Sweep the Evil: Make Cloudstar Great Again!

The theory of superego is going crazy! There is no sluggish development, no disgusting villain slaps in the face, Mu Guan has been high-energy from the beginning, taking over the harem and causing trouble at the same time, Yun Xing's fun has been contracted by him, and he can't stop chasing more!

After reading the first few chapters, there is no logical problem, but I feel that the plot description and dialogue are too flat and straightforward. There is no foreshadowing hook, which makes people less interested in reading. At least that is the case in the beginning. However, I read the posts and said it was good, so I will continue to read.

The protagonist is order! 😜

In the long period of pain, I gradually realized something. In the past, when I wrote books, I always emphasized how fierce and powerful the protagonist was. Now it seems that these are all false powers. True strength must be achieved by uniting forces that can be united. Victory is not about one person turning over or becoming a god, but about collectively turning over and getting better together. I always had fears in the past, thinking that this was all a utopia and unrealistic. But if you don't believe in the power of the collective in the novel, overemphasize individual heroism, and expect a savior to make everyone better, then it is really a waste of a tool like words. If that kind of world that gets better together has not yet arrived in reality, then create it in your novel first and describe that world in words as much as possible. When ideas become words, it is about the process of becoming unrealistic and practical. Come on! Come on! Come on!

With the foundation of 800,000 words, I rewrote and polished the original content. Before, I couldn't clearly see the development context, and I was under pressure to submit a chapter every day. Now pick up the old story and soar towards the sky.

I poured back the writing experience of 800,000 words back to the beginning. It was really amazing. Many of the things that I had not written well before were able to be corrected. I believe that I am on the right path. The more convinced you are that victory will definitely come, the more patient you have to be with the current twists and turns. I spend my whole life doing something, how can I not succeed? What if it really doesn't work? Anyway, if I die, let's talk about it in my next life!

I have reorganized the first three chapters, and I think the problem is that I just started writing it at that time, and many of the expressions were too immature. The logical chain is fine. Okay, just one article about water will do. In the future, keep doing this to increase your own enthusiasm. No matter what, do it first and then talk about it. This is one of the 800,000 words of my experience that I have continued to write down.

In the past, I always thought that the aroma of wine is not afraid of the alley, and I didn't bother to do anything to boast. But now I have figured it out, on the one hand, I am not a good wine that can be smelled in the alley, maybe it is a smelly wine. So, lend yourself your light.

Question: Are you very proud that you have finished writing Chapter 58? Next answer: Of course I am proud. I have finally come full circle. Now the harem pattern has been formed and the period of extensive expansion is over. Ask: Are eggs useful? Does anyone care? Next answer: I care! Writing this book is like raising a child, getting better bit by bit, and I seem to be getting better too. Q: It's so funny, no one has read your book at all. Are you panicking? Next answer: Panic, but is it useful? I can only continue to write with my heart, I still have many good ideas. Ask: Stop struggling, your book is not recognized by the market and there is no miracle. Next answer: Yes, yes, I saw it, but that is only the past and present, and there are still variables in the future. Okay, I admit that your prediction is probably right, but what next? Give up again, change your vest again, and open a new pit? Persistence may not lead to results, but persist until you can't stop. Q: Your spirit is commendable, but I don't think you can hold on for long. Next answer: What you think is your concept, which can only explain the old world. Only practice can transform my new world. Let's see!

There are various reasons why I can keep writing novels even if I don't make any money, but in the end they can be summed up in two words: luck. Thank you for getting to where you are now.

Today I saw a video introducing Wuling Smart Island on Bilibili. I was really surprised. I didn't expect that the company I worked for before would become so powerful. I threw two coins hard.

At a very occasional glance, I find that there are more and more new young faces. Japan is finished, and it is time for the Japanese people to bear the pressure on the Japanese government.

I originally wanted to update the fifth iteration of Chapter 5 today, but I ran out of time. In the future, I will make videos on station B to promote my novels.

There are many scattered persistences, which are not surprising at first sight, but after a while, when Mu Ran looks back, the lights are bright.

I wish all my friends, brothers, brothers, and handsome boys a happy holiday and may you all see that you enjoy reading novels.

I found that my writing was too clear, it was a bit overwhelming, and it was also cumbersome and confusing. After I changed it, it looked much better.

Chapter 6 before the iteration was very problematic, and the description of the rise of the little genius camp was too brief. After the iteration, it was much better, but there is still room for improvement, so let's leave it to the second round of iteration.

