Save That Gloomy Girl Who Doesn't Want to Die

The writing is okay, there is nothing to say about the emotional appeal, and the character design is okay, not like a newcomer

It's so cool. It's a pity that I'm not a fan, otherwise I would definitely recommend it to my friends. Let's draw a conclusion first, it's well worth a look. This result is actually not worthy of the quality. My evaluation of this book is: "Old bottles are replaced with new wine, and old trees bloom with strange flowers". From the beginning to the current progress, I can clearly see three sections that will cause bad reputation if not handled well. The first part is a plot about Tong Xin's cousin. It's a classic family trouble + gangsters looking for trouble, but it was handled neatly and neatly. Not only did Tong Xin get rid of all the dangers she encountered at home in time, but when she finally solved her cousin, she was moved by the eldest lady. The second paragraph is about the eldest lady seeing the protagonist and her schoolmate hugging each other. She was jealous and wanted to stimulate the protagonist by using the excuse of her fiancé, but was coaxed by the protagonist within three pages. The third paragraph is about the eldest lady's rotten fiancé and her unfaithful parents. In the end, the eldest lady scolded her parents angrily, which I enjoyed watching. If you just read the above three plots, you will most likely frown, and I can understand, because they are cliché and touch the readers' pure desire to control the heroine when reading. But because of this, every time the protagonist solves these things properly, you will have a very happy feeling. This is also the reason why I voted for the monthly vote in a rush. Novel with this theme must dare to write this kind of plot. If it cannot create a sense of crisis for readers, it will not be attractive. But it should be said that this way of writing is really a minefield. If it is handled well, people will feel very happy. If one of them is not handled well, it will probably be scolded fiercely. There are not many people now. Once it attracts more people, I can already predict the rhythm of the comment area. Judging from the quality, the author does not look like a newcomer, so come on.

Burgers are no good. This is a four-piece suit for middle-aged bankrupts.

As long as the level I write next is online, the recommended monthly ticket is available

Miss Sunshine

The protagonist enjoys a harem👍

The author's writing style is good, but the way the plot advances is very abstract, and the handling of key plot points is rather blunt. It's fun to watch but not something I can think about in detail. So if I'm stuck here, no one will look at it, but I can't get up either. 🙂

Brother, I'm really afraid of you. Even if you pounce, you still have to send out the outline.

Tong Xin (the result of being "transformed" by Shen Jiejie)

It's pretty good, but you have to keep watching, otherwise the mood will stop.

Very nice novel, good luck to the author

Included

The writing is very good, it doesn't look like a newcomer, and Sun Xi'ai gives me a sense of déjà vu with Alicia.

But the character of the protagonist and his style of doing things are really hard to describe, and he has no personality charm at all.

It's so well written. This kind of writing needs to be written by a newcomer.

Senior! Water!

Ah? There is more than one person to save? I still don't know or am familiar with this person. I feel like the male protagonist should have a breakdown 😂

It looks good, I love watching it, but I don't know how to deal with so many pitfalls.

Recommended, the introduction is quite interesting, I'll take a look

It took more than 100 chapters to hit the shelves, so it can be seen that this book's performance is not very good. I'm really afraid that you'll rush into the street, brother😭

Instead of calling the police directly, choose to race at 150 yards without a license... Are you still in China?

After being reborn, I still think about that b sports competition. I rented a car for 150 yards and saved someone, but I still have to go back for a run. Le

The title is my definition of the protagonist of this book. This book is cloaked in the guise of protection and salvation. In fact, this fantastic journey is the protagonist's redemption of his boring life.

It's okay, better than expected. After all, I first read the comment section and said that the male protagonist is not good. Also, there is a book about this theme next door, so I am a bit uneasy about preconceptions. I can actually read it, and I think it is a good idea. The male protagonist is a sports student. It is indeed not mainstream, and the stereotype of sports students is not very good on the Internet. I feel that this affects the performance of this book.

The subject matter is very interesting, but the plot is hard to describe in one sentence...

The description is not even strong enough.

So there are only two heroines? Are Chu Lin and Sun Aixi the heroines?

Tong Xin doesn't have anything to eat, and it's hard to calm down.

The author used AI to draw several girls. The cartoons are outdated and not suitable for today's common aesthetics.