This Knight Is Very Virtuous

I kind of know what's missing. Since you're writing in this genre, you're missing a lot of comparisons. For example, other people have bad moral character and don't take their moral character seriously. The protagonist's behavior is very problematic. In the end, the protagonist did do the knight's commandments, but he didn't get a lot of praise, which makes it feel much less interesting. There are so many bad protagonists. How can others praise him after doing something? It's incredible. Wow, there are such people. Write more to make it stand out.

I'm an old eunuch, I've seen this setting a long time ago

The writing is pretty good. I haven't read a book like this that is more traditional fantasy medieval in a long time. Especially the power system has a superman, but it won't be too outrageous. To be honest, I have seen too many systems that destroy the world and destroy the world. I just find it quite boring. In comparison, even if it is a low-to-medium model, it is actually more attractive to use the extraordinary power in a variety of ways. The author suggests that you can go to station b to search and learn about a game called Battlefield Brothers. The world background setting of this game and the level of force setting should match your novel quite well. Many interesting settings in it can be directly used for reference. It is a low-magic background with a very interesting setting. There are various interesting settings in it, such as the anatomist's blood potion, props and accessories made from various monster materials, called the Order of the Knights of the Avowed... There are orcs, necromancers, Lindworms, magic spiders, and direwolves. There are also various interesting and powerful enemies such as champion knights, sword masters, and barbarian gods. These enemies can be said to be little supermen, but they are not too outrageous. They are still elite mercenaries that can be controlled by the player and use various underhanded tricks to kill Wei Ou.

The plot of following Teddy to kill the robbers is not very good. Saving people puts him in danger. The key is that the rescued person is not grateful to the protagonist at all, and even falsely accuses the protagonist of being a robber. This Teddy is also a silly young man who loves to play and loses his horse.

Is he an upright male protagonist who can draw the holy sword and use the holy sword?

Investigation report: "Number" - 475 Investigation target: "This Knight is Very Virtuous" - Male Protagonist - [Roland] Investigation Result: [Reincarnation (Awakening of Su Hui)] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: Travel Investigator, as the name suggests Yi is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all the worlds know the time-travel situations of travelers in this world in advance, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any errors, Wanwang will correct me ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on December 10, 2025

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What is the purpose of this Teddy?

I can accept that the protagonist was deceived, but when the paladin saw others raping and abusing the people, burning, killing, and looting, you wouldn't kill them, or even dare to hit a person? Will the knight who indulges the militia and knights still be loyal? What kind of paladin are you? You killed me and started running away. How can I praise you for your bloody bravery? What does this mean? Does the author have an outline?

Come on, when did you create the character card?

It's not bad. I'm one of the few people with brains. I suggest you write less about conspiracies and treacherous things to reduce the possibility of being mentally retarded and write more about adventures.

In fact, the previous pacing is quite good, but the princess part is a bit too hasty. The male protagonist is not even a formal knight. He relies on protection and a knight's sword to protect the world with the princess. If you want to take the paladin route, it is better to follow the mature western fantasy route. It is better to do it step by step. I suggest you check out the Evidence of the Sun King. You need to build a larger continental territory. Step by step, start with the lord's side step by step. Instead of just two days after leaving the slave and civilian status, I suddenly jumped to the level of the Knight Tournament Princess. I was too anxious. It seemed that these protections were purely plug-ins and accelerators. I had already started to face the dragon before it was released. I didn't know how it would end. The dragon appeared so powerful and turned into a mini-boss later. It was very strange. I still need more foreshadowing to control the rhythm.

No, why are you so direct?