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It's frustrating. It's described as if the protagonist is very powerful, but in the end, anyone can come and beat him up. It's okay if you don't seek revenge on others afterwards. You don't even dare to kill the minions who came to attack you while you were in the toilet (full sex). Goldfinger is a live broadcast system. It doesn't take the initiative to create some big and famous scenes for people to watch (all the big scenes now are created when the protagonist is sexually assaulted). The audience cannot see the big scenes and wants to see some beautiful girls giving you some money and talking about all kinds of disgust. If you write so passively, you won't just want to follow the original plot framework later, right?

It's difficult to comment on a live broadcast by one person. First of all, if you can't pass the AI ​​​​experience on the Internet, and secondly, you can't pass the national test, then what's the significance of your subject matter?

It's pretty much the same as before. As a practitioner, no matter how much you talk, your sexual performance will be terrible, not even as good as that of ordinary people.

Self-celebrity essays, or self-pleasure essays written by young people who have no writing skills.

Don't read it, the author himself has never watched the complete plot. He is just trying to catch the popularity, so be careful of the thunder behind.

I'm so smart, I'll write something super awesome

Really💩Does anyone know how to block someone?

I don't recommend this author's novels. His previous novels were full of poisonous features such as abandoned girls, torture of girls, and disguised cuckoldry!

After a million words, I still look like a newbie. I have violated all the taboos of writing fan fiction, and the writing style is only the most trivial problem. Forget about the running accounts, I even got an original character to be my wife. This is really rare among fan authors

For comprehensive comics, create an original female character. If you don't know how to write fan fiction, don't write it.

It writes about a man who didn't even recommend a single woman, and who even inexplicably created a woman who got married and gave birth to a child without any warning. What do you want to do😅

Weird, you should check out what the red line in Under One Person means.

Good plug-ins are badly used. Money can improve three things, but money can't improve anything else? What's even more outrageous is that he killed an idiot with intellectual disabilities throughout the entire process. He was a time traveler who had been doing hydrology. He was able to endure loneliness and practice hard in the third level for more than ten years, and even died once. Is this what his character is like? Everyone on the Internet knew that he was having trouble with a girlfriend, and he had sex with her in several photos. The plot of your book is not compact, the battle descriptions are not good, and there are no plot points. How many people have put money on the shelves to read your book?

It's difficult. The author doesn't have an outline and wants to write it all out.

Is there any interest for the reward? Otherwise, if you can upgrade without upgrading, then just leave the eggs to hatch? If you write that you need xxx exercises, you can save them temporarily, but you neither search for the exercises from the mall nor upgrade the reverse life, what are you doing? It's really mindless.

It's hard to imagine how this kind of writing could complete several novels.

I didn't dare to click on the live broadcast just these two times. It was probably all kinds of barrages and stuff.

Naive and self-righteous, I never expected that Qidian could have such a book.

Author, why did you start writing about the Siheyuan in the second world when the first world was under one person? Is this a suitable subject for you to write about? The second world, whether it is to show off in a world that is slightly weaker than one person, or to practice in a stronger world, or even a fantasy world such as the Supreme Being and the Covering the Sky, is more normal than your one-turn urban drama.

After writing several books, I can still write like this.

I took a look at this new book and what can I say? First of all, I would like to congratulate you, the author, 👏👏👏 for finally returning to the fan fiction module. 👍👍👍 The direction is right. These days, if you are not good at writing original works, it is easy to get cut off. It is more reliable to write fan fiction! However, your novel also has a lot of problems 🤤 You haven't listened to any of the comments and suggestions I made in your book "Super Gods" as co-author 😅 1. The original heroine of the fan novel has already "failed" in the later plot of "Super Gods", and now she is doing this again? I have mentioned to you before that you might as well have brought Yin Nanfeng back and straightened him up, so that the final report card of the book would not be so miserable 😅 The first world you chose for this book was "Under One Person". Although there are not as many aristocratic heroines and supporting characters as there are in "Super Seminary", there are still a few that can be picked out, such as: Xia He, Lu Linglong, and Feng Shayan. These three beauties each have their own merits. Wouldn't you choose one to be the heroine?🤔 2. The "live broadcast system" is not wrong in this direction. After all, "various styles" in the fan fiction world have definitely occupied a place in the fan fiction industry in recent years, but the specific direction seems to be a bit problematic 😅 If you broadcast the live broadcast of Under One Person to people in the real world, it is not as good as showing the entire "past and future video exposure system" to the aliens under one person, and the "shock value" and "bounty" received may not be much less 🤤 3. Now that you have traveled to another world, and you are not a little kid with no power, don't worry about the plot of a super-level abuser who is unhappy with the small characters who do all kinds of damage to you, but you take a step back and the world is vast. These days, it can be wretched and developed in the short term, but in the long term, it will become an unhappy plot of a super-level abuser 🤤

The author feels like a junior high school student, self-indulgent + naive

The copy of "Young Songxing" is already very boring. When will it end?

When can I write about Mysterious Resurrection and Lord of Mysteries?

Author, isn't the plot of one hundred chapters about tomb robbing and love in the courtyard too slow? The plot of the main world only lasts a few years, but the worldview of Qingman and Tomb Robbers spans decades. This is inconsistent with the character of the protagonist. He is not a training fanatic, and he does not rush to travel through the world. The plot is all written in daily life, which is a bit watered down.

Horses from China, Qin Shi Mingyue, Bad Man, Mysterious Resurrection, Dragon and Snake Romance, Lord of Mysteries, Spirit Cage,

Li Hanyi should be taught a lesson

What has become of Guilan? It's been more than 20 years since my soul has penetrated, and I haven't done anything yet.

Isn't this still the same world?

I voted for you three times, so don't write me down again. There are also some Japanese comics that I have never read.