Red Mansion: This Legitimate Son of the Wang Family Is Going Crazy

Let's talk about the good aspects first. The writing is passable and has the flavor of Red Mansion. The main plot is not too cliche, but it is somewhat innovative and can be watched. The characterization is really awesome and incredibly delicate. Every character is close to the original work and can be magically modified to enhance memory points. The interaction between the protagonist and the various female characters is very interesting. I guess the author must be a little virgin, otherwise he would not be able to write such a sweet story. But this is also the point that will dissuade older readers. The logic of the writing is self-consistent, and each female character stands upright, not counting it as a vase. This is considered a masterpiece for a harem novel, as long as it does not collapse, it is at the level of food. Let's talk about the shortcomings. Author, you are more courageous! It's either about feet or legs. Can you be more promising and go deeper? The writing method tends to be multi-line, digging holes and leaving hooks here, digging holes and leaving hooks there, which distracts the reader's attention and also tests the reader's memory. But after fermentation, the various pitfalls come together to form a strong correlation, as long as you can remember it. Because the author focused on writing garden dramas, the plot progressed slowly and did not feel like it was laid out. On the whole, there is a sense of expectation but the routine is not strong. I guess the author is really cute. However, the author is a genius. He left a strong hook of a queen at the end of the introduction. There are still many characters who have not appeared. I feel that I can write two to three million words. Finally, I think I am a poisonous person but I don't seem to be. The protagonist's character is dark and smart, but he still pretends to be innocent, which is a poisonous point for old bookworms. But it makes sense when you think about it. A fifteen-year-old scholar spends all day studying at home and has never experienced any human experience. This is not pretending to be innocent, but showing maturity, which cannot be logically justified. Moreover, pretending can make people put down their guard and get in touch with the female characters better. The second point is about Da Daiyu. Da Daiyu regards the protagonist as her 'son', how can she accept this! Can I forcefully remove this hat later? Even the Queen dares to do it, but Da Daiyu still keeps it? ? ? The third point is that Wang Xifeng wrote brilliantly, but this person couldn't accept it. It was really hard to calm down. Finally, a warning to the author, if you dare to be a eunuch, I will send you a razor blade, and you will have perfect attendance for three months! 😡

666, Money but no soldiers, pure wallet

This introduction is terrible. Businessmen are money bags in an agricultural society. Your money is not your money. If I put you in jail, your money is my money.

Showy, deviant, self-righteous, pretentious, looking for trouble.

At least after I read these two pieces of information, the first image that came to my mind was those stinky, long, and meaningless main lines of business in Red Mansions. Generally, I just jump to these contents in Red Mansions.

Due to the needs of the plot, the Grand View Garden has not started

How can you impose sanctions if you don't have the right? What happened when you clamored to buy America's footbath?

As a modern person, I hate gambling, brothels, etc., And I am so complacent about it. Why didn't I give you a 404?

Idiot, the prerequisite for economic sanctions is force. Do you know what economic sanctions are? Otherwise they are all idiots

What kind of chain is Jia Lian? The catalog is very confusing.

After reading a few chapters, I agree with what everyone said, go to the palace as soon as possible! It is very similar to Dream of Red Mansions, which was suitable for little girls to watch decades ago.

It's pretty good, not as bad as what the comment section says

After being reborn as a bustard, the author is really not afraid that his daughter will go to sea in the future. . . . .

Will you start reading novels about the Three Kingdoms and Water Margin in the future?

After a month, the author sent it directly without any further bubbling.