I reflected on what I had written, and found that there were big problems with the values ​​​​and views of right and wrong in some chapters. Alas, I was too narrow-minded before. Now I have gone back and revised it with the accumulation of 800,000 words. It is simply a dimensionality reduction blow.

There are quite a few problems in this chapter, and they still lie in the protagonist's cognition. It has to be said that as the author becomes more aware, the protagonist of the novel becomes different.

I think the mind doctor is almost always ahead in describing the endogenous logic of various phenomena, and it is the top one in my mind.

Rouguo was like a projector in my childhood. I was originally hesitant to open it so obviously, but after thinking about it, I realized that this was the only way to enjoy it, so I turned it on hard.

The novel continues to add chapters every day, and before I know it, it has already reached 830,000 words. Doing things well is the only thing I can do now. Complaining that the results are not as good as I want is useless. Just work hard and accept the results. There is a saying that there will be good results without effort, the only way is to let yourself adapt.

After reviewing what I wrote before, I feel that there is such a big gap between what I wrote before.

Whether things are meaningful or not is a subjective view and will change depending on the perspective from which you look at the problem. The most critical thing is to do the work itself.

Written at the beginning: I no longer post in WeChat Moments, but there are always things I want to talk about, outside of writing novels. Maybe this is an expression of desire. I just call this place my home, which can be regarded as adding popularity to my novel. The extra story of the novel has been decided to be the Void Observation Room series, so the Myth of the Void will be used as the series name. Text: "Congratulations to OG!" When I stayed up late that year and watched TB being killed again and again by TPSON's Zeus, my heart was heavy. Finally, my defense was broken by this sentence. I have to go to work the next day, and I can't get excited until lunch. I was originally ready to welcome the new king to the throne, but for the next few days I kept looking for passionate English commentary at Station B. FY and MAYBE's faces lit up and darkened in the background of fireworks, which has become a scene that remains fresh in my memory. Maybe it's also a constant reminder from the Fireworks God emoji. Why stay up late to watch the final? On the surface, the final is in the middle of the night, and it is exciting to watch during the live broadcast. The underlying reason is that that year's Wings, the Divine Wings of the Nation, stayed up late for the first time to see the Chinese team that was praised in various ways win the championship, and they still won in an extremely interesting way, with various incomprehensible selections, and a bottomless hero pool. At this point, there is a game called dota2 in my life. I also tried to play the game myself, but I couldn't understand it at all and was killed by a blast. Just watch from now on. I would dance with joy at the amazing performances of the players in the live broadcast, and I was even more looking forward to the continuous good results of the Chinese team. The TI curse was talked about at that time, and I was wondering when the Chinese team could win consecutive championships. Unexpectedly, that year was already at its peak. So far, there is no more crown. I haven't watched the TI4 winning video that I have tasted over and over again, because the better it was then, the more it makes me feel lonely now. Would it be better if wings did not disband? Don't know. There is no if in reality. At that time, I didn't pay much attention to AME. Although it is said that when he was leading in the critical game, Suiren Bogao ruined the good game. But there are still two games left. If you don't win, you don't win. To this day, I don't think AME was too wrong at that time. If I were to say I was wrong, it was because I didn't have enough experience in competitions, I had a mental problem, and I couldn't start again in the next two games. The next year, LGD was eliminated by Miracle's Team Liquid, and when they finished third, they felt calm because it was an odd year and they didn't even make it to the finals. Just listening to "Congratulations OG" again, watching OG create history, winning the TI championship two years ago, and Ana achieving the double C championship, I was very unwilling. When I saw the Chinese team again, it was the invincible PSG. LGD. I saw bleakness. Then I was completely conquered. PSG. LGD was too strong that year and won countless games. When the secret battle was fierce and the secret was eliminated to the loser group, I thought this year should be stable. It is very stable! Even if Sprite defeats Secret and kills them, can a new team compete with Overlord? Bah, the opening score is 0:2. I was confused and panicked. In the next two games, PSG. LGD showed its dominance, winning two consecutive games with a score of 2:2. At this time, I am a very business person, and I still can't name the full name of the hero's skill. I just look at the lively people, and I also know that there is a hero called Mammoth, and BP is very important! I can't remember the details. I saw that Sprite chose Mammoth again, and I was really excited. At that time, I had a fever and was hiding under the quilt. I was so angry that I just lifted the quilt and yelled at you, idiot! Werewolf Xiaoxiao never lost, only the decisive game! At that time, the mood was very angry, because I could have used the Chinese team to win the championship to temporarily avoid the edge of reality, gain comfort, and fall into the pride of the grand narrative. But it's all gone, so angry. I can only try to comfort myself by saying that if I can get such a high bonus, the players won't win the championship, so why should I worry about it? At that time, there would be a narrow view that the players of the Chinese team are not hardworking enough and serious enough, instead of acknowledging that the opponents of the Chinese team are also very good and hard-working, and they are also people full of dreams. In fact, at that time, I was only angry because I mistook the success of the Chinese team to win the championship for my own cyber success. The Chinese team did not win the championship, as if I had lost something, so I broke the defense. Mammoth didn't go to work. In that year, under the shadow of this sentence, he basically didn't pay attention to Dota 2 anymore. When I heard about AME again, I heard that he had retired and was live broadcasting at Station B. I saw many live broadcast recommendations of his slow life, but I never clicked on it. My naive self actually blamed the failure of my life on the striver who did not allow me to succeed in cyberspace. Even if the Chinese team wins the championship, will it help my life if I win it for three consecutive years? No! On the contrary, it was not winning the championship that allowed me to break out of the mental addiction of cyber success. Sprite was eliminated in the first round in the second year, which was very relieved. Then the next year, Sprite won the championship again with a solid performance without leakage. I finally understood that it was not just luck for Sprite to defeat PSG. LGD that year. Later, PSG. LGD disbanded, and CNdota entered a long and bottomless decline, never regaining its former glory. "Please PSG. LGD pick a hero!" This sentence became tears. I thought that was it. But AME came back, rehabilitated with great difficulty, and got back to a high level little by little with superlative grades and a martial arts madness. But it's still not enough. I have no impression of the Chinese team in TI13. Should we just forget it? Actually, I think the two Asia and so many series championships are really enough. That TI championship has changed over time and is no longer that important. I only saw that AME is still playing and chasing dreams. TI14, when no one dared to dream before the game, XG reached the finals all the way! The two games where BB and Pari were eliminated made my blood boil and my eyes shed tears. Perhaps this is the meaning of life, just keep moving forward like this. Facing the fat pants, we fought fiercely for five rounds and lost again 2:3, but this time the back of AME gave me extremely shocking emotional strength. I saw a persistent and unyielding soul! I cried very loudly, but it was no longer unwillingness and disappointment, but relief, the spirit of struggling until I couldn't stop fighting! AME, brother! I declare you!

