Being Hunted, She Turned into a Magical Girl

Magical girl novels have always been difficult to write, and Qidian, a platform from the male protagonist's perspective, is even more difficult. However, the strong emotions and violent conflicts of this theme are also difficult to touch with other themes. The authors here may have more hobbies and have devoted more emotions than other types of works. Some people regard the work as art, but lose confidence in the comments. Some people write the contradictions vividly, but then the creative steps are difficult. Because it is not like many themes that have traces to follow. Each work is a new world, drawn only by the author's imagination. This book is a rare masterpiece. It has highlights in the world view, characters, and plots. Unfortunately, not many people pay attention to it, and its strength is not worthy of its fame. In the torrent of big genres in the starting point, I am very lucky to see this cliff pine. I hope the author can continue to cultivate it and find her own sunshine and rain.

Because God's will can corrode everything, causing drastic changes in history

There is no doubt that the writing power is much higher than that of Loan Demon. The force is not too strong and the description is very appropriate. The difference is indeed visible at a glance.

Will the protagonist be implanted with a prosthetic body suitable for magical girls in the future Can electricity, mechanical power and magic power be converted into each other Can the power of the heart be amplified?

The writing is not a no-brainer. Come on, is the writing on magical girls so good?

I really want to meet the seniors who conquered the evil gods a hundred years ago, and crush these degenerates with their phantoms. It is best to change the contract conditions of magical girls. Magic should still be linked to "virtue"

When I reviewed it last time, I actually only read about 20 chapters. At that time, I thought it was a pity and lamented that even pearls would be covered in dust. After reading sixty or seventy chapters in one go, I realized that my rating was low. This is my favorite book among so many platforms. Writing a book has never been an easy task. I have also thought about writing a book, but I haven't started yet. It's okay to write 30,000 to 50,000 words on a whim, but if I update 45,000 words steadily every day, things will be different. So I admire the authors very much. Even if some books are very loose and illogical, it is a miracle that a person can write and write down what he wants to tell the world. As for the world view, the part that has been shown is already very complete. The world view of many articles is full of loopholes, but the author has covered this up very well, or everyone has become accustomed to it. But I would like to discuss this: There are many city-states in the world besides Hezhi City. Will this part be reflected? Moreover, the wilderness accounts for 70% of the world's population. If there is not enough ink, it may be necessary to put a lot of effort into the characters' emotions and plots to make the world appear complete and fulfilling. More importantly, if it is just a confrontation between two forces, it may seem monotonous to write simply, and more may need to be introduced. For example, profound psychological changes, growth and transformation, the use of technology, the interests of multiple cities, sparks in the wilderness, internal disputes and the influence of "third parties", etc. On the one hand, the existing forces are reasonably arranged to push the plot forward, and on the other hand, the plot is pushed backward from the final world. The main axis here can be a series of real and intense changes in the characters' emotions, coupled with changes in the world. The world and the characters achieve "rebirth" through this main axis. Of course these are just some ideas, even better is that you already have a completed picture of the future, you just need to paint it. This book has a lot in common with the worldview construction and character behavior that I have thought about before. In many places, what I wrote is what I wanted to write, and in many places, I wrote what I did not expect, haha. That being the case, that's enough for me to appreciate this article. No matter what, I will always support you, my only hope is that she doesn't stop where she shouldn't.

Why have there been so few updates recently? Why are there so many updates in the past two days?

I thought it was not good after reading the synopsis (cyber and magical girl are still too weird), but after reading it, Shuhuang found that it is okay and worth reading. The only thing I want to say is that except for the beginning, which has a bit of cyber style, it is completely invisible later, and the background panel is not included (it seems that the label of cyber is not attractive). The magical girl system and the evil god system are too strong, which makes the whole cyber style have no sense of existence. At first, I thought that the cyber giant controlled the magical girl, but it turned out that it was just a subsidiary organization of the Magic Kingdom. This God's Will Group has directly stepped down a few levels. I feel that the cyber element can be completely removed.

Apart from the fact that the magical girls in this book are all female, they actually have nothing to do with magical girls. If the entry for magical girl is replaced by immortal cultivator, and the other entries are also replaced with corresponding ones, there is no sense of inconsistency at all.

Didn't he die after three days of absence? No!

Looking at Tianyi Group, I suddenly thought that "God's will is always difficult to ask, but human conditions are always sad and difficult to complain about." Could it be that the many injustices in this world are caused by God's will? Why is it that things you like are always not at the right time and you don't get what you deserve?

Don't die, you must finish writing it

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There are so many words and they haven't been published yet?

Just don't be too thorough, I've met too many eunuchs

Don't look like I'm here, aren't I?

Come back to life! Prison - Xu!

It feels like the author is kind of dead.

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Don't die😭

The more I write, the more boring and unpleasant it becomes. I guess I am a eunuch.