Rebirth 06: Being Chased by the Dog-Licking Goddess at the Beginning

I haven't changed it at all. The last one was Eunuch, but this one started out so awkward, and it's still written like this. Can't it be written normally?

It's not easy to watch fellow villagers keep fighting on the street. It seems like I'm seeing myself fighting on the street😭😭😭. Please support me by voting four monthly votes🙂

Overall, it looks very smooth. It's a pity to be honest. There is no problem with the content of the book. The problem lies in the title and introduction. You have gone too far into the market and failed to take advantage of your own advantages. Obviously, the atmosphere and sense of immersion are well written, but with a gimmicky title that does not match the content and rhythm of the book itself, coupled with this nondescript introduction, readers were scared away. The purpose of choosing a long book title is to convey information to the target audience more easily and clearly, but this book obviously does not need such a dense amount of information. I think it is enough to ensure that there are no unnecessary thinking points in the connection of the title, introduction, and beginning, and that readers can smoothly enter the text. In this case, the effect of intelligent promotion will not be too bad at least. So when it comes to books, I think it would be much better to be as concise as possible, or even have a short title that pays attention to atmosphere and B-squares. No matter what, it won't end up in the embarrassing situation of not catching the sesame and watermelon now. If the author is willing to continue writing, I personally think that he would polish the title and introduction more carefully to see if the effect of intelligent promotion will be better. If I really can't write anymore, I'll do whatever I feel is right. Don't hesitate and let me feel the most. Finally, I would like to say a few digressions: sometimes the amount of code is too much, and the writing will become more sluggish. Maybe a good rest will do wonders. Come on.

From the movie tycoon to the subsequent rebirth in 1990, it is rare to see novels with such a sense of story. I have always been paying attention to you, but the following few books are difficult to describe in one sentence. Keep up the good work

These books of yours, to be honest, each one is worse than the last, although I support you very much Why don't you read a few more books and start writing again! Read Bamboo Leaf Cake's book. It's the same as yours, but others are better. Read the first few books! Or take a look at the Master of Dreams in All Realms Take another look at the book of Doctor Yiyi

The movie tycoon who used to like to read the author came here and why did he keep throwing money at me?

This so-called brother Cao Kun not only has no effect, but also does not help. Everything about the protagonist is revealed in just a few sentences.

To be honest, don't write anymore for now Read more good works and learn from them. I really hope you are well.

I think as long as you keep updating, your results won't be bad. I'm actually quite disgusted with sudden updates, so I should stick to it once I've decided.

Master, please read these books before writing a new book!

I listened to the advice. But not much. Chase first. Recommended to vote.

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