Supernatural Game: My Superpower Refreshes with Every Check-In!

At first glance, it looks like existing works: Ember of the Deep and Lord of Mysteries.

How should I put it? To me, this seems to be a tasteless meal. It's a pity to abandon it. Some parts of his writing are not very clear, which makes people unable to see clearly. When he came out from the jealous ghost for the first time, why did he save the dog manager, and in front of four or five people? There is also a woman from another organization, and the country will not care about it. There are too many miscellaneous little details, and it is too uncomfortable to read. However, he also has advantages. If you don't read carefully, the writing is enjoyable, just like swallowing the jujube. As for this book, the details are not handled very well.

Have you ever been a ghost? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted 🙂

Hello, hello, can you see me?

The sauce is here, the author is here to cheer you up, feed him fried dumplings, fried soybean noodles, warm noodles with scallion oil, fried dumplings, and egg custard, yah yah!

Generally, I didn't finish reading the first 10 chapters.

It's relatively average. It's five chapters in and I can't read it anymore. Let's talk about the problems. The protagonist has no personality charm and is too rigid. The ghost-killing part is not fun enough. It's not fun where it should be fun. There's a lot of jabbering about things that shouldn't be said. Well, overall it's interesting. I think I'm a newbie. If I stick to it, I'll definitely have a big breakthrough.

The appearance of a middle-aged person is above average.

Have you polished it with AI? Why do you feel that some parts are not very smooth to read, such as the description of the end of the beginning and the beginning of the end? It's so strange.