keeps dragging on. You might as well not make a breakthrough until the end.

The writing is a bit watery, but that's not a big flaw. The problem is the leapfrog challenge. It's hard to say whether this is a big problem, but at least for the current Internet literature, it is a taboo. Also, I would like to ask, fellow authors, how do you consider character levels? Are primary school students who know calculus still primary school students? Are college students who failed high school math still college students? I don't have the answer to the above question, so I won't say more, but the following question is a problem that many authors have. I have said it many times, but I still have to say that whether it is reality or the world in books, many things and words are boomerangs. If you can kill others by leapfrogging, others can kill you by leapfrogging. If you can explode, others can explode. If you can take the moral high ground, others can too. Unless you are writing a mindless piece of writing, you need to pay attention to these. Farewell.