Steam, Sequence and the Black-Hearted Potion Merchant

Chapter 32 ruined my mood for reading. Everything was fine up to now, but you told me that the protagonist is destined to be a loser. The identity given by the author to the protagonist is not good and there are countless dangers. In this case, a younger sister is included as a soft assistant. The protagonist's golden finger is not complete, only the mortal level of a loser, and anyone with something to do with the extraordinary cannot be detected. It took a lot of effort to settle down for a few days. The author also set up that the original father's friend is very powerful, and no one dares to bully the protagonist's family in this slum! As a result, you told me that you, the author, interrupted the possibility of the protagonist's development when the protagonist did not have extraordinary powers, started to cause trouble for the protagonist, kidnapped or killed the original sister, and prepared for an endless cycle of trouble? Author, do you understand that the appeal of your book probably comes from the calm and stable process of using golden fingers? ! The protagonist is now at the level of a little superman, several times the value of an ordinary human being. You arrange a dangerous plot. I think it is very right and very attractive! But did you, the author, have no plan at all to develop this kind of plot when it's time to develop? You didn't give the protagonist real strength. Since you dare to break the peaceful environment, do you think the golden finger you gave the protagonist is strong? What kind of golden finger goes with what kind of plot! ! Your golden finger is developmental and research-based, and it belongs to the type that cannot give the protagonist strength in the early stage. What you should arrange is a stable plot! Instead of following the plot mode of Long Aotian, it is urgent to upgrade and fight monsters. Fight and kill all the way, run away, change places, pretend to be awesome and slap people in the face, and then continue to repeat this pattern! Author, you really persuaded me in these 32 chapters. Everything was fine before. I thought you had your own thoughts, but it turned out that you really didn't think about it! Still the same old thing!

There are books written by a group of gods in the new book section of the Gods' starting point. I no longer know what the world is. Are you here to write novels? Are you here to make money?

The world view is similar to that of Lord of Mysteries, but the plot is real. There is no deep psychological activity. It feels like every step of the plot is just a matter of course. I don't know how to describe this feeling. There are no various foreshadowings, twists and tense unknown plots. As a time traveler, I can integrate into the world in one chapter. Even the closest friends didn't feel out of place. The tavern owner kept saying that he was missing his father's best friend and he didn't even know that the protagonist's shop was about to go bankrupt. The arrest of his sister was also the biggest failure without any plot foreshadowing. There was also the antibiotic research team. With just an aphrodisiac, they could completely trust an unknown herbal medicine dealer.

This book is good, why is there no one here?