From Lowly Clerk to Lord of the Grotto-Heaven

A cultivator lives in a farmer's house and can't afford meat.

What is the role of the whole Qin family's old aunt? In 2025, there is no need to use this kind of character to complement the protagonist. Nothing but poison

The author feels that what he wrote is very logical, detailed and true. But it doesn't look good, and it doesn't feel any better. It's just that I am moved by writing my own book.

Let's wait until the protagonist moves to move. The plot of living in Qin's house is too toxic. The reason why it is so disgusting is that the author himself did not clearly indicate whether the temporary stay was paid or free. As a result, I was speechless when I saw that the cultivators of immortality were looked down upon by ordinary people and had a strange attitude. The cultivation resources that the protagonist worked so hard to obtain later were directly given to ordinary people in order to repay a favor because of this nonsense? It's understandable if children eat it to prepare themselves for immortality. In the end, the couple also ate it, so why did they also want to become immortals? Is it reasonable? There is no priority between favors and cultivation. Instead of being thick-skinned and seizing the opportunity to break through, you waste precious cultivation resources to return favors? Then you might as well take some cultivation resources and sell them, it would be more direct to give the money directly. That is to say, it can bring the two parties into a direct trading relationship and ease their own economic situation, which will actually make the plot smoother.

Fighting is like a mental retard, and the nerves are the same. Someone wants to kill you, but you fight for a long time, chase for a long time, and still fail to kill. In the end, you are punished. You have written so much and put in so much effort. You have not gained any benefits, but you have been punished first.

It's too poisonous. You can just travel to a civilian home like Uncle Qin. If you insist on this kind of gambit and mess with people's mentality, if this aunt is me, just tell me, if your meridians are not good, get it for your son now, write a note, and I will teach you. Don't regret it in the future. If you don't agree and force me, I will move to another family. You are not the only civilian family with children.

No, you can't kill him after all the foreshadowing?

With this writing style and writing method, I might as well write about the city. Why write fantasy? I over-wrote more than 70 chapters in the early stage. The goal I set has no development at all. After more than 70 chapters, there is no feature that can make people remember. I can't even write a breaking point.

To be honest, it's okay for a cultivator to live in a mortal's house. That mortal's attitude is not very good. Luo Li, I feel that the plot is not pleasant.

Everyone is discussing the author. Has the author been cut?