Martial Arts of All Heavens: My Father Bu Jingyun!

Please block the author permanently. I am too lazy to complain. The big data you save will give me another push 😊 and you will be saved from breaking your defense.

The protagonist has forgotten to save his mother 🙂 and wants to try Sword of the World. I don't see any benefit of doing this other than showing off (by the way, you will know what I mean if you read the detailed comments of other people in the circle)

The author is also a talent. He traveled across the world to save his mother, turned around and forgot about her, and started breeding like crazy in a world. I can only say that everyone who can watch it is a talent.

Are you sure your father is Bu Jingyun and not Jian Chen?😏

Author, I feel a bit toothache after watching your plot. First, the belated system, and then the Holy Spirit Sword Technique revealed to Shi Feixuan. I no longer have the desire to continue reading.

Are you sure it's Bu Jingyun and not Jian Chen?

It's been a long time since md saw this kind of magical book written by Chu Nan. He couldn't walk when he saw a woman, and he forgot all about his mother.

It's not very good. Really, he is a novice author. He has never missed any mistakes that should be made, and he has never stopped being poisonous.

Come up and give in to Jingyun and restore his memory, or the whole family will die. How about restoring chicken feathers?

Bu Jingyun's character is both good and evil. He can kill for the people he loves, and he can be righteous for the sake of his family and country. He is not the kind of holy mother that Nie Feng is. He spares his enemies repeatedly and kills decisively without losing his benevolence and morality. Therefore, Nie Feng's talent is not inferior to Bu Jingyun, but he is still not as good as Bu Jingyun!

To be honest, the idea of ​​setting the character background as Bu Jingyun's son is quite interesting. But this kind of Zhutianliu, bringing people through time travel is really a big deal. You see, people with better grades don't do this. As a result, your first world, Tang Dynasty Double Dragon Legend, directly brought a few women back. It was quite a failure.

Why does the author always like flashbacks? The world of Fengyun is also a flashback. When it comes to the world of Tang Dynasty, is it still a flashback? Why is he already 17 years old, and why is he teaching Fei Xuan martial arts again?

What's wrong with the harems that have golden fingers? To put it bluntly, the author and the protagonist are licking dogs, Cihang Jingzhai's licking dogs.

I thought it would be martial arts in the future, with thunderbolts and golden light, but who knew it would cover the sky? It's boring.

You can cut it out. You haven't even read the original work, the names are all wrong, and the characters are completely wrong. Why do you need to write it?

The dialogue is very simple, the plot is awkward, and it's forced to show off.

So-so. The plot before the time travel was too tense. It was all about life and death. What I wanted to see the most was that the introduction said that you brought the boss to show off. But after time travel, you would start a harem like an ordinary time traveler and tell all your trump cards clearly from the beginning. It's too naive.

Why did Chi You have to assume the identity of a demon god? After all, he was a military leader and one of the ancestors of the Chinese god of war. And the runes and the like at the back are very western fantasy.

It's a common problem in fan fiction that the protagonist doesn't live in the story, it's all about the author's obscenity. It is better to improve the writing style and improve the outline and plot. Maybe I have no interest in Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty, and it's annoying to see the protagonist talking nonsense in the world of Double Dragon. The world feels like it's not arranged well. Double Dragon is a bit too high. Why not arrange a magical medicine in the first world, such as Tianxiang Cardamom? This kind of thing has a main world, and everything else is just resources. The main thing is that Fengyun is interesting. Lay the foundation and then go back to find Bu Jingyun, Nie Feng or others. Do you cheat in Shuangyong and then go back to play invincible? Not interesting

Taking Tian as the name, and adding the surname is Bu Tian. Author, since you have watched Fengyun, you should be familiar with the name Huo Butian, right? Do you really think it's good for Bu Jingyun's son to be named this? In the ancient world, words in the names of elders were taboo.

The front is better, but the back is dull. There is no battle against the sky, no domineering quotes, and nine generations of immortality. Basically, all the cultivation depends on external objects. After having the prehistoric magic weapon, I feel that the system of covering the sky is useless, and it seems that it is not very useful to use the ancient magic weapon to perfect the world. People are fighting against the physical body and magic. The magic weapons in the "Zhetian Trilogy" are like weapons. Heap, even if there is no passionate battle, everything has become dull. It is this magic weapon, that magic weapon, and the Chaos Body and the Chaos Immortal King Body are always emphasized later. Don't you think it's embarrassing?

Is it necessary to come to the world of Dragon Ball? Ye Fan is still waiting for you. He has been to Hongmeng Universe for a few days and has just changed to a new copy. I don't think it's funny anymore. Dragon Ball World has a higher system than the previous one.

I feel that most Hongmeng controllers sit at the same table as the quasi-immortal emperor. It is written in the original book of Star Transformation that even the gods cannot create the universe. How can the immortals in the demon fairy world be on the same level as the perfect immortal king? And I remember that destroying a planet 100 million miles away is a strong one among the immortals. According to the original book, the upper space is ten thousand times more stable and destructive than the next plane, and it cannot surpass the perfect true immortal. The essence of a perfect true immortal is already comparable to the size of the universe. The immortal king opens up the universe at will, but it is not suitable for the cultivation environment of the immortal level. The quasi-immortal emperor can open up a large world like the immortal realm at his fingertips.

I speculated on the dark conspiracy theory of Hongmeng, which is terrifying enough. Some fans write that the Hongmeng Gold List is a conspiracy, and you, the author, are even more frightened by Hongmeng practicing Hongmeng Gold List and playing games.

The author didn't even reply. The copies in the back are getting lower and lower. Lotus lanterns have come in. What's the use of pig's feet? Pig's feet can push the world flatly. What's the point? It's getting boring.

It's so swollen that I stopped sending out my hair on May Day and didn't ask for leave 😜

What is the level of the ancient saint in the coffin trilogy? Immortal Emperor?