Question: Why are there so many female protagonists? Next answer: What I cannot achieve in life, I want to achieve with the help of the male protagonist. Q: With so many female protagonists, aren't you afraid of affecting the viewing experience? A group of people get together and it's chaos! Next answer: Too many good and bad things are concentrated on a single heroine or two or three heroines. I'm afraid they will be too tired. What I think is that the male protagonist can only own the parts of each female protagonist, and the female protagonist has her own life besides the male protagonist. But your life cannot be too far away from the male protagonist. If there is an interaction between the female protagonist and the female protagonist, life will come out. Q: So, multiple heroines can actually be seen as the scattered parts of one heroine? Next answer: It can be said that the male protagonist is the whole made up of the parts of the female protagonist. To put it simply, it can be equivalent to the male protagonist falling in love with a female protagonist. If so many good and bad qualities were to be written about just one heroine, I would feel that it would be too unreal, and it would also be confusing. In short, it's just too much to chew off. Q: Compared with others, what's the highlight of your writing about so many female protagonists? Next answer: In one sentence: Fighting with others is endless fun! The male protagonist is the stage of struggle. I find it very interesting that multiple female protagonists fight each other on the stage. This is also something that female protagonists cannot do. Ask: Is it true that the male lead will accept the female lead too quickly? I'm afraid there will be more and more follow-ups, and it will be overwhelming! Next answer: The reason for hurrying up in the early stage is to get the actors into position as soon as possible, so that the play will be easy to sing. As for worrying about a complete epidemic, this is something that really needs to be considered. Therefore, in the future, we will definitely control the male protagonist's qualifications for admission to the shogunate, and try not to be too sentimental. Asked above: I'll ask so many questions for now, and we'll talk about it next time. Next answer: Readers and friends are welcome to communicate with each other. If there is anything unclear, we will talk next time. Goodbye.