Spring Thunder Is Rolling in the Courtyard

This is the thunderous thunder hitting the readers

Is the author trying to show off his lower IQ limit?

The writing is too wordy. A purified water plant is being built here. There are long paragraphs describing characters and scenes. You can write a long paragraph about brushing your teeth and washing your face in the morning. This has absolutely nothing to do with the plot. You can also write a few sentences by taking a puff of a cigarette and exhaling it. One or two lines of dialogue are followed by long paragraphs of scene analysis, character analysis, and description of character behavior. The story seems extremely empty.

Looking at this courtyard, I feel a bit tired of aesthetics. The new TV series "Uncle" is out, and I think it's pretty good, but no one seems to be writing about it now.

It would be great if there was a blacklisting function

The author's description of the atmosphere is very good, but when it comes to the setting of the protagonist (17 years old, a platoon leader), it feels awkward and out of place...

Why is the attendance rate of the police in the courtyard so low? It's boring to go away and go away.

I can't tell the difference between the big and the small kings. People who came from the old society and dared to criticize the military master,,,,,,,,,, the superfluous symbols cannot be regarded as words.

It's a mess, 51 for a while, 53 for a while

I'm speechless, it's the same old thing again! Other books turn big things into small things, but yours is great, turning big things into nothing!

A man of the new era, who was also the most glorious soldier of the era in the past, ended up wrangling at wireless, it was really shocking.

At first glance, it looks like it was written by AI

The writing is too slow. Can you speed up the pace?

，，！ With some luck, Lao Shou Dao wrote his own book "Swallowing Everything: I Created a New World in the Cold Land".

One chapter of text, half of it is watery, too much nonsense, the plot progress is slow, and it makes you feel uncomfortable. You can take a look at it.

Bring back two ships of supplies and equipment urgently needed by the country and become a worker? Cowhide

Read the comments first. The evaluation is based on the defense and farewell. Don't waste time.

The protagonist went to the courtyard to be the father of Silly Zhu Yuyu