Light and Shadow 1978: I Made My Fortune from Comic Books!

The portrayal of the villain is too outrageous and brainless. In order to be a villain, he doesn't even have any brains. Apart from the people on the street and the male and female protagonists, it feels like there are not many good people. The protagonist's mother, brother, sister-in-law, ex-girlfriend and a few college students passing by are all villains. A few college students looked down on a veteran in 1987. They laughed at the protagonist in public twice in one day. The first time he was scolded away by the protagonist and the crowd. The protagonist went to an art museum. These people came to laugh at him again? You think that college students of that era are too inhuman.

I've read about ten chapters, so let's briefly talk about it. First, the violence is too strong. Except for the protagonist and a few people in the editorial department, everyone else in the co-author is a villain, right? Doesn't the author have a villain who can't advance the plot or create contradictions? This is the first time I've read a chronicle written like this. Is the author not doing everything he wants? Writing a novel is so violent. Second, the plot is not very reasonable. The protagonist knows everything? One is drawing comics, the other is playing with pens, and the other is playing guitar. Guitar repair and guitar playing are two different industries. If two people block the road and rob you, a person with a lower limb disability and a wheelchair, they can let you fight back and take advantage. You can't brag. Third, since the hostility is so strong and the protagonist's parents, brother and sister-in-law are all villains who are trying to take advantage, why did you arrange these characters? Wouldn't it be better for the protagonist to appear as an orphan? What is the necessity of these roles? There is also the pen pal girlfriend who appears out of nowhere, and the two who hold up the road and rob them. These characters have no need to appear at all. In short, it's all about showing off for the sake of showing off, and randomly arranging characters to show off, just to show off. Again, the violence is too strong.

The sense of the times is pretty good, but all the family members and girlfriends are evil, which makes people depressed. I'll just brush it off later or don't show up anymore. I'd rather draw a little book to become famous and make money. As for love, just add a little bit of embellishment every now and then.

Make reference to the bad guys in reality. On the surface, they are smiling and polite, but behind the scenes, they are all petty, sneaky, gossipy, and stumbling. Many bad people are invisible to you on the outside, but if there is any profit or face involved, they will immediately fall out.

I have read about ten chapters, and the subject matter is quite good, but the characters and plots are written haphazardly, and I have no understanding of the social conditions at that time.

The author is probably not an art student, so the description of the protagonist's purchase of painting materials, whether it is the shopping location, the description of the painting materials, or the properties of the painting materials, is a bit awkward. For example, I can't tell the difference between Dowling paper sketch paper. The description of 16-karat sketch paper, the weird description of buying a knife of sketch paper, and the statement that the drawing material sketch paper is 80 grams of Dowling paper, well, it's outrageous, it's really uncomfortable to look at it... As for staining Ink pens and carbon water, or insisting on buying extremely expensive writing pens to draw the original manuscript of the miniature book... Well, I can only say that in the 1990s, the only son of both working parents would not spend so much money on writing and stationery that did not match well, and used it as art painting materials. Besides, the story is set in the late 1970s. The protagonist is set to live in Liokujo, Nisisibei, the capital city. He goes to the stationery counter of a department store to buy painting materials. It is the routine operation of a novice in the first year of junior high school students learning to paint in the 1990s. Well, the character is quite contradictory. The journey to a professional art store is about half as long as going to Little Man's Book Publishing House, but the author is stunned and refuses to let the protagonist go. Instead of buying professional painting materials, I bought some second-hand Dowling paper from a roadside stall. I wonder if the author only knows 80 grams of Dowling paper... Seeing the scene where two people meet at a roadside stall and don't know if they are hooligans is really addictive. Withdrawn. It is estimated that this is another hydrology written by a layman.

It looks really uncomfortable to be disabled, and to meet this kind of family again 😳

First-class disability? Very serious injury.

The first ten or so chapters were okay, but the later chapters fell off the mark, as if they had a different author. Forget it, it's too toxic, so let's leave.

A veteran with paralysis of his lower limbs and a first-level disability has to provide for his parents who have not retired. His eldest brother and sister-in-law suck blood. His parents are partial to his mama's eldest brother. This is so explosive.

What should I do if the main character goes to the toilet?

The author doesn't know whether it's because he is too young, or because he is not an art student, nor is he a native of BJ, and he has no understanding of the art industry. He has no idea where BJ is, where to go shopping, and what to buy. He is completely confused and has no basic common sense. Don't write about the 1970s and pretend to be a comic book author. Revolving around the time, place, characters, etc. In the 1970s and 1980s, the first dozen chapters about art-related content are basically inaccurate. They are chronology at least. They have no idea about the geographical location of BJ before 2000, basic common sense, people and things in the art industry...

Being a villain for the sake of being a villain, there are not many good people around

Are you young? Have you never seen the movie version of the comic book?

Ethical novels in which vicious family members struggle against themselves. The book "Get Out" I just read is also the same. The Pig's Foot family was forced to run away by the Lin family, and then they worked hard to cheat and become "successful people".

This kind of opening will turn off many people 😒

I saw a good idea at the beginning, but there was too much pretense and slap in the face. Basically, wherever the protagonist goes, there will be a villain who will pretend to slap the protagonist in the face.

The rather simple plot attracted so many drooling comments. It's much more refreshing and clean than those made by cheat-finger system cultivators. 💰🌸The value is right!

The smell of AI is too strong

After reading dozens of chapters, it is true that the villain plot is too deliberate, the protagonist does not meet any good people, and the villain conflicts and then slaps him in the face.

Speechless, I gave hatred at the beginning, or my family

Is it logical for your girlfriend of several years to dump you in 1978? That's bullshit.