
Xuanjian: I Learned Witchcraft at Hogwarts
玄鉴:我在霍格沃茨修上巫
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 433k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 9d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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75Chapters
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The Xuanjian part is okay, but the HP part is negative.
I was shocked when I saw Jasmine using Shen Feng Wu Ying Looking back at Dian Zhongdian's Lily on two boats, I laughed. Use Xuanjian to teach, and the HP author Dian Zhongdian's shadow version will improve my thinking. Even if you don't read the setting collection, you should read the original work. Normal Oriental people should be rubbish on both sides and not get involved.
It feels like it is essentially a fan of Xuanjian. The hp background is to advance the perspective. As soon as the new chapter comes out, the ancient wizards basically revised the perspective down. It's interesting. It's okay to make up for the slow update of Xuanjian. But I think I should be cautious about single pit HP. Because it seems that the author has used the Xuanjian system to deconstruct part of the HP. Currently, there are slightly more Xuanjian stalks than HP.
There are few who can taste the style of writing, and you can find a good feeling in the wording and reading sense.
The secondary creation based on the Xuanjian framework integrates other worlds. From the perspective of Xuanjian fairy readers, it is quite good. As for the integration of world views and the structure between the different system forces of both parties, although Xuanjian is the main one, at least the explanations in this book are still self-consistent for the time being. The most important thing is that the writing style is suitable. This is very rare. From the wording, including sentences, including rhythm, Xuanjian writes the flavor of Xianxia. The most difficult thing to imitate is this flavor. If you look at it from the point of being the most suitable, I think This book should be ranked in the top three among all the existing Xuanjian fans. I am not criticizing all of them, nor am I saying that other Xuanjian fans are not good at writing, but I think the most important thing for a Xuanjian fanfic is to have something of your own, rather than copying it directly. This thing of my own should be a new change based on the original world view setting, or another interpretation, another angle, another new Taoist theory and solution. Or just like this book, write about the deduction and changes of the Xuanjian system under the rules of other different worlds. It is very rare to achieve this while also making your writing style comfortable to read and mysterious. I hope the author can stick to it, come on! 🙏
I will explain my current problems to my friends in the book review section.
1. Comparison of realms in the Esoteric Sect In the Esoteric Sect, I made a little compromise in order to align with the Xuanjian. Because the generalists in the Esoteric Sect really do not have the level of foundation building, I can only bring down the immortals and the named ones. Theoretically, the person who signed the name can already enter Mansu, which is the magical elixir But don't scold, don't scold. In order to bring Si Chen and Zhenjun, Tongshi and Lianqi together, we can only weaken these two in epic. Afterwards, the Code of Winter was created to weaken the lifespan of these two. After all, the immortals of the secret sect are really immortal in the literal sense (As for whether they died suddenly in Sichen's internal fight or not, don't worry about it) 2. Opening question Probably before fighting the Venomous Fang Dragon, this article was only in the state of imagination and didn't know how to write it I was originally a die-hard reader of Xuanjian... The starting point was also to chase stars. (Although I was very angry recently when the main text was weakened, I won't say it anymore) Then there was a big break in updates from January to February to March due to a big business trip, and now I am slowly adjusting back. I will fix the previous parts later. Because it is not a full-time update and the updates are unstable, but I will try my best not to be unfinished. You haven't signed a contract and the editor has not contacted me. I have also written it down. After all, it is basically a fan. I also have to adjust it slightly to the text. 3. The situation on the HP side The protagonist's father has this attitude towards his parents, and I won't change it here. For Chinese monks, they are not afraid that you will be bad or that you will be stupid. The background of this work is Xuanjian, not the love and peace of HP. Afterwards, Chinese monks were actually very receptive to black magic. As a joke, compared with some witches, owls, and evil methods, black magic is just like lolita. I wrote it very clearly in the text. China's God's Way only cares about China and targets the tc people. It does not care about other parts because other parts are under the jurisdiction of the Esoteric Cult. That Mansu is not a kind person. Compared with some Si Chenyi, Lao Fu is really a loli. It will be written later that some real people come here just to do Tutu. The two sides did not kill all the ggads in one move, because if they were killed, they would form the god-king Odin. Now they only dare to lock down Grindelwald. Just like Luoxia didn't dare to kill Beijia. (And to be honest, although the author himself is not a fan, he really hates the four predators. They feel like school gangsters. Don't talk about the original text. Is the image of the half-blood prince James in the original text a human?) That's about it. I hope everyone enjoys watching. Although this article is written for love, I still hope to get recommendation votes hahaha
Don't stop updating
The updates are unstable and you are still playing tricks, brother. If the live broadcast is not continuous, you will lose followers.
The second chapter is written very well. Particularly blunt
Xuanjian's fan, because they are in HP's world view and exist with other true kings, their morals are still there, and they are very comfortable to watch. The protagonist does feel a bit like a spiritual person, which is much better than holding a golden finger and sitting in jail in Xuanjian. HP's world view is also supplemented by Xuanjian, but HP's plot is a bit slow.
The immortals of the secret sect are at least Zifu, right?
The settings for the Esoteric Cult are probably too low. The Immortals are considered to be the mythical beings in the Esoteric Cult. The Zifu here is the benchmark for Xuanjian. The named ones should be somewhere between Da Zhenren and Shendan.
Xuanjian fan, quite good-looking.
The introduction is so confusing that no one can understand it. The introduction should be concise and simply explain the world you traveled through and some plots.
The writing is okay and I can read it.
Peek
I like both types, let's observe first